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PLEASE GIVE THIS STORY A GOOD REVIEW. I really want to continue this book and the minimum chapter will be chapter 60. Please give me a good review and comment
Прекрасная работа жду продолжения я под впечетлением надеюсь автор вспомнит о работе и допишет еë хотелось бы арты увидеть но ладно посоветуйте похожие работы такого формата
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Hey Wild_Thrill, is everything okay? You haven't been updating your stories for over a year now, and I can tell you made them excellent and exciting for us to enjoy the character's journey. But I want to know if you are dealing with personal issues and problems that needs to be solved before going back to your novels? If it is, then do the best you can and take breaks if needed. See you next time. 🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿
Honestly this is really bad and full of plot holes and bad writing. However if there’s nothing better might as well give it a try. From all the trash I’ve read this is the best of the trash
Tw you have to go through a whole new set up to be a better player and a good person and you can do that for a lot more money and yuuu can do it for a lot less and a lot more than that but you have to be a good person to be a good player and you have to be a good person for yourself and your family and your family and your family so you can be
so author it been a few months when should we expect a new chapter and will he be going to DC verse and marvel verse
well author i liked it very much so can't say anything but i wish or hope u work on it it's really good 👍 like i started today and finished it today. Anyway hope u work on it and don't forget and be well author.
Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash.
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Author please don't drop this story. I really like the story and I keep reading chapter 37 and 38 because it was fun reading how beerus got smack by the MC and I really want to read MC in the Tournament Of Power smacking everyone and get the beautiful angels as his wifes
no fam no. princess Vegeta that's just blasphemous. the princ of all saiyans a girl! nah man I'll still give you 5 stars though coz I haven't read the story and I won't
I'm really surprised to see this story still going after a long time, thought it stopped uploading for a while................................. Will it keep going?
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Lol princess vegeta? isn't that going a little bit too far? I mean unless you completely change his apppearanc- let me stop I'm being a hypocrite because mystory has Naruko in it. This is extremely original, I had only seen one other fanfic in history with a female vegeta story, that was a neglected fanfic crossover with Naruto. I haven't read it yet but your story just by the table of contents alone. makes me interested, People as you know this is a gender gender story Of VEGETA, you don't like it .just warning you now this is not for You. Can't wait to see where this story leads.
PLEASE GIVE THIS STORY A GOOD REVIEW. I really want to continue this book and the minimum chapter will be chapter 60. Please give me a good review and comment
Прекрасная работа жду продолжения я под впечетлением надеюсь автор вспомнит о работе и допишет еë хотелось бы арты увидеть но ладно посоветуйте похожие работы такого формата
Revelar Spoiler Hey Wild_Thrill, is everything okay? You haven't been updating your stories for over a year now, and I can tell you made them excellent and exciting for us to enjoy the character's journey. But I want to know if you are dealing with personal issues and problems that needs to be solved before going back to your novels? If it is, then do the best you can and take breaks if needed. See you next time. 🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿🖐🏿
Honestly this is really bad and full of plot holes and bad writing. However if there’s nothing better might as well give it a try. From all the trash I’ve read this is the best of the trash
Tw you have to go through a whole new set up to be a better player and a good person and you can do that for a lot more money and yuuu can do it for a lot less and a lot more than that but you have to be a good person to be a good player and you have to be a good person for yourself and your family and your family and your family so you can be
so author it been a few months when should we expect a new chapter and will he be going to DC verse and marvel verse
well author i liked it very much so can't say anything but i wish or hope u work on it it's really good 👍 like i started today and finished it today. Anyway hope u work on it and don't forget and be well author.
Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash. Chapter 19 nerf trash.
Revelar Spoiler استمر 😍😍😍😍♥انا منتظر التحديثات [img=update] $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$£$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$__$_____$$$$$__$$$$$$$_$_$__$___$____$___$____$___$__$____$_____$__$$_$___$___________$__$__________$_$_$$$$___﷼
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Author please don't drop this story. I really like the story and I keep reading chapter 37 and 38 because it was fun reading how beerus got smack by the MC and I really want to read MC in the Tournament Of Power smacking everyone and get the beautiful angels as his wifes
no fam no. princess Vegeta that's just blasphemous. the princ of all saiyans a girl! nah man I'll still give you 5 stars though coz I haven't read the story and I won't
I'm really surprised to see this story still going after a long time, thought it stopped uploading for a while................................. Will it keep going?
Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update
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This story is an excellent wish-fullment, and adventurous experience for most DragonBall series fans and fans of other anime. I wondered if there's any updates for this story to continue.
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it is a very good novel eeeeeeeeeeeeeddeedeeeeeeeeeeeeeedeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Lol princess vegeta? isn't that going a little bit too far? I mean unless you completely change his apppearanc- let me stop I'm being a hypocrite because mystory has Naruko in it. This is extremely original, I had only seen one other fanfic in history with a female vegeta story, that was a neglected fanfic crossover with Naruto. I haven't read it yet but your story just by the table of contents alone. makes me interested, People as you know this is a gender gender story Of VEGETA, you don't like it .just warning you now this is not for You. Can't wait to see where this story leads.