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-------------------------------------------------------- For the exp i write that For my Author sama i post that For my soul i gie that a 5/5 For you who read that accept this review.
Oops! I slipped on a banana peel and accidentally gave myself 5 stars!!! How can I recover from such embarrassment? ;-; Oh, I Know! Stone me to death - that's right, stone me.
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Ini fanfic yang bagus dan sangat menarik.. saya suka alur cerita dan pengembangan karakternya.. Saya harap ceritanya akan semakin menarik dan cepat updated ya author
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a wish fulfilment fic that is extremely frustrating to read. first when mc need something he will gain it using the gacha, second he have many skil but don't ever try to use them to gain money for his poor family and third and worst of all author started giving harem to other guy, I dont care of he give pc character for these other guy but he give amazing waifus to simple side characters
okay honest review here. i won't tell anyone to not read such fanfic its there choice but i will warn you, your brain cell will rot. and there is no unique concept here nor a great idea author wants to express. just wish fulfilment of si mp who has to bend the world to fullfill his fantasy instead of trying to achieve something on his own. so your choice. if i offend someone, soory ,but consider what i wrote carefully.
It's my first time reading a fan-fic because I got bored on Japanese light novels and webnovels, and what would I say but, this is is so good. I'm on chapter 60+ and the story so far is so wholesome. I would like to see(read) the quintuplets soon as well as Marika!! I hope the mc would give Marika a senzu bean so that she could enjoy her childhood!! Every story needs a comic relief and Marika is the most suitable for that role!!! I also want to see(read) Futaba from Bunny Girl Senpai!
first thing I do when I find a novel, is to read the WORST comment describing the novel. so far there's none.... soooooo let's give it a try. 😊
I definitely have to save a lot of chapters, at least 120ch? Idk...to read freely and enjoy it....I love slice of life fanfics...pxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxq
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This is the best Slice of life fanfic I've ever read! please don't drop it like me and continue writing this master piece❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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from what i see it not super op while mc is op which is what i like and do u think u can add komi san ? PLS i like her eye whenever they show them her big eye IT SO FREAKING CUTE omg
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Nice story i like how the characters in the story interact and developed also i like how the story progress and i like that the story and pacing is not rushed when i read the first chapter i immediately become fond and interesting in the story because of good comedy(ehemm harem ehemm) of course so I'm totally recommend it i hope the chapter will approach the numbers to 1000-2000 ko like the Sis-con dimensional group chat (ehemmm totally my favorite fanfic of all ehemm shamelessly promoting others work eheem)
Really like this story so far ! just too bad that I read everything in one day and I have to wait for new chapters xD -.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-
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the story is good and I quite enjoy it. I don't mind if the side character is having a harem, but who? I'm just curious. teehee🤭 and the only problem is that the updates... I hope Author-san can atleast update 1 chapter a week to have a stability in updates. and if you can 3 chapters, do it!😉 so I hope you can spare atleast 30mins or when you have free time to write.🥺
It’s one of the best fanfics i have read Please dont drop ittt 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Its a relaxing fanfic though I wish the author would show us more interaction of the MC with his family.. By the way the romance is also balanced not too much and not too little.. Overall it's fun to read and Thanks for the chapter 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟😆 I hope you don't drop this and keep updating it even if you just update weekly..
It is not a real Novel. But, it is a Fanfiction. I only started this reading because I wanted to read "A Silent Voice", "I want to eat your Pancreas" Fanfictions. I like these anime, but want to read fanfictions with good endings. And, I realized that these anime doesn't have many fanfictions. I thing compare to other fanfiction this is much better. Although I haven't read much chapters. At least I can tell this Novel will give some of my favorite anime a good ending. At least in this Fanfiction, MC doesn't go after girls for his pleasure. Here, MC helps these girls. And, also this is Slice of Life fanfic, which is why I'm loving it. I'm supporting this Fanfiction.....
This is pretty good so far, I hope you don't drop this . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
-------------------------------------------------------- For the exp i write that For my Author sama i post that For my soul i gie that a 5/5 For you who read that accept this review.
Oops! I slipped on a banana peel and accidentally gave myself 5 stars!!! How can I recover from such embarrassment? ;-; Oh, I Know! Stone me to death - that's right, stone me.
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Ini fanfic yang bagus dan sangat menarik.. saya suka alur cerita dan pengembangan karakternya.. Saya harap ceritanya akan semakin menarik dan cepat updated ya author
What happened to author_____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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a wish fulfilment fic that is extremely frustrating to read. first when mc need something he will gain it using the gacha, second he have many skil but don't ever try to use them to gain money for his poor family and third and worst of all author started giving harem to other guy, I dont care of he give pc character for these other guy but he give amazing waifus to simple side characters
okay honest review here. i won't tell anyone to not read such fanfic its there choice but i will warn you, your brain cell will rot. and there is no unique concept here nor a great idea author wants to express. just wish fulfilment of si mp who has to bend the world to fullfill his fantasy instead of trying to achieve something on his own. so your choice. if i offend someone, soory ,but consider what i wrote carefully.
It's my first time reading a fan-fic because I got bored on Japanese light novels and webnovels, and what would I say but, this is is so good. I'm on chapter 60+ and the story so far is so wholesome. I would like to see(read) the quintuplets soon as well as Marika!! I hope the mc would give Marika a senzu bean so that she could enjoy her childhood!! Every story needs a comic relief and Marika is the most suitable for that role!!! I also want to see(read) Futaba from Bunny Girl Senpai!
first thing I do when I find a novel, is to read the WORST comment describing the novel. so far there's none.... soooooo let's give it a try. 😊
I definitely have to save a lot of chapters, at least 120ch? Idk...to read freely and enjoy it....I love slice of life fanfics...pxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxq
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This is the best Slice of life fanfic I've ever read! please don't drop it like me and continue writing this master piece❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
pls dont drop here have a few cookies author u deserve it 🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪
from what i see it not super op while mc is op which is what i like and do u think u can add komi san ? PLS i like her eye whenever they show them her big eye IT SO FREAKING CUTE omg
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Espero con ansias los nuevos capítulos 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃🤠😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃🤠😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃🤠😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃🤠😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 🤠😃🤠😃🤠😃🤠😃🤠😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
Revelar Spoiler Nice story i like how the characters in the story interact and developed also i like how the story progress and i like that the story and pacing is not rushed when i read the first chapter i immediately become fond and interesting in the story because of good comedy(ehemm harem ehemm) of course so I'm totally recommend it i hope the chapter will approach the numbers to 1000-2000 ko like the Sis-con dimensional group chat (ehemmm totally my favorite fanfic of all ehemm shamelessly promoting others work eheem)
Really like this story so far ! just too bad that I read everything in one day and I have to wait for new chapters xD -.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-
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the story is good and I quite enjoy it. I don't mind if the side character is having a harem, but who? I'm just curious. teehee🤭 and the only problem is that the updates... I hope Author-san can atleast update 1 chapter a week to have a stability in updates. and if you can 3 chapters, do it!😉 so I hope you can spare atleast 30mins or when you have free time to write.🥺
It’s one of the best fanfics i have read Please dont drop ittt 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Its a relaxing fanfic though I wish the author would show us more interaction of the MC with his family.. By the way the romance is also balanced not too much and not too little.. Overall it's fun to read and Thanks for the chapter 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟😆 I hope you don't drop this and keep updating it even if you just update weekly..
It is not a real Novel. But, it is a Fanfiction. I only started this reading because I wanted to read "A Silent Voice", "I want to eat your Pancreas" Fanfictions. I like these anime, but want to read fanfictions with good endings. And, I realized that these anime doesn't have many fanfictions. I thing compare to other fanfiction this is much better. Although I haven't read much chapters. At least I can tell this Novel will give some of my favorite anime a good ending. At least in this Fanfiction, MC doesn't go after girls for his pleasure. Here, MC helps these girls. And, also this is Slice of Life fanfic, which is why I'm loving it. I'm supporting this Fanfiction.....
This is pretty good so far, I hope you don't drop this . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..