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Escreva uma avaliaçãoIts hard to read with some many weird things going on. Too many japanese women as samueai, leaders and so in. wich makes no sense. It feels like youre reading a harem anime with a lot of cringe ….
Everything about this is below average. It’s your everyday harem where the girls are spared or forgiven and they fall in love because the MC spouted some bull. The story itself is everywhere no rhythm no good story telling it’s like he wrote it down and was like bam all good. Once again the story is full of plot holes and missing information let alone HEAVY plot armor. I would not recommend
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sometimes it is very confusing hard to follow and sometimes downright in comprehensible ------‐---------------------------‐—----——-------------
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I'M LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE!!! Everything was done really really well. Just a suggestion, but is it possible if you post a page with all the characters profile? It took me some time to remember who was who and mixed up Mitsuha and Mitsuhide. So, if possible, please post a character profile page so it can be easy on readers who tend to forget easily. thanks!
Great book, truly. Keep it up. The concept is interesting and the character development can be seen. All in all a great read. Hardly any grammatical mistakes as well.
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Honestly, this is not quite good not quite bad. It is just meh. Some character actions are borderline idiotic and the protagonist's plot armor is very healthy. This just feels like your regular run of the mill isekai pure boy with some medical knowledge and a big boatload of naivety.
keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Mc beta. Mc is pathetic Asian. Move this story to >fanfic [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Its hard to read with some many weird things going on. Too many japanese women as samueai, leaders and so in. wich makes no sense. It feels like youre reading a harem anime with a lot of cringe ….
Everything about this is below average. It’s your everyday harem where the girls are spared or forgiven and they fall in love because the MC spouted some bull. The story itself is everywhere no rhythm no good story telling it’s like he wrote it down and was like bam all good. Once again the story is full of plot holes and missing information let alone HEAVY plot armor. I would not recommend
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sometimes it is very confusing hard to follow and sometimes downright in comprehensible ------‐---------------------------‐—----——-------------
more people need to see this, seriously! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'M LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE!!! Everything was done really really well. Just a suggestion, but is it possible if you post a page with all the characters profile? It took me some time to remember who was who and mixed up Mitsuha and Mitsuhide. So, if possible, please post a character profile page so it can be easy on readers who tend to forget easily. thanks!
Great book, truly. Keep it up. The concept is interesting and the character development can be seen. All in all a great read. Hardly any grammatical mistakes as well.
absolutly love i, please continue your good work[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Honestly, this is not quite good not quite bad. It is just meh. Some character actions are borderline idiotic and the protagonist's plot armor is very healthy. This just feels like your regular run of the mill isekai pure boy with some medical knowledge and a big boatload of naivety.
keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......keep it up .......
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Mc beta. Mc is pathetic Asian. Move this story to >fanfic [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]