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The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story. I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters. As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent. I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library. All the best,Author!
I liked this book a lot. The concept is good and for a few days I was wanting to read a book like this. There was no grammatical errors and the story line was good. I am gonna read this book more and even recommend it to others. Hats 👒 off to u author.
A good story that has quite a depth to it. With what's currently happening, this is something many can relate to. Good writing style, clear. The author knows how to describe situations. A little warning, first coupl of chapters are extra long, but don't drop it because the story is great. Kudos to the author. Keep it up!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! Also, please study the art of spacing. It will improve your storytelling a lot! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
It’s perfect theme that anyone can relate to especially with the current events that’s happening. The description of the scenes are clear and it has a good plot. Just take into account the words that will be too hard for some to understand. Still, good start author 👏🏻
An amazing novel. It is really interesting. But I advise you to use easier words rather than some advanced words if you want all kinds of readers to try out your book. To be honest, if I was not that well versed in English I might drop your novel of the hat in the first paragraph. I don't know if you did research about traumas or you experienced it but I can totally feel the characters' emotions through your words. Hope you continue writing more and updating. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I don't have any complaints with this book. Your writing style is really good, you have a way with words, we get descriptions as well as dialogues, there are no grammatical errors as such. A good read. Recommend it for all!
I am really impressed. You took current pandemic as a backdrop and made awesome plot around it. The concept is worth appreciating. The pace of the story is perfect so is the writing. Perfect description of the environment setup and less to none grammatical mistakes. I am looking forward for new chapters and will continue with the rest till then. Thanks! :)
Overall, an interesting premise. I am sure that with the current situation, there will probably be more stories placed in this timeframe. The quality is pretty good overall, but there were a couple of parts where present and past tense were confusing as well as some dialogue that could be smoothed out. But that can all be fixed with an edit. The MC is pretty well developed, and props to the author for such long chapters. Keep writing!
The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story. I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters. As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent. I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library. All the best,Author!
I liked this book a lot. The concept is good and for a few days I was wanting to read a book like this. There was no grammatical errors and the story line was good. I am gonna read this book more and even recommend it to others. Hats 👒 off to u author.
A good story that has quite a depth to it. With what's currently happening, this is something many can relate to. Good writing style, clear. The author knows how to describe situations. A little warning, first coupl of chapters are extra long, but don't drop it because the story is great. Kudos to the author. Keep it up!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! Also, please study the art of spacing. It will improve your storytelling a lot! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
It’s perfect theme that anyone can relate to especially with the current events that’s happening. The description of the scenes are clear and it has a good plot. Just take into account the words that will be too hard for some to understand. Still, good start author 👏🏻
An amazing novel. It is really interesting. But I advise you to use easier words rather than some advanced words if you want all kinds of readers to try out your book. To be honest, if I was not that well versed in English I might drop your novel of the hat in the first paragraph. I don't know if you did research about traumas or you experienced it but I can totally feel the characters' emotions through your words. Hope you continue writing more and updating. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I don't have any complaints with this book. Your writing style is really good, you have a way with words, we get descriptions as well as dialogues, there are no grammatical errors as such. A good read. Recommend it for all!
I am really impressed. You took current pandemic as a backdrop and made awesome plot around it. The concept is worth appreciating. The pace of the story is perfect so is the writing. Perfect description of the environment setup and less to none grammatical mistakes. I am looking forward for new chapters and will continue with the rest till then. Thanks! :)
Overall, an interesting premise. I am sure that with the current situation, there will probably be more stories placed in this timeframe. The quality is pretty good overall, but there were a couple of parts where present and past tense were confusing as well as some dialogue that could be smoothed out. But that can all be fixed with an edit. The MC is pretty well developed, and props to the author for such long chapters. Keep writing!