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It is one of those fanfics where the author confuses him/her so that’s never fun but the worst thing that made me change my review from a 3/5 was that the system literally says to not give it an identity as a major thing and the MC thinks that it sounds ominous so he just gives it an identity..... so we have an extremly dumb mc which always ruins fanfics
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Personally I had an enjoyable experience reading this novel and it's one of the best MCU related fanfiction on this site. The fights are very vivid and there's not much grammatical errors. Just wishing for the update rate to be faster. Thanks author for this gem.
Not a review just telling the author that you put your book in the wrong section it needs to be in fanfiction section k Need that character limit......................................................
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I absolutely love the story and the beautiful mesh of worlds melded together. I positively hope that you continue this lovely book and will not drop it. I give you the highest award I can give🎖🏅.🤣🤣🤣🥰
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otima historia ,personagens divertido muito intereçantes,autor continue assim bom trabalho ,pesso que poste mais ,ganhou um novo leitor e fan
the story is great , at first i was confused when we were reading of what time the things were happening , but it got pretty easy , fighting scenes are very good , and very exceptionaly described all in all a very great novel to read
Great story!! Truly enjoyed it so far (ch.9) though i do need to point out that this should really be in the fanfiction section of webnovel. outside of that please continue beCause it is amazing
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It is one of those fanfics where the author confuses him/her so that’s never fun but the worst thing that made me change my review from a 3/5 was that the system literally says to not give it an identity as a major thing and the MC thinks that it sounds ominous so he just gives it an identity..... so we have an extremly dumb mc which always ruins fanfics
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Personally I had an enjoyable experience reading this novel and it's one of the best MCU related fanfiction on this site. The fights are very vivid and there's not much grammatical errors. Just wishing for the update rate to be faster. Thanks author for this gem.
Not a review just telling the author that you put your book in the wrong section it needs to be in fanfiction section k Need that character limit......................................................
Very good story 100/100 recommended👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I absolutely love the story and the beautiful mesh of worlds melded together. I positively hope that you continue this lovely book and will not drop it. I give you the highest award I can give🎖🏅.🤣🤣🤣🥰
Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!! Nice and i want moreee!!
otima historia ,personagens divertido muito intereçantes,autor continue assim bom trabalho ,pesso que poste mais ,ganhou um novo leitor e fan
the story is great , at first i was confused when we were reading of what time the things were happening , but it got pretty easy , fighting scenes are very good , and very exceptionaly described all in all a very great novel to read
Great story!! Truly enjoyed it so far (ch.9) though i do need to point out that this should really be in the fanfiction section of webnovel. outside of that please continue beCause it is amazing
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!