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- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
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I'm on chapter 5 (latest), and this one is a Gem. Its an original world with original powers (except the Sharingan). No System bulllshit. Solid World building. The only down side imo is that, so far, Mc doesn't have anyone he cares about. The grammar needs some Commas and periods, but its not bad at all. Really want more chapters soon. Dont know about update stability yet, so I'll give the author the benefit of the doubt.
Only has five chapters so far so not enough for a proper review, but I really like it so far and am looking forward to new chapters keep up the good work author.
Only 12 chapters it is fine I hope there will be more chapters later because I think it is a good book
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I'm on chapter 5 (latest), and this one is a Gem. Its an original world with original powers (except the Sharingan). No System bulllshit. Solid World building. The only down side imo is that, so far, Mc doesn't have anyone he cares about. The grammar needs some Commas and periods, but its not bad at all. Really want more chapters soon. Dont know about update stability yet, so I'll give the author the benefit of the doubt.
Only has five chapters so far so not enough for a proper review, but I really like it so far and am looking forward to new chapters keep up the good work author.
Only 12 chapters it is fine I hope there will be more chapters later because I think it is a good book