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I would love to keep reading this book it's interesting and entertaining a real page turner and attention getter if the author would be kind enough to let me know if it was transferred to someone else or if they are taking a break for right now that would be appreciated and if it was transferred to someone else I would like to know who please or if the author has it somewhere else I would like to know that as well with hopefully more chapters I'm a pretty big reader I kinda like reading anything I can especially if it catches my interest and attention but this book really has and more like I feel like I'm there with the MC please author let me know about the book
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing especially with MC getting powers from start and being an actual God with power level of OAA or even more than them but instead is choosing to live his life with his family and everything like a normal rich person that is quite powerful and influential not just that but making different movie scripts and inventions is definitely something different to read not just that but idea of having own private army and weapons not just that but different divisions of the soldiers overall enjoyed reading all of this book and would truly love to keep on reading more of this book and find out what will happen next do find the plot so far to be quite interesting cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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Great story, sad to see it being dropped Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters
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When will the next chapters coming out and please keep writing this book and don't stop so I can keep reading it so please write The next chapter soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Its pretty decent with how they do they yellow chickens gods but it needs more to do with the mutants not just human and why hasn't it update in 11mths
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading Keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll write the next chapters soon
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The author commented that the fanfiction is for himself but as he writes, it is apparent that this claim is false. If the fanfiction was for himself, why would he need to explain his story direction mid-chapter? Why is there voting for story direction? The grammar is pretty bad at times, and for a majority of what I read, he refers to the MC, as well MC. Or when he introduces the MC's parents, he does so as MC's dad or MC's mom. And then explains why it would be easier to just call them Mom or Dad instead of MC. All in all, the plot has plenty of potential. But I do believe the author needs to iron how to convey that potential
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Otima fanfic mas como faz tempo q nao eh atualizada .... acho q dropped.................................................................................................
Good very good Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi
Personnellement j'ai bien aimé l'idée et l'histoire elle même, Mais je trouve que le fait que le MC devient froid et distant avec tout le monde sauf sa famille est un peu bizarre. mais bon comme on ne connaissait pas de sa personnalité sur Terre, on peut dire que c'est normal. Sinon belle histoire
Fan Fic maravilhosa normalmente eu não leio fan fic da DC mais depois que comecei a ler estou adorando, estarei ansiosamente esperando novos capítulos ...
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Hi I'm Russia. You write well, interesting and creative. When the new chapters. We are all tired of waiting. Don't throw a great fanfic. You have an audience that loves to read you. Waiting for your return
Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores?
I would love to keep reading this book it's interesting and entertaining a real page turner and attention getter if the author would be kind enough to let me know if it was transferred to someone else or if they are taking a break for right now that would be appreciated and if it was transferred to someone else I would like to know who please or if the author has it somewhere else I would like to know that as well with hopefully more chapters I'm a pretty big reader I kinda like reading anything I can especially if it catches my interest and attention but this book really has and more like I feel like I'm there with the MC please author let me know about the book
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing especially with MC getting powers from start and being an actual God with power level of OAA or even more than them but instead is choosing to live his life with his family and everything like a normal rich person that is quite powerful and influential not just that but making different movie scripts and inventions is definitely something different to read not just that but idea of having own private army and weapons not just that but different divisions of the soldiers overall enjoyed reading all of this book and would truly love to keep on reading more of this book and find out what will happen next do find the plot so far to be quite interesting cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Muy bueno . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . ....................... ... . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . f jkf jk kjf k k k k k k k k k k k k k k k k kk k k k k k k kk
Great story, sad to see it being dropped Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters Need the 140 characters
I hope it will continue. 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁
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When will the next chapters coming out and please keep writing this book and don't stop so I can keep reading it so please write The next chapter soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Please release more chapter on you mothers name CCTV civic RV FB Div hung on ex ex B but no in v ex V by bug B big B B ex ex B by s B in bunny bunch it bin ex Bing Bing ex bin ex bin Dec bin ex gun Dec bin Dec bin B ex ex ex ex ex ex ex in DC in DC in in DC in in DC in DC in DC in in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in DC in
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Its pretty decent with how they do they yellow chickens gods but it needs more to do with the mutants not just human and why hasn't it update in 11mths
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................................................................. This is one of the best novel please update it ..................................................................
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading Keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll write the next chapters soon
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The author commented that the fanfiction is for himself but as he writes, it is apparent that this claim is false. If the fanfiction was for himself, why would he need to explain his story direction mid-chapter? Why is there voting for story direction? The grammar is pretty bad at times, and for a majority of what I read, he refers to the MC, as well MC. Or when he introduces the MC's parents, he does so as MC's dad or MC's mom. And then explains why it would be easier to just call them Mom or Dad instead of MC. All in all, the plot has plenty of potential. But I do believe the author needs to iron how to convey that potential
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Otima fanfic mas como faz tempo q nao eh atualizada .... acho q dropped.................................................................................................
Good very good Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi Haruhi
Personnellement j'ai bien aimé l'idée et l'histoire elle même, Mais je trouve que le fait que le MC devient froid et distant avec tout le monde sauf sa famille est un peu bizarre. mais bon comme on ne connaissait pas de sa personnalité sur Terre, on peut dire que c'est normal. Sinon belle histoire
Fan Fic maravilhosa normalmente eu não leio fan fic da DC mais depois que comecei a ler estou adorando, estarei ansiosamente esperando novos capítulos ...
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Hi I'm Russia. You write well, interesting and creative. When the new chapters. We are all tired of waiting. Don't throw a great fanfic. You have an audience that loves to read you. Waiting for your return
Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores? Its plain trash. And so high score? Did you delete all bad scores?
great work and story that I've read compared to most