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You have written a excelent sotry , cant wait for more A few other overlord stories have done things sLightly similar to your own but one thing which i havent find i think is using the lore of the story to your advantage Why dont you write your characters lore and make yourself OP or give yourself more advantages when the story Starts
I start this novel not expecting much but look where it got me... Now I can’t even bare to wait for the slow update. It get very addictive. Author story telling skills are good.
mid overall, writing quality isn’t great updates are just nonexistent the entire plot is a great idea but nothing too creative character design is horrible the mc lacks any type of personality and seems to be some satirical edgy type (boring and cringe) world background is obviously peak (overlord)
What happend here? Where did you go? There has been no updates for 6 monthes+ now. I need to know what happend. This was my favorite overlord fanfic and I would love to read more. And if that isn't possible, I'd atleast like to know why if you don't mind telling me.
Tomara que poste mais capítulos essa história é muito boa e espero que ele consiga ir em Nazárick e se torne rei no lugar de momonga assim pegando todas as NPCs femininas
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Nothing to do with overlord except the Charakters and the Game Name. 90% not even issekaid into the magic world but just gaming at home in a gamepot
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In the beginning, the story was very good and funny. The main character was portrayed as smart and wealthy, playing pay-to-win but still giving the best effort to grinding daily, able to defeat anyone, though not excessively overpowering yet still the strongest. But everything changed upon entering the New World. The MC became very weak, foolish, and was turned into a Simp. I am very disappointed to see the main character being portrayed as weak. In my opinion, most readers want to witness impressive actions and how the protagonist dominates the world with their unique style. Typically, they expect reassurance that the character will overcome all challenges solo, without relying on NPCs. I believe that with the MC's personality and his smart brain, NPCs are merely for entertainment, as the protagonist alone suffices for world domination.
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Don’t get me wrong, slow burn stories are perfectly fine. However, despite this story being relativly well written, the pacing is painfully slow. Nearly 90% of the existing chapters is just building up to the actual start of the story and even then it’s not clear if he’s in the same world as Momonga. I don’t mind a bit of world building before a story starts, but this is just too much. A lot of this could have been consolidated into a dozen or so chapters skipping over the generic stuff. Still, it’s a decent story and I enjoyed most of it.
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great story, but drop if your looking for a story about overlord. This is a prequel to the story, chapter 71 is the first chapter in the new world. Everything before is just the Mc playing waiting for the plot to start. on 9 chapter of overlord plot.
I really liked this ff I hope we get more chapters soon Is sucks that we stopped getting updates especially when we finally got to the good part
the fan fic was good but its taking too long just get where the manga is that's the whole overlord in another world but you are just writing about his gaming days
Truthful speaking this is one of the best and unique overlord fanfic I've ever read, please author ,do us the readers the honor of continuing your great work. Please and Thank you
It is very good I enjoyed it a lot, it has great character development and great world building but the only problem I really have with it is the updates because for me it feels very slow. Than again I don't really have good patients because of how bored I get quickly.
Finished with the current chapter,,, please write more and keep up the good work.THANK YOU
this is the best overlord fanfic I've ever read it has good world background, has a smart mc and character development, unlike other fanfic mc who isn't even smart and has negative iq and doesn't have a character development, although the update time is a bit long, but it's still a great fanfic so keep up the good work.
Everything except Updates is 5⭐. It's been 3 YEARS and we're not outside Yggdrasil and it's only about 60 chaps
The Overlord fanfic is one of the best I've seen in a while. the writing quality is good with an alright main character. The only thing that is missing is the pictures of the characters he promised!!!
I got hooked in the story but your update is slow,it kills my passion for it I hope for faster update without messing the quality .●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□
Not sure of this fanfic is plagerised or another fanfic plagerised this one. Everything is the same except the story is about different mc with different race/abilities... Also a minus for not being tts friendly.
Un fanfic del anime Overlord es una idea magnífica debido a su capacidad para expandir y profundizar en el mundo creado por Maruyama en el juego de Yggdrasil y en ese futuro distopico. Al permitir a los fanáticos explorar escenarios alternativos, personajes inexplorados y posibilidades no presentadas en la serie original, el fanfic se convierte en una vía para enriquecer la narrativa y el desarrollo del universo de Overlord. Al otorgar una nueva perspectiva a los eventos y relaciones, en particular con este fanfics pude estimular la imaginación en este magnífico mundo y enriquecer su experiencia en el mundo ficticio que tanto aprecian. Además, el fanfic puede ofrecer un espacio para profundizar en los aspectos de la trama y los personajes, brindando una apreciación más profunda del complejo y fascinante mundo de Overlord.
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This is a great fanfic. One of the best i have ever seen. It is also my favorite overlord fic. I really like this. The only reason why all the catagories arn't at 5* is becouse I still don't know what the mc looks like and the wait for a new chapter after one is realesed is PAINFULL. There is only one chapter per month and the one for this month (as of the time im writing this) is late. I really love this fic, I just wish that I could get to know how the mc looks and be able to get chapters faster without patreon (i don't have leftover money to spend on a patreon).
The story's good but you go on way to many long explanations. They take up most of the chapter. u also explain things in a round about way and its very annoying. other than that everything's good.
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You have written a excelent sotry , cant wait for more A few other overlord stories have done things sLightly similar to your own but one thing which i havent find i think is using the lore of the story to your advantage Why dont you write your characters lore and make yourself OP or give yourself more advantages when the story Starts
I start this novel not expecting much but look where it got me... Now I can’t even bare to wait for the slow update. It get very addictive. Author story telling skills are good.
mid overall, writing quality isn’t great updates are just nonexistent the entire plot is a great idea but nothing too creative character design is horrible the mc lacks any type of personality and seems to be some satirical edgy type (boring and cringe) world background is obviously peak (overlord)
What happend here? Where did you go? There has been no updates for 6 monthes+ now. I need to know what happend. This was my favorite overlord fanfic and I would love to read more. And if that isn't possible, I'd atleast like to know why if you don't mind telling me.
Tomara que poste mais capítulos essa história é muito boa e espero que ele consiga ir em Nazárick e se torne rei no lugar de momonga assim pegando todas as NPCs femininas
[img=Good night][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=In a daze][img=Good night][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Nothing to do with overlord except the Charakters and the Game Name. 90% not even issekaid into the magic world but just gaming at home in a gamepot
Good!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
In the beginning, the story was very good and funny. The main character was portrayed as smart and wealthy, playing pay-to-win but still giving the best effort to grinding daily, able to defeat anyone, though not excessively overpowering yet still the strongest. But everything changed upon entering the New World. The MC became very weak, foolish, and was turned into a Simp. I am very disappointed to see the main character being portrayed as weak. In my opinion, most readers want to witness impressive actions and how the protagonist dominates the world with their unique style. Typically, they expect reassurance that the character will overcome all challenges solo, without relying on NPCs. I believe that with the MC's personality and his smart brain, NPCs are merely for entertainment, as the protagonist alone suffices for world domination.
Revelar Spoiler Don’t get me wrong, slow burn stories are perfectly fine. However, despite this story being relativly well written, the pacing is painfully slow. Nearly 90% of the existing chapters is just building up to the actual start of the story and even then it’s not clear if he’s in the same world as Momonga. I don’t mind a bit of world building before a story starts, but this is just too much. A lot of this could have been consolidated into a dozen or so chapters skipping over the generic stuff. Still, it’s a decent story and I enjoyed most of it.
Revelar Spoiler great story, but drop if your looking for a story about overlord. This is a prequel to the story, chapter 71 is the first chapter in the new world. Everything before is just the Mc playing waiting for the plot to start. on 9 chapter of overlord plot.
I really liked this ff I hope we get more chapters soon Is sucks that we stopped getting updates especially when we finally got to the good part
the fan fic was good but its taking too long just get where the manga is that's the whole overlord in another world but you are just writing about his gaming days
Truthful speaking this is one of the best and unique overlord fanfic I've ever read, please author ,do us the readers the honor of continuing your great work. Please and Thank you
It is very good I enjoyed it a lot, it has great character development and great world building but the only problem I really have with it is the updates because for me it feels very slow. Than again I don't really have good patients because of how bored I get quickly.
Finished with the current chapter,,, please write more and keep up the good work.THANK YOU
this is the best overlord fanfic I've ever read it has good world background, has a smart mc and character development, unlike other fanfic mc who isn't even smart and has negative iq and doesn't have a character development, although the update time is a bit long, but it's still a great fanfic so keep up the good work.
Everything except Updates is 5⭐. It's been 3 YEARS and we're not outside Yggdrasil and it's only about 60 chaps
The Overlord fanfic is one of the best I've seen in a while. the writing quality is good with an alright main character. The only thing that is missing is the pictures of the characters he promised!!!
I got hooked in the story but your update is slow,it kills my passion for it I hope for faster update without messing the quality .●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□
Not sure of this fanfic is plagerised or another fanfic plagerised this one. Everything is the same except the story is about different mc with different race/abilities... Also a minus for not being tts friendly.
Un fanfic del anime Overlord es una idea magnífica debido a su capacidad para expandir y profundizar en el mundo creado por Maruyama en el juego de Yggdrasil y en ese futuro distopico. Al permitir a los fanáticos explorar escenarios alternativos, personajes inexplorados y posibilidades no presentadas en la serie original, el fanfic se convierte en una vía para enriquecer la narrativa y el desarrollo del universo de Overlord. Al otorgar una nueva perspectiva a los eventos y relaciones, en particular con este fanfics pude estimular la imaginación en este magnífico mundo y enriquecer su experiencia en el mundo ficticio que tanto aprecian. Además, el fanfic puede ofrecer un espacio para profundizar en los aspectos de la trama y los personajes, brindando una apreciación más profunda del complejo y fascinante mundo de Overlord.
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This is a great fanfic. One of the best i have ever seen. It is also my favorite overlord fic. I really like this. The only reason why all the catagories arn't at 5* is becouse I still don't know what the mc looks like and the wait for a new chapter after one is realesed is PAINFULL. There is only one chapter per month and the one for this month (as of the time im writing this) is late. I really love this fic, I just wish that I could get to know how the mc looks and be able to get chapters faster without patreon (i don't have leftover money to spend on a patreon).
The story's good but you go on way to many long explanations. They take up most of the chapter. u also explain things in a round about way and its very annoying. other than that everything's good.
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