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The FL seems naive but i believe she has something strong in her, something harbored secretly for revenge... Great job Please, improve on the spacings... the book is great
Wow this is great! 🌺 As soon as I read the syno**is, I added it to my library 🏵 About the story, it is very intriguing, making me curious about what will happen next 💐 No negative comments, just a few punctuation mark errors but doesn't affect my reading 🍁 All in all, this is a must read! 🍉 Keep it up! 🌳
i totally reccomed this book. I wasn't expecting some of the things that happened. I'm not done with it yet, but so far it's awesome. I won't give anyone spoilers. so just go and read the book on your own. 😌
I love this book,the story development and time lapse is so real. The family drama especially is fantastic,it's everyday happening I love the actions too,Guns and bombs, organizations... Someone spoil for me coz I have read so far but not getting who is the Male lead,like the real one 🤔🤔🤔
The story flows rhythmically and makes you swim alongside. The writer surely knows how to keep the readers immersed in the story. Beautifully written and well-cafted characters!
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Reincarnation, Revenge , Romance All 3 R's can be found in this brilliant piece of work. The story is indeed interesting, as it gives the readers a vibe of old school stories but keeps it's modern essence throughout the read. I definitely recommend Reader to read this, and Yes, you are writing well. Suggestions: Kindly re-visit and re-edit your initial Chapters. Give spaces after commas. Write less bulky paragraphs. And when you do these keep a smile on your face😇
I found the premise of this story to be really interesting and engaging. The author did a good job conveying the protagonist's troubles and I love those types of stories. My real gripe was the punctuations. Remember to add a space after a comma and also put periods or the appropriate punctuations at the end of dialogues but other than that ,it's a solid read. I definitely recommend putting this in your library.
I just recently bumped and read this story I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve get a full five stars! If you are looking for story with a romantic and interesting vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now.
I've read it and it took some time. It's a different writing style that other readers can get used to. From my experience, it isn't a story you'll get tired reading on.
Revelar Spoiler
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Revelar Spoiler
Chapter 1 was long, but the road was worth it! I LOVE IT! This novel is a rare jewel amongst the others. I find the family dramatic, but it can always happen in reality; especially in wester culture or even asians. In addition, the style of writing is great and the flow of the story is nice. Lastly, I am happy to see such elements included in the story elaborately written by the author. I do want to take note about some sentences that needs editting. Not all, but some. In that way, it can help readers have a smooth sail for their adventures during the plot/climax. All in all, I love your story and I hope for the best for your novel!
love this story, the writer did a good job in this book, i cant wait for more, im addicted to this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I loved it so much. The synopsis is the best one I have ever seen. The presentation of the chapters is quite well. I'm not an upper mediate in English but reading this was too easy for me. The popularity (values about readers and collection) also proves it's quality. Congrulations.
The story line is good, giving us the snowwhite like vibes. Nicely written Good development And very captivating for a new reader Worth reading
This is a wonderful novel with an interesting plot! Each chapter leaves you wanting to read more! Similar to romance novels of the same category, it has your classic villains - stepmother and rival. However, this time, the MC is transmigrated in the early chapters compared to the beginning. I have yet to read many chapters, but for the few I did read, I support the author’s journey! They have areas to improve, like grammar, but that is something fixable the longer they write. Please give this novel a chance because it is a very interesting novel with action in each chapter!
I really like this book. I mean, come on! who wouldn't... sorry i couldn't read all the chapters, but this is my analysis from the first 5 chapters. I world recommend this book to any of the fantasy-genre-loving-people. Your writing quality is awesome. I just love this book. Kudos to you for coming up with such an awesome book!
I enjoy the story, it gets better as you read it. The plot of the story is nice! I enjoy how the characters are. The story has very little grammar errors so thats good and they update a lot!
Definitely a lot different than what I was expecting, but a really good story nonetheless. I'm alias a sucker for a twist on a well known story, and this definitely fit the bill
wow,this is beautiful , honestly,I love this book, the grammar was good ,the plot is beautiful and it's a really interesting book ,I highly recommend
When i first Saw the sypnosis i thought this might be something Totally different but it ended up being somthing i enjoyed. though the characters background were a little fast paced i still beleive the story was enjoyable. keep it up! :)
The plot is good..just noticed some certains errors (The spaces, commas, and capitalization.) The character's dialogue seems a little straightforward and fast paced. Some aren't really able to tell why it happened like that. Need a better characters background and a descriptive for the scene for the layout. The synopsis and the theme sounds good. I'll be looking forward for your progress.
Revelar Spoiler
You people should appreciate this story! It is a wonderful and meaningful story. I love the plot but sadly, I have got a lot to catch up on. I recommend this to others and I'm proud to be the first and only one to write a review on this ♥
Really liked this book because of the unique plot! such a versatile mind the author has! Recommended to all strong female lead lovers! BEST OF LUCK!
The FL seems naive but i believe she has something strong in her, something harbored secretly for revenge... Great job Please, improve on the spacings... the book is great
Wow this is great! 🌺 As soon as I read the syno**is, I added it to my library 🏵 About the story, it is very intriguing, making me curious about what will happen next 💐 No negative comments, just a few punctuation mark errors but doesn't affect my reading 🍁 All in all, this is a must read! 🍉 Keep it up! 🌳
i totally reccomed this book. I wasn't expecting some of the things that happened. I'm not done with it yet, but so far it's awesome. I won't give anyone spoilers. so just go and read the book on your own. 😌
I love this book,the story development and time lapse is so real. The family drama especially is fantastic,it's everyday happening I love the actions too,Guns and bombs, organizations... Someone spoil for me coz I have read so far but not getting who is the Male lead,like the real one 🤔🤔🤔
The story flows rhythmically and makes you swim alongside. The writer surely knows how to keep the readers immersed in the story. Beautifully written and well-cafted characters!
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Reincarnation, Revenge , Romance All 3 R's can be found in this brilliant piece of work. The story is indeed interesting, as it gives the readers a vibe of old school stories but keeps it's modern essence throughout the read. I definitely recommend Reader to read this, and Yes, you are writing well. Suggestions: Kindly re-visit and re-edit your initial Chapters. Give spaces after commas. Write less bulky paragraphs. And when you do these keep a smile on your face😇
I found the premise of this story to be really interesting and engaging. The author did a good job conveying the protagonist's troubles and I love those types of stories. My real gripe was the punctuations. Remember to add a space after a comma and also put periods or the appropriate punctuations at the end of dialogues but other than that ,it's a solid read. I definitely recommend putting this in your library.
I just recently bumped and read this story I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve get a full five stars! If you are looking for story with a romantic and interesting vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now.
I've read it and it took some time. It's a different writing style that other readers can get used to. From my experience, it isn't a story you'll get tired reading on.
Revelar Spoiler Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Revelar Spoiler Chapter 1 was long, but the road was worth it! I LOVE IT! This novel is a rare jewel amongst the others. I find the family dramatic, but it can always happen in reality; especially in wester culture or even asians. In addition, the style of writing is great and the flow of the story is nice. Lastly, I am happy to see such elements included in the story elaborately written by the author. I do want to take note about some sentences that needs editting. Not all, but some. In that way, it can help readers have a smooth sail for their adventures during the plot/climax. All in all, I love your story and I hope for the best for your novel!
love this story, the writer did a good job in this book, i cant wait for more, im addicted to this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I loved it so much. The synopsis is the best one I have ever seen. The presentation of the chapters is quite well. I'm not an upper mediate in English but reading this was too easy for me. The popularity (values about readers and collection) also proves it's quality. Congrulations.
The story line is good, giving us the snowwhite like vibes. Nicely written Good development And very captivating for a new reader Worth reading
This is a wonderful novel with an interesting plot! Each chapter leaves you wanting to read more! Similar to romance novels of the same category, it has your classic villains - stepmother and rival. However, this time, the MC is transmigrated in the early chapters compared to the beginning. I have yet to read many chapters, but for the few I did read, I support the author’s journey! They have areas to improve, like grammar, but that is something fixable the longer they write. Please give this novel a chance because it is a very interesting novel with action in each chapter!
I really like this book. I mean, come on! who wouldn't... sorry i couldn't read all the chapters, but this is my analysis from the first 5 chapters. I world recommend this book to any of the fantasy-genre-loving-people. Your writing quality is awesome. I just love this book. Kudos to you for coming up with such an awesome book!
I enjoy the story, it gets better as you read it. The plot of the story is nice! I enjoy how the characters are. The story has very little grammar errors so thats good and they update a lot!
Definitely a lot different than what I was expecting, but a really good story nonetheless. I'm alias a sucker for a twist on a well known story, and this definitely fit the bill
wow,this is beautiful , honestly,I love this book, the grammar was good ,the plot is beautiful and it's a really interesting book ,I highly recommend
When i first Saw the sypnosis i thought this might be something Totally different but it ended up being somthing i enjoyed. though the characters background were a little fast paced i still beleive the story was enjoyable. keep it up! :)
The plot is good..just noticed some certains errors (The spaces, commas, and capitalization.) The character's dialogue seems a little straightforward and fast paced. Some aren't really able to tell why it happened like that. Need a better characters background and a descriptive for the scene for the layout. The synopsis and the theme sounds good. I'll be looking forward for your progress.
Revelar Spoiler You people should appreciate this story! It is a wonderful and meaningful story. I love the plot but sadly, I have got a lot to catch up on. I recommend this to others and I'm proud to be the first and only one to write a review on this ♥
Really liked this book because of the unique plot! such a versatile mind the author has! Recommended to all strong female lead lovers! BEST OF LUCK!