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2 1 2 2 2 Lol need seriously edit this story Mc he Mc she Lol need more edit more on this story How many people with the same name as a reference for me for the game and I will be there at the game and I will be there at the same time I agree with your assessment of the day and I will be there at the same time I don't have a car 🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗 be there at the same time I don't have a car 🚗🚗🚗 have a car 🚗🚗 have hard to died in timeline Naruto Shippuden the day 🙂 my phone number to reach me please 🙏 the day off to a position with a hold to get
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I couldn't get past the first few chapters because of the horrible writing capability. It need to go through gramarly or somthing similar because this had potential but the writing is bring it down enough to make it unreadable.
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Reading this hurts my brain if English isn't your first language please put it through Microsoft Word English UK grammar check before posting or find someone to proof check for you from the first 2 chapters the concepts seems good the writing is just bringing it down
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After reading 50 chapters, I realized that the main character himself is rubbish. At first it's good, but after chapters 25-30... The author just... Some OS characters, restoration of the Saiyans, and the hero himself is considered garbage. Dumps the plot. Spend 5,000 beans out of 10,000 (there are only 10,000 in the universe) in a month? OK. The main character after 5000 thousand senzu beans and the gravity chamber 1000 pl? OK. I apologize for google translate. But it will still be better than this Chinese work, translated through Google translate.
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2 1 2 2 2 Lol need seriously edit this story Mc he Mc she Lol need more edit more on this story How many people with the same name as a reference for me for the game and I will be there at the game and I will be there at the same time I agree with your assessment of the day and I will be there at the same time I don't have a car 🚗🚗🚗🚗🚗 be there at the same time I don't have a car 🚗🚗🚗 have a car 🚗🚗 have hard to died in timeline Naruto Shippuden the day 🙂 my phone number to reach me please 🙏 the day off to a position with a hold to get
😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈power over parfomans😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
I couldn't get past the first few chapters because of the horrible writing capability. It need to go through gramarly or somthing similar because this had potential but the writing is bring it down enough to make it unreadable.
Revelar Spoiler Reading this hurts my brain if English isn't your first language please put it through Microsoft Word English UK grammar check before posting or find someone to proof check for you from the first 2 chapters the concepts seems good the writing is just bringing it down
😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈(Wow I am so excited so let's started)😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
After reading 50 chapters, I realized that the main character himself is rubbish. At first it's good, but after chapters 25-30... The author just... Some OS characters, restoration of the Saiyans, and the hero himself is considered garbage. Dumps the plot. Spend 5,000 beans out of 10,000 (there are only 10,000 in the universe) in a month? OK. The main character after 5000 thousand senzu beans and the gravity chamber 1000 pl? OK. I apologize for google translate. But it will still be better than this Chinese work, translated through Google translate.