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yeah. the moment i read "turning a random flower into a pen" i immediately gave up. gold experience's power is to give life, not to make life into inanimate objects.
writing quality is good story development is stolen from throne of time mc doesnt have a peraonality update happen once every full moon its a fanfic so the world background has to be good
Its good it just that the story is almost the same as another MHA fanfic novel soooo ye should change tha…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
honestly this is an amazing book and so much time goes into writing it but author-San please focus more on our protagonists' power progression instead of only focusing on the story. sure you dont have to say exactlly which stand and where she gets it but it's also interesting that feeling of excitement whenever she gets a new power instead of "yeah since like 2 months have passed I already have another power" and gloss over her growth.
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Alright my honest review: Writing Quality: 4 stars while it is good the story seems forced which takes away a star, good other than that. Stability of Updates: 3 stars the updates are sporadic and can't tell when the next update will be out. Story Development: 2 stars the story feels forced and I know all stories are like that but it feels as if the story is being pulled towards an outcome and it ruins the surprise of a novel. Character Design: 1 star although it seems good, the mc isn't cold hearted or aloof not even happy, it seems as if her entire life is for this exact purpose, like every novel, but this one seems more out in the open more of a direct version that people even barely able to read the plot is able to find the direction, although it started out good as soon as we see all might it's like a bell rung and we knew where it's going. Now onto the story, the story although good in concept is watered down by the authors love for jojo, I personally love jojo but having her fight scenes have ora ora and all is not helping when people who have watched jojo see this. I like the choices of stands but the way she uses it and how you portray it is cringy, the motorcycle, barrage noises are what are the most useless. The other parts are great but it feels forced. World Background: 4 stars what can I say it's MHA.
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I like it, it's great. This story features comedy and a fantastic main character with the thought process of your run of the mill Otaku girl. I recommend this to people who love to ride the comedy train. P.S. if you care about grammar a lot, you may want to uhh move away.
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Its really good, but sadely this ruined throne of time for me because i kept relating everything to this and couldn’t get immersed in the story.
yare yare dazeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I like your fanfic. From the moment I started reading it, I finished it in one go and could only complain that there aren't enough chapters released yet. I like how sheacts and the way you created the character of Mio. So as for the stars 1. Writing quality: Perhaps it's because I'm bad at english but everything wasread well and there weren't any problems understanding what was written so good job on this part. 2. Updating stability: As I said I've read everything in one go so I could only go with the app saying the author release 2 chapters per week so I can't give more info but (btw author, if you want to release more chapter I'm all for it! Haha) 3. Story development: I've hear people say it was similar to another novel, couldn't tell since I didn't read the other one. The novel is perfectly paced in my opinion, although there are some points I don't get by exemple what's up with the villains she meet up and why is she giving boood etc? Well, I guess we'll understand later. Personally, I like it so continue the great work :). 4. Character design: Well, it's a fanfic so the characters are already mostly there but I like the character of Mio you created (well, the appearence and power are from other animes) the way you develop the conversation is interesting to me. 5. World background: Well, it's a fanfic so there's not much to create here. So overall, thanks for the chapters and thanks for writing this great fanfic and I hope to see more soon :)
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Good storyk I ike it, and it seem that you finally create your actual fanfic not copying Throne of time. I hope you improve more on the future and not copying.
I just noticed that I already have four other reviews in this fanfic.. its weird. Most of the time you can only write one review. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
I really remender Throne of Time and Kurumi when I read and then I really like. I wonder what rhythm the story will take in the future, if it will follow the canon, if the characters will have significant chances... And if her will stay like observer and passive character...
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This ff is almost 90% the same as the ff "Throne of Time". The only difference is: 1.the opening story is different. 2.be the spirit of origin aka Mio Takamiya. Pretty much all the story in this ff is the almost copy of the hrone of time.
Just absolutely stoning in the way the story is crafted Keeping me Wanting more and not getting disappointed i wont more of this is really good
Even tho im not ***ist i dont like rading things with female leads but since i wanted this mix/crossover im gonna give it a try
The story is very good I really enjoyed readig it, I read throne of time it is kinda similar but I think that this one is better, not only because I am a jojo and boku no hero fan, but the story is really well writen and funny, and I hope that you dont stop writing, there are still a lot of things that I want to see, like part 6, 7 and 8 stands. I just hope that you update more frequently, one good thing that I think would help people keep up with the stands and habilities that she has is every 5 chapters write down what stands she has at the moment and possibly what they do. In the more advenced jojo manga (part 6 to 8) there are some crazy OP atands like tusk or d4c, they are OP but if you write about them you wold need to resarch a little, because there are some that are extremely confusing, I could do a small list of cool stands that she coud get in the future, but only if you want suggestions. The overall story is very good, interesting and funny, the character design and development are great, the author is doing a really good job at this story and I really hope that he doesnt randomly drops it. My grammar might be bad but english isnt my first language so even my keyboard is a little different and I cant put or find some basic english things.
This story follows the canon so I'm giving both world background and story development 4 stars. The MC's Character is nice and calm. Like a professional. Never g0t startled with many situations and has own goals. Keep on writing my idol.
lets hope after chapter 18 this story bit different from throne of time...even though i dont mind if this story same as throne of time but daily chapter😂
HD , I have a look at the moment and will not have a look at this time, and a bit of 3rd party in a year, the more the the same way that I have a
Just rating my Fanfic, nothing else. If you like it, rate it and add to your library. i hope you guys enjoy it, even if you dont. Im a fan of Jojo and mha.
I think the book is going in a good direction and hope its going to keep being good. Also hope you are going to use lesser known stands.
It's good, give it a try, but the formatting of the story is made for a long one, so expect more. The MC is likable, All might doesn't shout in every sentence and the real thing about just dropping into the world.
yeah. the moment i read "turning a random flower into a pen" i immediately gave up. gold experience's power is to give life, not to make life into inanimate objects.
writing quality is good story development is stolen from throne of time mc doesnt have a peraonality update happen once every full moon its a fanfic so the world background has to be good
Its good it just that the story is almost the same as another MHA fanfic novel soooo ye should change tha…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
honestly this is an amazing book and so much time goes into writing it but author-San please focus more on our protagonists' power progression instead of only focusing on the story. sure you dont have to say exactlly which stand and where she gets it but it's also interesting that feeling of excitement whenever she gets a new power instead of "yeah since like 2 months have passed I already have another power" and gloss over her growth.
Revelar Spoiler Alright my honest review: Writing Quality: 4 stars while it is good the story seems forced which takes away a star, good other than that. Stability of Updates: 3 stars the updates are sporadic and can't tell when the next update will be out. Story Development: 2 stars the story feels forced and I know all stories are like that but it feels as if the story is being pulled towards an outcome and it ruins the surprise of a novel. Character Design: 1 star although it seems good, the mc isn't cold hearted or aloof not even happy, it seems as if her entire life is for this exact purpose, like every novel, but this one seems more out in the open more of a direct version that people even barely able to read the plot is able to find the direction, although it started out good as soon as we see all might it's like a bell rung and we knew where it's going. Now onto the story, the story although good in concept is watered down by the authors love for jojo, I personally love jojo but having her fight scenes have ora ora and all is not helping when people who have watched jojo see this. I like the choices of stands but the way she uses it and how you portray it is cringy, the motorcycle, barrage noises are what are the most useless. The other parts are great but it feels forced. World Background: 4 stars what can I say it's MHA.
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I like it, it's great. This story features comedy and a fantastic main character with the thought process of your run of the mill Otaku girl. I recommend this to people who love to ride the comedy train. P.S. if you care about grammar a lot, you may want to uhh move away.
good that was all I was able to come with ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its really good, but sadely this ruined throne of time for me because i kept relating everything to this and couldn’t get immersed in the story.
yare yare dazeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I like your fanfic. From the moment I started reading it, I finished it in one go and could only complain that there aren't enough chapters released yet. I like how sheacts and the way you created the character of Mio. So as for the stars 1. Writing quality: Perhaps it's because I'm bad at english but everything wasread well and there weren't any problems understanding what was written so good job on this part. 2. Updating stability: As I said I've read everything in one go so I could only go with the app saying the author release 2 chapters per week so I can't give more info but (btw author, if you want to release more chapter I'm all for it! Haha) 3. Story development: I've hear people say it was similar to another novel, couldn't tell since I didn't read the other one. The novel is perfectly paced in my opinion, although there are some points I don't get by exemple what's up with the villains she meet up and why is she giving boood etc? Well, I guess we'll understand later. Personally, I like it so continue the great work :). 4. Character design: Well, it's a fanfic so the characters are already mostly there but I like the character of Mio you created (well, the appearence and power are from other animes) the way you develop the conversation is interesting to me. 5. World background: Well, it's a fanfic so there's not much to create here. So overall, thanks for the chapters and thanks for writing this great fanfic and I hope to see more soon :)
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Revelar Spoiler Good storyk I ike it, and it seem that you finally create your actual fanfic not copying Throne of time. I hope you improve more on the future and not copying.
I just noticed that I already have four other reviews in this fanfic.. its weird. Most of the time you can only write one review. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
I really remender Throne of Time and Kurumi when I read and then I really like. I wonder what rhythm the story will take in the future, if it will follow the canon, if the characters will have significant chances... And if her will stay like observer and passive character...
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This ff is almost 90% the same as the ff "Throne of Time". The only difference is: 1.the opening story is different. 2.be the spirit of origin aka Mio Takamiya. Pretty much all the story in this ff is the almost copy of the hrone of time.
Just absolutely stoning in the way the story is crafted Keeping me Wanting more and not getting disappointed i wont more of this is really good
Even tho im not ***ist i dont like rading things with female leads but since i wanted this mix/crossover im gonna give it a try
The story is very good I really enjoyed readig it, I read throne of time it is kinda similar but I think that this one is better, not only because I am a jojo and boku no hero fan, but the story is really well writen and funny, and I hope that you dont stop writing, there are still a lot of things that I want to see, like part 6, 7 and 8 stands. I just hope that you update more frequently, one good thing that I think would help people keep up with the stands and habilities that she has is every 5 chapters write down what stands she has at the moment and possibly what they do. In the more advenced jojo manga (part 6 to 8) there are some crazy OP atands like tusk or d4c, they are OP but if you write about them you wold need to resarch a little, because there are some that are extremely confusing, I could do a small list of cool stands that she coud get in the future, but only if you want suggestions. The overall story is very good, interesting and funny, the character design and development are great, the author is doing a really good job at this story and I really hope that he doesnt randomly drops it. My grammar might be bad but english isnt my first language so even my keyboard is a little different and I cant put or find some basic english things.
This story follows the canon so I'm giving both world background and story development 4 stars. The MC's Character is nice and calm. Like a professional. Never g0t startled with many situations and has own goals. Keep on writing my idol.
lets hope after chapter 18 this story bit different from throne of time...even though i dont mind if this story same as throne of time but daily chapter😂
HD , I have a look at the moment and will not have a look at this time, and a bit of 3rd party in a year, the more the the same way that I have a
Just rating my Fanfic, nothing else. If you like it, rate it and add to your library. i hope you guys enjoy it, even if you dont. Im a fan of Jojo and mha.
I think the book is going in a good direction and hope its going to keep being good. Also hope you are going to use lesser known stands.
It's good, give it a try, but the formatting of the story is made for a long one, so expect more. The MC is likable, All might doesn't shout in every sentence and the real thing about just dropping into the world.
Just finished reading, I found it pretty good, a shame it was dropped.