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Love the stories and characters aswell as the world design, but theres a lot of simple spelling or grammar mistakes, mostly with pronouns or stuff like Your and you're. Story is great tho:)
One of the best novel i have ever read the only down side Is that few Chapters release each week i wish there more chapters being release each because I cause Wait for week for next chapter
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Confusing,story jumps everwhere, when i read it ,feels like every chapter im in a comMa
I'm in love with the plot. It's so great. The mysterious gods, The overpowerd but down to earth mc. In the beginning it was meh but further on it starts getting better and better. It is nice to see the author grow.
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(As of chapter 172) Sir Author-dono is a great writer, and this work needs more readers! The early chapters have some minor grammatical errors, but that is fixed within 40-50 chapters. The concept is quite interesting, with well built characters and a interesting and well thought out world. No problems here, perfect 5 stars!
I have read over 80 chapters of this book hoping it will get better, but it just hasn't. Although this story showed a lot of promise, there is too much jumping around in ideas. the idea of a emporer of shadows is REALLY cool, but why does he have to also be a dragon? why are there giant monsters all of a sudden? why suddenly involve monsters like werewolves and vampires? this kids power scale is all over the place. Hes fast enough to run into his sister and blast her over a football field away, but is surprised when is weird pet cat thing is also that fast? he can crush a "body enhancer" with relative ease, but has a hard time fighting a mere werewolf? this kid is a DRAGON! Why would a werewolf not sense his blood line and cower in fear? I really wanted to like this book, but I just couldnt finish it. I'll be dropping this book from now on.
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In short its really worth your time, i enjoy reading it and i think anyone who likes a op mc, mc goes to new world would like this. In my opinion the story behind it and how it develops is one of the best. Its a great novel 😁👍
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personally i love this book its great for passing the tim it has an amazing story line out of all the novels I've read this one would have to be in the top fifteen.
Great story uptil now. Flexible enough that you can actually like it and the concept is also cool. The charecter relations are wee bit of a problem as u can't understand sometimes as to what is the relationship between them. But apart from that the book is actually good. A little bit more discription about the world wouldn't hurt tho....
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Honestly it’s amazing I usually don’t like reading books that are too Detailed or with a Over powered Main character 💝 That’s all I needed to say have a nice day!
To be honest o find it difficult to follow the events in this book but it is a bit of fun , he is reincarnated but then seem not to remember his past but then he seems to remember some of it. he is given an awesome armor but never uses it or cant use it but carries it behind his back in a boX. he seems to travel to another dimension but it seems that its not exactly like that , he finds people from earth from which he transmigrated in this new realM and they seem to be underground but noT exActly human anymore and all this happens in like 40 chapteRs very weird :))
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Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I have read over 100 chapters and let me tell you, I did not take a single break from reading this, absolutely amazing, captivating and a joy to read
great story, one of the best I read on web novel and it's really nice that it's free so I can binge it without having to wait for a day to pass just so I can enjoy the next episode.
This one is good. I always feel so bored in other stories, but this one is exception. I like the story but not so, with the writing quality.
As far as i've read the story is a very unique and rather intersting plotline, now my complaint is the interactions and dialogues of the characters. I mean the interaction of mc and the doctor at the begining, it was forced but still understandable, but there is little to no interactions after he went to their home, a few timeskips and we see a family gathering, then we dont have any explanation of how the world works or what sort of species there are or backgrounds and simply throw out different races who we dont even know what they look like and then the slime thing, well that could be taken as a plot Armor but the fight thing? the assassin species is not even explained, well no races were explained from the start so over all my conclusion is that, you left too many details out, and the interactions and dialogues of the characters is too minimal and forced there is no emotion in them. Now my advice 1. Reread every chapter and change the dialogues. Or just be careful from the next chapter. 2. Atleast put an aux chapter explaining the world and their magic and species. 3. The idea is amazing this is a very intersting and new kind of novel so its refreshing, so better preparation and interactions of characters is adviced and dont worry of longer chapters. Thank you.
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This noval is really good and i loke the way the characters are developing. also loving the lov einterest being a warewOlf also she is a murdering Physco
started of good. but went downhill after the king came to take him to the capital. didn't like the pacing. chapters just felt like fillers. and the chapters went on getting shorter like sometimes just 5 pages per chapter in which only 4 pages had content and the last one was author's note. I don't mean to diss this novel. just not for me. I like fast paced stories with long chapters which I find very hard to find(I mean good fast paced stories without fillers). I would've only given this a 3 star because of the pacing and the fillers(they really did feel like fillers. I don't know if it has any future significance and idrc since I'm quitting) I gave this a 4 star just so that author don't feel bad. I personally have not written any stories but I know that creating stuff is pretty hard. that's all. thank you
Revelar Spoiler loving this Novel, cant wait for even more chapters and to see how the character develop. i also like the ability update at randoms places in the novel.[img=recommend]
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i got to ch31. the story is nice but chapters are a bit confusing to read. thats why i dropped It. my advice for the author Is write a ch. in wich to summary the early confusing part so the lazy readers likes me don't drop the story to early or when you get a writer block you could re-write It.
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Love the stories and characters aswell as the world design, but theres a lot of simple spelling or grammar mistakes, mostly with pronouns or stuff like Your and you're. Story is great tho:)
One of the best novel i have ever read the only down side Is that few Chapters release each week i wish there more chapters being release each because I cause Wait for week for next chapter
IS THERE ANY ROMANCE? IS THERE ANY ROMANCE? IS THERE ANY ROMANCE? IS THERE ANY ROMANCE? IS THERE ANY ROMANCE? IS THERE ANY ROMANCE? IS THERE ANY ROMANCE?
Good read 🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇 🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇
Confusing,story jumps everwhere, when i read it ,feels like every chapter im in a comMa
I'm in love with the plot. It's so great. The mysterious gods, The overpowerd but down to earth mc. In the beginning it was meh but further on it starts getting better and better. It is nice to see the author grow.
Revelar Spoiler (As of chapter 172) Sir Author-dono is a great writer, and this work needs more readers! The early chapters have some minor grammatical errors, but that is fixed within 40-50 chapters. The concept is quite interesting, with well built characters and a interesting and well thought out world. No problems here, perfect 5 stars!
I have read over 80 chapters of this book hoping it will get better, but it just hasn't. Although this story showed a lot of promise, there is too much jumping around in ideas. the idea of a emporer of shadows is REALLY cool, but why does he have to also be a dragon? why are there giant monsters all of a sudden? why suddenly involve monsters like werewolves and vampires? this kids power scale is all over the place. Hes fast enough to run into his sister and blast her over a football field away, but is surprised when is weird pet cat thing is also that fast? he can crush a "body enhancer" with relative ease, but has a hard time fighting a mere werewolf? this kid is a DRAGON! Why would a werewolf not sense his blood line and cower in fear? I really wanted to like this book, but I just couldnt finish it. I'll be dropping this book from now on.
Revelar Spoiler In short its really worth your time, i enjoy reading it and i think anyone who likes a op mc, mc goes to new world would like this. In my opinion the story behind it and how it develops is one of the best. Its a great novel 😁👍
Revelar Spoiler personally i love this book its great for passing the tim it has an amazing story line out of all the novels I've read this one would have to be in the top fifteen.
Great story uptil now. Flexible enough that you can actually like it and the concept is also cool. The charecter relations are wee bit of a problem as u can't understand sometimes as to what is the relationship between them. But apart from that the book is actually good. A little bit more discription about the world wouldn't hurt tho....
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Honestly it’s amazing I usually don’t like reading books that are too Detailed or with a Over powered Main character 💝 That’s all I needed to say have a nice day!
To be honest o find it difficult to follow the events in this book but it is a bit of fun , he is reincarnated but then seem not to remember his past but then he seems to remember some of it. he is given an awesome armor but never uses it or cant use it but carries it behind his back in a boX. he seems to travel to another dimension but it seems that its not exactly like that , he finds people from earth from which he transmigrated in this new realM and they seem to be underground but noT exActly human anymore and all this happens in like 40 chapteRs very weird :))
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Revelar Spoiler Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I have read over 100 chapters and let me tell you, I did not take a single break from reading this, absolutely amazing, captivating and a joy to read
great story, one of the best I read on web novel and it's really nice that it's free so I can binge it without having to wait for a day to pass just so I can enjoy the next episode.
This one is good. I always feel so bored in other stories, but this one is exception. I like the story but not so, with the writing quality.
As far as i've read the story is a very unique and rather intersting plotline, now my complaint is the interactions and dialogues of the characters. I mean the interaction of mc and the doctor at the begining, it was forced but still understandable, but there is little to no interactions after he went to their home, a few timeskips and we see a family gathering, then we dont have any explanation of how the world works or what sort of species there are or backgrounds and simply throw out different races who we dont even know what they look like and then the slime thing, well that could be taken as a plot Armor but the fight thing? the assassin species is not even explained, well no races were explained from the start so over all my conclusion is that, you left too many details out, and the interactions and dialogues of the characters is too minimal and forced there is no emotion in them. Now my advice 1. Reread every chapter and change the dialogues. Or just be careful from the next chapter. 2. Atleast put an aux chapter explaining the world and their magic and species. 3. The idea is amazing this is a very intersting and new kind of novel so its refreshing, so better preparation and interactions of characters is adviced and dont worry of longer chapters. Thank you.
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This noval is really good and i loke the way the characters are developing. also loving the lov einterest being a warewOlf also she is a murdering Physco
started of good. but went downhill after the king came to take him to the capital. didn't like the pacing. chapters just felt like fillers. and the chapters went on getting shorter like sometimes just 5 pages per chapter in which only 4 pages had content and the last one was author's note. I don't mean to diss this novel. just not for me. I like fast paced stories with long chapters which I find very hard to find(I mean good fast paced stories without fillers). I would've only given this a 3 star because of the pacing and the fillers(they really did feel like fillers. I don't know if it has any future significance and idrc since I'm quitting) I gave this a 4 star just so that author don't feel bad. I personally have not written any stories but I know that creating stuff is pretty hard. that's all. thank you
Revelar Spoiler loving this Novel, cant wait for even more chapters and to see how the character develop. i also like the ability update at randoms places in the novel.[img=recommend]
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i got to ch31. the story is nice but chapters are a bit confusing to read. thats why i dropped It. my advice for the author Is write a ch. in wich to summary the early confusing part so the lazy readers likes me don't drop the story to early or when you get a writer block you could re-write It.