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Gostei do tema dark porque sei que isso fará o MC mais maduro e a série não será tão infantil além de que o mundo tem muito potencial para crescimento depois de que Mason lembrar de sua vida passada e minha admiração pela mágica e por máquinas em uma 'FF' de um Cartoon que está entre os meus favoritos me deixa muito feliz e empolgado pelos capítulos que virão, só espero que não seja descartada.
Nice gravity falls novel, finally not some 5 year old making things happen just for the sake of making the character op and I like hoe the Mc seems smart and your describing appearances like Mabel and his shirts
This story has great potential. The characters are written well and the grammee is fantastic. The issue is that the author has restarted this fic 2 (3? I might have missed a restart) times now. They can't seem to decide if it is good enough or not and because of that I feel that this story will eventually be dropped. I would love to see this fic flourish, I just feel that, due to the authors constant rewriting, it will never get the chance.
Love gravity falls and i love this take on it if you are a fan of the series you would like this i love dipper's character in this and the magic and stuff i just hope this story wouldn't get dropped
Man i had Very high hopes to be let down so hard and i kinda wish thwy would’ve trues to continue it but i gUess not [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I really like this fanfic so far and I haven't found many gravity fall fanfics that I liked so this is really new to me. sure there are spelling mistakes but the story makes up for it 10 folds in my opinion, overall really enjoying the fic.
Who is the love interest ?? ? ??? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ??? ??? ?? ?? ???? ???? ?? ?? ?? ? ???? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ???? ?
Honestly, it’s not a terrible Gravity Falls (fanfic), however there was a lot of mistakes and confusing things that didn’t make sense. The start was pretty good, but soon after that it started to get a bit bad.
Just straight up giving this 5 star cause it's a Gravity Falls fanfic and I have not seen many of them. I am quite curious about one thing, is there a Harem or not (I hope the author answers the question) and even if this is not a Harem I'll still give it a try cause this looks very promising (at least from the synopsis)
Story is amazing although it has its flaws its still a pretty good story pls don't drop as this is the only gravity fall Fanfic I've found .
Truth be told this is an amazing story, the beginning with its terrible grammar may be a turn off for some but after those are edited I believe this would get in the top 100 on webnovel
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Noice................................................... .....................................................................................
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es una buena historia además el tiempo de publicación a mejorado reciente mente al igual que la calidad de la escritura pero pienso que le falta un poco mas de desarrollo a los demás personajes
what is your original account? eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I love this adaptation of the show so much. please continue I love how you introduced magic into the story,.....................................................
Hey man i haven't read this but i already is good because of the other novel you wrote and can you continue it(jeff scp) and i just i wanna say there's not alot of novels(your original works) like this so good creativity.
dude update plz don't drop just from the summary it's gonna be good so update plz my dude ..................................................plz
good! .............................................................................................................................,...
love it 😊 and I like that it is not billdip 10101010101010100101010101010101010101010101001010101010101010101010101010101010101101010101010101011001010101010101011010101010101010101010101010
Loved the series itself and hope this will bring the same joy... if not a bit darker than the original. The author just needs to work on the grammar and spelling than I'll give it full stars
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Gostei do tema dark porque sei que isso fará o MC mais maduro e a série não será tão infantil além de que o mundo tem muito potencial para crescimento depois de que Mason lembrar de sua vida passada e minha admiração pela mágica e por máquinas em uma 'FF' de um Cartoon que está entre os meus favoritos me deixa muito feliz e empolgado pelos capítulos que virão, só espero que não seja descartada.
Nice gravity falls novel, finally not some 5 year old making things happen just for the sake of making the character op and I like hoe the Mc seems smart and your describing appearances like Mabel and his shirts
This story has great potential. The characters are written well and the grammee is fantastic. The issue is that the author has restarted this fic 2 (3? I might have missed a restart) times now. They can't seem to decide if it is good enough or not and because of that I feel that this story will eventually be dropped. I would love to see this fic flourish, I just feel that, due to the authors constant rewriting, it will never get the chance.
Love gravity falls and i love this take on it if you are a fan of the series you would like this i love dipper's character in this and the magic and stuff i just hope this story wouldn't get dropped
Man i had Very high hopes to be let down so hard and i kinda wish thwy would’ve trues to continue it but i gUess not [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I really like this fanfic so far and I haven't found many gravity fall fanfics that I liked so this is really new to me. sure there are spelling mistakes but the story makes up for it 10 folds in my opinion, overall really enjoying the fic.
Who is the love interest ?? ? ??? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ??? ??? ?? ?? ???? ???? ?? ?? ?? ? ???? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ???? ?
Honestly, it’s not a terrible Gravity Falls (fanfic), however there was a lot of mistakes and confusing things that didn’t make sense. The start was pretty good, but soon after that it started to get a bit bad.
Just straight up giving this 5 star cause it's a Gravity Falls fanfic and I have not seen many of them. I am quite curious about one thing, is there a Harem or not (I hope the author answers the question) and even if this is not a Harem I'll still give it a try cause this looks very promising (at least from the synopsis)
Story is amazing although it has its flaws its still a pretty good story pls don't drop as this is the only gravity fall Fanfic I've found .
Truth be told this is an amazing story, the beginning with its terrible grammar may be a turn off for some but after those are edited I believe this would get in the top 100 on webnovel
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Noice................................................... .....................................................................................
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
es una buena historia además el tiempo de publicación a mejorado reciente mente al igual que la calidad de la escritura pero pienso que le falta un poco mas de desarrollo a los demás personajes
what is your original account? eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I love this adaptation of the show so much. please continue I love how you introduced magic into the story,.....................................................
Hey man i haven't read this but i already is good because of the other novel you wrote and can you continue it(jeff scp) and i just i wanna say there's not alot of novels(your original works) like this so good creativity.
dude update plz don't drop just from the summary it's gonna be good so update plz my dude ..................................................plz
good! .............................................................................................................................,...
love it 😊 and I like that it is not billdip 10101010101010100101010101010101010101010101001010101010101010101010101010101010101101010101010101011001010101010101011010101010101010101010101010
Loved the series itself and hope this will bring the same joy... if not a bit darker than the original. The author just needs to work on the grammar and spelling than I'll give it full stars
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