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don't drop it. Please come back to it when you're not as busy. This is amazing. I love how it's going so far and would love to see how it ends.
Não gostei e não recomendo. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Hell ya, it is quite a refreshing take on Avatar and his changed character.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Revelar Spoiler
It is good overall but has some problems. The mc is way to intense. When Sokka tries to leave and settle down, the mc shames him. The way the mc acts overall is a little cultish to be honest. Katara having feelings is justified since they've been on a journey for four years but you should have developed it better since the only romantic gestures for each other are these weird 'head pats'. I also dislike how you made Yue attracted to him almost instantly. The plot is also quite rushed and there have been no updates recently. 3/5
********************Good work!************************ ******************************************************** ****************And i need more!********************** ********************************************************
will this expand into the legend of Korra ......,............................................................................................
This is the better fanfic of avatar that I read in my life..................................................................................
Por favor lança + capítulos estão demorando demais para enviar novos Capítulos com com essa demora para lançar capítulos em algum momento eles vão acabar desistindo
yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv
Revelar Spoiler
I wasnt disappointed with your pokemon series so i think this story will work well...........?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?#?#
The beginning of this fiction is pretty good overall and makes you feel like the protagonist is someone rational and capable of thinking about his actions, his relationship with the other characters progressed in a good pace until he arrived at the water tribe, from this point on he becomes a spoiled brat, threatening even the tribe chief, even though he came there to make allies, his actions simply doesn't make sense and he has not a drop of gratefulness towards the fact that they trained him. But the worst for me is how a girl falls in love with him to the point of goin to his bed after fucking 5 or 6 lines of dialogue. Cliche wuxia instant love, if you don't care about all of this, then perhaps you'll like this story, otherwise, this a critical flaw in terms of story telling that needs to be fixed as soon as possible. I won't say anything else, this a fanfic, probably written by a kid or someone who isn't putting a lot of effort into his writing so I don't expect him/her to care about this review or change anything, good luck author, I hope you can improve.
A good avatar story with good potential.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Is sokka gendebent Tom boy in this fic? . . . . . . . . . . . .. ...........................................................................................
munto bom você esta fazendo um bom trabalho continue assim sua história tem um grande potencial, eu recomendo postar captolos um pouco mais longos, não munto apenas mas algumas palavras
Best Avatar fanfic I ever read. Now I would have wanted an harem (a medium one) but he seemed pretty mature and wise (most of the times) so I don't think he will get attached (attracted) to these girls as they are now.
Revelar Spoiler
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌
Revelar Spoiler
I don't want to be sick I hate romance novels they are cringy also I dont like katara I was hesitant at first to star to read it but because your other novel was god I gave it a try but it going towars a romance with katara who I dont like so gonna drop it
JUST HOPE THAT SENSEI WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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So far I liking it. Will Katara be love interest or it will be multiple girls?..................................................................................................................
For example, that baboon was the famous Thrice Reckless Mad Saber! It was a surprise discovering that Senior Thrice Reckless was an enlightened baboon. After going back, it could boast about its deeds to his fellow baboons.
Do us a favor rewatch the show about half of your tangent involving katara is wrong about half the time she is ice bending or mist bending she doesn't blood bend because she thinks its evil
For example, that baboon was the famous Thrice Reckless Mad Saber! It was a surprise discovering that Senior Thrice Reckless was an enlightened baboon. After going back, it could boast about its deeds to his fellow baboons.
Thank you all for the Incredible support on this fic. I am really happy to see you all enjoy and I hope you all have a great time. If you find any doubts or complains please tell me as I want to I,prove myself as much as possible.
So far so good. I'll be honest so far im happy with this aangs mentality of 'peace was never an option'. Keep up the great work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Nice story ...................................................... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¿¿¿¿¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¡¿¿¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¡¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¡¡¡《||\¥₩~》₩÷÷<{% ¥¥₩|~`~¥£₩₩€€£₩`¤♡☆☆][¤`~% ¥£€×=<{}[]][}{<×++€£¥₩₩%~~`¤¤♡☆☆¿¡》》《|__
didn't last one chapter........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
don't drop it. Please come back to it when you're not as busy. This is amazing. I love how it's going so far and would love to see how it ends.
Não gostei e não recomendo. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
exp..........................................................................................................................................
Hell ya, it is quite a refreshing take on Avatar and his changed character.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Revelar Spoiler It is good overall but has some problems. The mc is way to intense. When Sokka tries to leave and settle down, the mc shames him. The way the mc acts overall is a little cultish to be honest. Katara having feelings is justified since they've been on a journey for four years but you should have developed it better since the only romantic gestures for each other are these weird 'head pats'. I also dislike how you made Yue attracted to him almost instantly. The plot is also quite rushed and there have been no updates recently. 3/5
********************Good work!************************ ******************************************************** ****************And i need more!********************** ********************************************************
will this expand into the legend of Korra ......,............................................................................................
This is the better fanfic of avatar that I read in my life..................................................................................
Por favor lança + capítulos estão demorando demais para enviar novos Capítulos com com essa demora para lançar capítulos em algum momento eles vão acabar desistindo
yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv
Revelar Spoiler I wasnt disappointed with your pokemon series so i think this story will work well...........?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?#?#
The beginning of this fiction is pretty good overall and makes you feel like the protagonist is someone rational and capable of thinking about his actions, his relationship with the other characters progressed in a good pace until he arrived at the water tribe, from this point on he becomes a spoiled brat, threatening even the tribe chief, even though he came there to make allies, his actions simply doesn't make sense and he has not a drop of gratefulness towards the fact that they trained him. But the worst for me is how a girl falls in love with him to the point of goin to his bed after fucking 5 or 6 lines of dialogue. Cliche wuxia instant love, if you don't care about all of this, then perhaps you'll like this story, otherwise, this a critical flaw in terms of story telling that needs to be fixed as soon as possible. I won't say anything else, this a fanfic, probably written by a kid or someone who isn't putting a lot of effort into his writing so I don't expect him/her to care about this review or change anything, good luck author, I hope you can improve.
A good avatar story with good potential.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Is sokka gendebent Tom boy in this fic? . . . . . . . . . . . .. ...........................................................................................
munto bom você esta fazendo um bom trabalho continue assim sua história tem um grande potencial, eu recomendo postar captolos um pouco mais longos, não munto apenas mas algumas palavras
Best Avatar fanfic I ever read. Now I would have wanted an harem (a medium one) but he seemed pretty mature and wise (most of the times) so I don't think he will get attached (attracted) to these girls as they are now.
Revelar Spoiler Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌
Revelar Spoiler I don't want to be sick I hate romance novels they are cringy also I dont like katara I was hesitant at first to star to read it but because your other novel was god I gave it a try but it going towars a romance with katara who I dont like so gonna drop it
JUST HOPE THAT SENSEI WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
So far I liking it. Will Katara be love interest or it will be multiple girls?..................................................................................................................
For example, that baboon was the famous Thrice Reckless Mad Saber! It was a surprise discovering that Senior Thrice Reckless was an enlightened baboon. After going back, it could boast about its deeds to his fellow baboons.
Do us a favor rewatch the show about half of your tangent involving katara is wrong about half the time she is ice bending or mist bending she doesn't blood bend because she thinks its evil
For example, that baboon was the famous Thrice Reckless Mad Saber! It was a surprise discovering that Senior Thrice Reckless was an enlightened baboon. After going back, it could boast about its deeds to his fellow baboons.
Thank you all for the Incredible support on this fic. I am really happy to see you all enjoy and I hope you all have a great time. If you find any doubts or complains please tell me as I want to I,prove myself as much as possible.
So far so good. I'll be honest so far im happy with this aangs mentality of 'peace was never an option'. Keep up the great work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Nice story ...................................................... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¿¿¿¿¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¡¿¿¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¡¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿¡¡¡《||\¥₩~》₩÷÷<{% ¥¥₩|~`~¥£₩₩€€£₩`¤♡☆☆][¤`~% ¥£€×=<{}[]][}{<×++€£¥₩₩%~~`¤¤♡☆☆¿¡》》《|__
didn't last one chapter........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................