Ascension of Lightning God (Dropped)

LV 3

JackbladesFF7

I really hope people see this before they read it the MC is an absolute beta he pretty much is kissing the feet of the main girl the whole time while she acts high and mighty

LV 3

Umhmm

I think this will be good. I am a simple person. I saw that it had no harem. So here I am, giving my worthless review. ♪┌|∵|┘♪ └|∵|┐ \(๑╹◡╹๑)ﾉ♬ I hope you don't drop this...

LV 13

Traps_Are_Gay

This had me with the whole "god" mc thing. Some random angel throws a system, he picks it up and gives it to lost and found (it's shape of a book), Angel comes and decides to kill him to take it, proceeds to be a Haughty bitch. wouldn't be so bad if the mc wasn't a spinless simpy bitch. Also someone mentioned he becomes an asshole. in the future… Don't read this if: -You hate beta mc -You hate mc with no backbone -System cliché (I guess) -Haughty/Arrogant/Annoying/Princess Complex B*tchy female characters -Stinky Attitudes

LV 4

Embra

As shameless as I am, I'm gonna write myself a review and gives myself 5 star. 😎 I will try to keep the updates constant. If you enjoy reading it, please make an effort to write a review. Thanks. From, Author.

LV 5

Reign_Bloodark

Welp. Cant go through this any more. If you are looking for entertainment, dont bother there are a lot of choices this is just frustating. The "heroine" has the cliche chinese novel arrogant and spoilt clan elder granddaughter which for some reason chinese novels really like. Not even tsundere level of annoying, it goes even further beyond. this is the type of people you gotta remove from your life if you know someone like this irl. MC's personality fits more for mini antagonist that only serves as stepping stone for bigger badder enemies. This guy is literally like the follower of the arrogant young master that if appear early enough, can get some chances to bully the true MC a bit, only to be beaten up soon and call upon the young master, that gets beaten up while this guy cheers for the young master by the side and get scolded after the young master got beaten up. The comes senior, then clan elder, then clan patriarch. Hayzz,

The story is really good and detailed, but some parts of the story are dragged out longer than it needs to. For example, like the prolog, the prolog is about 10 chapters each having 1000+ words, some of the prolog characters don't even matter and just an filler that you don't really need to know so you kinda have to gut your way through it. Either than that its good, just some advices though, if you don't have the enough patience then this story is not for you.

LV 4

DentatolucioXIV

I like the sino**is and it doesnt have harem so please accept my 5 stars I will read it now jdkx f f f f f x x f g ggldodofkcnckdikdkfkfjdjd

LV 12

ProcrastinatorGuy

No harem is rare for me thanks dude...

LV 4

Yui_the_Kitsune

Welcome to the Great Simp System, the alternate title of this fanfiction. This fanfiction focuses on the main character simping on Esdeath, if you like that, then you will enjoy this, thank you for listening.

LV 4

Prefect_human

when is main character going start the journey of reincarnation 🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐

LV 5

ahmed_waleed_1200

Thanks for your hard work so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. Great work and can't wait new chapters of your's waiting for him to become more powerful and visit other worlds in future

LV 12

VastoHeaven

Didn't read it yet, but it held the promise of a good adventures it seems, I wanted to give a review for free 👍, plus it's Non-Harem, a rarity nowaday 😂 So, good luck with that author ✌

LV 4

3RR0R_404

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LV 4

3RR0R_404

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LV 5

K_M24

Good

LV 4

devil007

very nice 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 I like to read this book very much 😁 good work 👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

LV 4

Ahlios

I like it quite a lot, the only problems I have with it is the lack of updates and the fact that the disciple will be female. FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER

LV 12

TemplarUhhh

reincarnation at chapter 37 i assume angel shows up and reads manga and watches anime for 36 chapters because i read 10 chapters /////////////

LV 1

mr_one_two_three

please update the story........................................................................................................................I love this novel

LV 3

Salmon_El_Solomon

It is a great fan fiction, it has good character development and also great story development since the development is slow but constant and no power ups are taken with the nakama power or some similar shit, just like the love development of the character was slow and I don't take women out like Pokémons