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It's a really good fanfic! At first I was skeptical because I always found a fanfic about mushoku tensei redundant, since it is a novel mainly about the development of rudeus and there is no great journey to save the world (at least until the last volume that I readed). To my surprise, the author really managed to write something interesting and pleasant to read, this is certainly a good fanfic. The first chapters have some problems but the fanfic remains interesting and the author improves with time. Despite all this, I can't help mentioning that making an original novel would probably be more advantageous than a mushoku tensei fanfic. Just as I imagined it would be after chapter 1, this fanfic is an almost completely original story, the author is really using the world of mushoku tensei and its characters very well, but the story itself is original. Changing the names of the characters, locations and a few events, this would easily become an original novel. So instead of a mushoku tensei fanfic it is reasonable to say that this is an original novel in the world of mushoku tensei. This fanfic is still incredible, but I can't stop thinking that it can be a waste for the author to write this story as a fanfic instead of an original novel.
I don't understand, there is only one chapter and the comments give me the feeling that there is more than that. Is there something I'm doing wrong? Is there another place to read it?
…………………………………………….. Good Story can’t wait for update ……………………………..………………………………….,,………………………………………………………………………………………….. …………………………..…………………………………………………………..………………………………….,….,
The premise of the story is great, but as with the mc seems to lack meaningful connections and relationships with the other characters (with the exception of vivian), I cant help but look forward to the moment Arthur starts interacting with the rest of the cast. All in all though, the story is great, and im looking forward to the next chapter
...........................................................................................................................................................................I will throw you 14 power stones this week
I'm giving you 5 stars because I have faith on this rewrite, you can do it author...........................................................
Tip to improve. Don't make the hero a pervert like Rhodeus and try to give him one or two girls at the most because the more girls the more rubbish.😁 And she's on a good track so far🥰
cant believe the author left with nothing no cheat no nothing except for his memories the previous one was better I'm disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruin
Didn't you already did a rewrite for this? Why didn't you just start a new one instead? And before you did that rewrite you still only update once a week so when are you actually going to finish a mushoku novel. If you don't think you can finish one just move on. I honestly think you should just move on to another anime or novel to work with on a fanfic. On all of your mushoku novels, you basically stop at the same spot each time before a rewrite or drop it. Do you know how frustrating it can be waiting months for you to speed up the plot to the teleportation arc just for you to drop/rewrite it each time. This happens like three to four times now. Tell me author, what is your goal for this novel? Are you actually going to complete it and update more or just leave your readers hanging all the time. Tell me so that I either keep this novel in my library or just drop it.
the story is great and the other books too. the only problem is the author have commitment issues when the story already has traction/readers that really enjoys the story only to be rewritten again and again like a sick joke to torture us readers
This is good ....................... ........... ......,......................................... '.............. ~.......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,., ., ,.,., ,., .,., ,
Is this dropped ?? ???????? ???????????? ????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????? ????????? ????????????????????? ?? ??????? ?? ??????? ?? ?????
I just want to say, why do a Fan-Fic description always says "First time writing a Fan-Fic" on every fan-fic that I read?? Also, the chapter is pretty good on my opinion.
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I hate these novels since the second act. Why change the ability to use high-level magic in Haki, can use magic to do body reinforcement and things like Armament Haki, and a magician can use magic to feel and discover the existence of something static and live like the observed Haki. And if he wanted to see a future, there is the eye that the Queen of Demons gave in the story Asli, which is not only the ability to see seconds in the future, but minutes and an hour according to mana consumption. And I have magic, the ability to create pressure on people, the stronger your magic is like Haki the Conqueror. Now I do not understand why he took Haki and acquires a curse. Otherwise, his magic could be higher than the average
All I can say is that I'm reviewless to write any review here on review section. One person is enough to be reincarnated then you add another one. Wew. You could've make where MC take over the body of Rudeus soul after reincarnating rather than being together with this man. Or you couldn't just simply abandon him cause Rudeus-fanatic? Cringe is all over the place. I suggest you can rewrite or make a whole new setting since the anime was already shown.
The cringe shot up when knghts of the round table was added (the king arthur story is so over done), the power level became muddy, theres somehow devil fruit in the world now, the system is thrown in the trash and forgotten. Vol. 1 was good Vol. 2 was downward spiral to 🤢🤮.
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I want chapter 5-42 back man. Had me reading chapter 43 all confused since i had just finished chapter 4
So far i see drones that like it and people that hate it with a passion. So I’ll be honest wifh my rating. A bit over 20 chapters in and thus far the rating are 3 2 2 1 2. So many unnecessary scenes. I know what i said i just couldn’t stop it from coming out.
Well I wouldn't recommend it if you value your time for these reasons. 1) the author constantly resorts to bad jokes, and mentions of anime 2) this is just a lotuko no tensei with an OC the guy doesn't change the story at all .... it's not even much worse if we read from the MC's point of view 3) the MC's personality is ...... he is simply an idiot, this does not have a character development, they are depressing that ludeus is a better character, the guy is not realistic at all ... it is even preferable to read about a Generic Kirito that of this type 4) The relationship you have with rudeus seems sick to me, the guy is a fat otaku from 30 to 40 years old, you with your MC should make a clear difference between them but you made him more of an idiot ... he even pretends to have rudeus to That they defend him has the expense that he has desires op. 5) wishes are useless for shit because he's just a normal guy and he's not a big deal anymore ... it should already be one of the strongest shits in that anime .. but you just want him to be paired with rudeus who is a normal guy and doesn't even have anything like wishes or greater understanding than your character supposedly has
Im confused i just started reading can someone tell me if this has ntr in it i just want To know i tried a few chapters then i read some comments lol
it started interesting, but as I read further it's getting more and more bizzare, getting mixed with arthurian legends with the mc name arthur is probably the idea from the start, but still strange lol
this rewritten version is a little better than before, still rather interesting, can't wait to read what happens next, especially what will happen when the mana calamity strikes
It is one of the worst things that I have read, seriously .... the author has a terrible sense of humor, the MC has several personalities, the author says that he is mature ... but he behaves worse than a child ... constant references to anime, the relationship with ludeus ... and his behavior, I will not delve into any of this, I just want you to know that this is bad. the author wants his oc to develop together with the original mc and that is why he makes him stupid, apart from the fact that ludeus is mentioned more than anyone in this story .. it's bad, awful
Read chapter 30 you understand my very negative review which makes want to drop this drop or maybe i will. WTF was the author thinking when when he wrote the first half of that chapter
it's a great fanfic, is is interesting to read and have actual character development in them. even if the mc overpower there still a struggle and conflict in the story. the no bullshit op abilty that stack like some complicated RPG like super saiyan blood line, sharingan, etc that make most of fic is a sandbox game.the mc has a real characteristics not just a dumbass 2 dimensional card box with harem, and there a solid development of relationship this fiction. ability are still out of know where though, like learning anime based magic and technique like rokushiki without any step as if they suddenly can do it.
It's a really good fanfic! At first I was skeptical because I always found a fanfic about mushoku tensei redundant, since it is a novel mainly about the development of rudeus and there is no great journey to save the world (at least until the last volume that I readed). To my surprise, the author really managed to write something interesting and pleasant to read, this is certainly a good fanfic. The first chapters have some problems but the fanfic remains interesting and the author improves with time. Despite all this, I can't help mentioning that making an original novel would probably be more advantageous than a mushoku tensei fanfic. Just as I imagined it would be after chapter 1, this fanfic is an almost completely original story, the author is really using the world of mushoku tensei and its characters very well, but the story itself is original. Changing the names of the characters, locations and a few events, this would easily become an original novel. So instead of a mushoku tensei fanfic it is reasonable to say that this is an original novel in the world of mushoku tensei. This fanfic is still incredible, but I can't stop thinking that it can be a waste for the author to write this story as a fanfic instead of an original novel.
I don't understand, there is only one chapter and the comments give me the feeling that there is more than that. Is there something I'm doing wrong? Is there another place to read it?
…………………………………………….. Good Story can’t wait for update ……………………………..………………………………….,,………………………………………………………………………………………….. …………………………..…………………………………………………………..………………………………….,….,
The premise of the story is great, but as with the mc seems to lack meaningful connections and relationships with the other characters (with the exception of vivian), I cant help but look forward to the moment Arthur starts interacting with the rest of the cast. All in all though, the story is great, and im looking forward to the next chapter
...........................................................................................................................................................................I will throw you 14 power stones this week
I'm giving you 5 stars because I have faith on this rewrite, you can do it author...........................................................
Tip to improve. Don't make the hero a pervert like Rhodeus and try to give him one or two girls at the most because the more girls the more rubbish.😁 And she's on a good track so far🥰
cant believe the author left with nothing no cheat no nothing except for his memories the previous one was better I'm disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruin
Didn't you already did a rewrite for this? Why didn't you just start a new one instead? And before you did that rewrite you still only update once a week so when are you actually going to finish a mushoku novel. If you don't think you can finish one just move on. I honestly think you should just move on to another anime or novel to work with on a fanfic. On all of your mushoku novels, you basically stop at the same spot each time before a rewrite or drop it. Do you know how frustrating it can be waiting months for you to speed up the plot to the teleportation arc just for you to drop/rewrite it each time. This happens like three to four times now. Tell me author, what is your goal for this novel? Are you actually going to complete it and update more or just leave your readers hanging all the time. Tell me so that I either keep this novel in my library or just drop it.
the story is great and the other books too. the only problem is the author have commitment issues when the story already has traction/readers that really enjoys the story only to be rewritten again and again like a sick joke to torture us readers
This is good ....................... ........... ......,......................................... '.............. ~.......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,., ., ,.,., ,., .,., ,
Is this dropped ?? ???????? ???????????? ????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????? ????????? ????????????????????? ?? ??????? ?? ??????? ?? ?????
I just want to say, why do a Fan-Fic description always says "First time writing a Fan-Fic" on every fan-fic that I read?? Also, the chapter is pretty good on my opinion.
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I hate these novels since the second act. Why change the ability to use high-level magic in Haki, can use magic to do body reinforcement and things like Armament Haki, and a magician can use magic to feel and discover the existence of something static and live like the observed Haki. And if he wanted to see a future, there is the eye that the Queen of Demons gave in the story Asli, which is not only the ability to see seconds in the future, but minutes and an hour according to mana consumption. And I have magic, the ability to create pressure on people, the stronger your magic is like Haki the Conqueror. Now I do not understand why he took Haki and acquires a curse. Otherwise, his magic could be higher than the average
All I can say is that I'm reviewless to write any review here on review section. One person is enough to be reincarnated then you add another one. Wew. You could've make where MC take over the body of Rudeus soul after reincarnating rather than being together with this man. Or you couldn't just simply abandon him cause Rudeus-fanatic? Cringe is all over the place. I suggest you can rewrite or make a whole new setting since the anime was already shown.
The cringe shot up when knghts of the round table was added (the king arthur story is so over done), the power level became muddy, theres somehow devil fruit in the world now, the system is thrown in the trash and forgotten. Vol. 1 was good Vol. 2 was downward spiral to 🤢🤮.
Revelar Spoiler I want chapter 5-42 back man. Had me reading chapter 43 all confused since i had just finished chapter 4
So far i see drones that like it and people that hate it with a passion. So I’ll be honest wifh my rating. A bit over 20 chapters in and thus far the rating are 3 2 2 1 2. So many unnecessary scenes. I know what i said i just couldn’t stop it from coming out.
Well I wouldn't recommend it if you value your time for these reasons. 1) the author constantly resorts to bad jokes, and mentions of anime 2) this is just a lotuko no tensei with an OC the guy doesn't change the story at all .... it's not even much worse if we read from the MC's point of view 3) the MC's personality is ...... he is simply an idiot, this does not have a character development, they are depressing that ludeus is a better character, the guy is not realistic at all ... it is even preferable to read about a Generic Kirito that of this type 4) The relationship you have with rudeus seems sick to me, the guy is a fat otaku from 30 to 40 years old, you with your MC should make a clear difference between them but you made him more of an idiot ... he even pretends to have rudeus to That they defend him has the expense that he has desires op. 5) wishes are useless for shit because he's just a normal guy and he's not a big deal anymore ... it should already be one of the strongest shits in that anime .. but you just want him to be paired with rudeus who is a normal guy and doesn't even have anything like wishes or greater understanding than your character supposedly has
Im confused i just started reading can someone tell me if this has ntr in it i just want To know i tried a few chapters then i read some comments lol
it started interesting, but as I read further it's getting more and more bizzare, getting mixed with arthurian legends with the mc name arthur is probably the idea from the start, but still strange lol
this rewritten version is a little better than before, still rather interesting, can't wait to read what happens next, especially what will happen when the mana calamity strikes
It is one of the worst things that I have read, seriously .... the author has a terrible sense of humor, the MC has several personalities, the author says that he is mature ... but he behaves worse than a child ... constant references to anime, the relationship with ludeus ... and his behavior, I will not delve into any of this, I just want you to know that this is bad. the author wants his oc to develop together with the original mc and that is why he makes him stupid, apart from the fact that ludeus is mentioned more than anyone in this story .. it's bad, awful
Read chapter 30 you understand my very negative review which makes want to drop this drop or maybe i will. WTF was the author thinking when when he wrote the first half of that chapter
it's a great fanfic, is is interesting to read and have actual character development in them. even if the mc overpower there still a struggle and conflict in the story. the no bullshit op abilty that stack like some complicated RPG like super saiyan blood line, sharingan, etc that make most of fic is a sandbox game.the mc has a real characteristics not just a dumbass 2 dimensional card box with harem, and there a solid development of relationship this fiction. ability are still out of know where though, like learning anime based magic and technique like rokushiki without any step as if they suddenly can do it.