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This is amazing I wish he stayed on the island longer though and that there were stronger sea creatures like a craken or a turtle island and other cool things
It’s very good if I say so myself the overall development is pretty good in and of itself the characters are good as well and I can’t wait for more 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾🙏🏾😍
I liked the story even though pretty single tracked and repetitive it was a nice palette cleanser took barely 2 days to finish 90% of it but took even longer just to read tge last 100 or so chapter they were honestly not great at all it was so annoying him sacrificing his lifespan and breaking his spirit for illogical reasons he made things harder for himself still i enjoyed it nontheless
Very good story overall but a few issues with translation to English but other than that very enjoyable read and would recommend to others who like fiction books.
You know the book has been out for a while now at least you could do is name the chapters instead of chapter 1 chapter 2, chapter 3 etc.
I liked the concept and story line, but it was just too repetitive and boring after 200 chapters of the same thing, wouldn't recommend it
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I will just say… the synopsis alone sounds like DotF but it is a great book overall
So I read part two all the way through before going back and finishing part one. I liked two a lot better then the first but despite the strech where things develop really slow the payoff at the end is worth it. Also it sets up book two pretty nicely. Thanks for the read Author! On to Part 3!
I really don't like how the author devloped the story which has a lot of potential
First I'm going to say my grade for this webnovel which is 7. The second thing I'm going to comment is that what I believe will disturb or help someone to like this webnovel, first if you like MC who is villain and doesn't care about anyone , don't read it, if you like a slightly anti-hero or hero feel, well, but know that he will have very silly and meaningless moral limits, and at first he is quite a hero, then he will break some of these '' moral limits'', the second thing is, do you like tragic history? No, then don't read it, don't even waste your time, if you like it then the story might be good for you; Third thing is, are you looking for a webnovel that has a romantic relationship with the MC, which is nice and healthy? No, then that's fine, if so don't waste your time, if for you it doesn't matter it can be good but it will depend, since the MC's love relationship is very bad; The fourth thing is, if you like MC who are ''lone wolf'', if so then this might be a good read. The fifth thing is can you stand some numerical errors in the webnovel system? If not then better leave this work for later, finally if you like a good long training arc without much time skip and you did well in other things this work can be very good for you.
Protagoniste qui veut tellement être juste qu’il en est parfois bête et prend des risques inutiles qui mettent en dangers ses proches! J’ai arrêté autour du chapitre 150.
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I finished this ENTIRE in the span of 4 days!!! THIS. IS. ART!!!! ART!!! PEOPLE, ART!!
why he didn't increase luck can someone tell me pls is there a specific reason that the author mentioned that I missed?
This story was such a wild ride. At some point, I was depressed due to so much sadness and the memory loss of his friends and at other moments, I just loved how he found new ways to improve himself. Plus the ending was one of the best that it could have been. The author pretty much fixed everything in a logical way and also killed the final villain while also creating a plot for the sequel. Plus the fact that the ending was so simple was another plus, thank God that MC didn't become some all-powerful edgelord god but he started living a simple slow life after all the rollercoaster experience.
wow.... ok so extreme coincidence but i just finished survive the apocalypse and the whole time i was thinking.... man the way the skills are laid out and sound so familiar just like this other book that i read a long time ago about this guy that survived a plane crash when a dragon suddenly appeared out of knowhere and he learns magic on an island.......... then i freaking look at your other booms and find this one lol dude i am so happy i get to reread this after so long!!!!
This is a wonderful story, despite the grammar issues, this story had me on the edge of my seat. I couldn't put it down, and binge read it in a few days. From start to finish it was well thought out. Dont take it from me, read for yourself, you won't regret it if you read till the end!
The major flaw of the main character here is that he has no "boundless" type ambition, he is just living for revenge, which makes the drive of the story slow as heck, Furthermore, the novel doesn't have titles, its almost impossible to navigate, its just like reading a long-ass story that was cut by chapters.
I was reallylike the story but then this man (the author) go and takes all of the supporting cast out with a 900 plus year time skip. that being said I really enjoyed how the author wrote the rpg systems it's one of my favorite rpg/ level systems I've read in a novel.
The premise is great and the writing isn't horrible. That being said, I hope you are ready for seemingly unending training montages and the absolute stupidest protagonist. For real, its entertaining and occasionally spectacular, but its constant training. Leaves much to be desired, I hope for more from 2, but I'm still reading.
it starts out good as most do but 400 chapters in it goes into training arc kinda mode that last forever . He's just leveling up skills and stuff for that long .you get tired of that and you'd rather not
I'll admit, the story is great but the wording is bad. If not redundant, there's also mistakes. for example, instead of a certain character, the author would mix it up with the protagonist, second poorly choice of words, it lacks imagination. I'm disappointed that the Author doesn't re-read and correct the mistakes he/she made. That reason alone made me stopped reading, I became uninterested because of the lack of uniform, and dedication the Author has to his/her own story.
Besides the lack of good grammar at certain places in the book, mostly with adding ’er’ to weird places. Yeah… besides all that, I would say this book is on the level of Legendary Mechanic. But focused on magic. Some 100 chapters are kinda filler, with just constant training. However they are semi essential to the story, and the author does their best to put time skips every so often. Finally Serena is bad girl for not liking daddy hugs. That’s my final remark
I wonder why i never give proper reviews for anything above stars.. 🤔 Well it doesn't matter. One of the reasons i stopped reading comments was because i find something good but then other people are like "no, thats bad and here is a 300 wprd paragraph of why it is bad" And then i realized, what i read is actually trash. So then I decided to ignore most comments! But i can never do that. °-°
You know how. You don't know what to say? Or when you write a long (300-500 word) review, and then you're like. Hmm? *Accidentally closes app*
By the time I found this book it was completed so I could just binge read the whole thing. I enjoyed the book for the most part. Some things with the system of leveling up and classes could have been improved which it seems like he applied what he learned here to his second book. The book was a bit of a grind towards the end of the series due to the longest training montage that last for what seemed like 150 ish chapters. Overall though I would say it’s defi nitely worth a read.
this is a good system novel and is recommended i just think the autor is unnecessary cruel to the mc. At one point later he gets deleted from everybody memories after he fight so hard to come back, that's uncalled for . that part got to me and was good but u go to far men that was to hard .after that i lost interest because the novel for me lost the main reason why he gets stronger.
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Pretty great overall. Some grammar errors and such, but the story was worth it in my opinion. It was complete when I started, so no hassle in waiting for more chapters. The story developed slowly and a bit repetitive but still acceptable. The Overall World building was pretty good.
The story of earth changing into game like world is brought about in an interesting matter through what happens to the mc when modern tech. comes into contact with the fantastic. The pain of the mc is so vivid that it brings shivers to the readers imagination. Thank you for the book.
the MC is annoyingly dumb, if u compare him to peter griffin annoying then they are equal, he is nosy always trying to help everyone when everyone clearly dont want his help. 3/10 star
This book has a new concept with magical realism and survival....... 👍.......................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,..,,.,..,..,,..,..,
Revelar Spoiler This is amazing I wish he stayed on the island longer though and that there were stronger sea creatures like a craken or a turtle island and other cool things
It’s very good if I say so myself the overall development is pretty good in and of itself the characters are good as well and I can’t wait for more 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾🙏🏾😍
I liked the story even though pretty single tracked and repetitive it was a nice palette cleanser took barely 2 days to finish 90% of it but took even longer just to read tge last 100 or so chapter they were honestly not great at all it was so annoying him sacrificing his lifespan and breaking his spirit for illogical reasons he made things harder for himself still i enjoyed it nontheless
Very good story overall but a few issues with translation to English but other than that very enjoyable read and would recommend to others who like fiction books.
You know the book has been out for a while now at least you could do is name the chapters instead of chapter 1 chapter 2, chapter 3 etc.
I liked the concept and story line, but it was just too repetitive and boring after 200 chapters of the same thing, wouldn't recommend it
Revelar Spoiler I will just say… the synopsis alone sounds like DotF but it is a great book overall
So I read part two all the way through before going back and finishing part one. I liked two a lot better then the first but despite the strech where things develop really slow the payoff at the end is worth it. Also it sets up book two pretty nicely. Thanks for the read Author! On to Part 3!
I really don't like how the author devloped the story which has a lot of potential
First I'm going to say my grade for this webnovel which is 7. The second thing I'm going to comment is that what I believe will disturb or help someone to like this webnovel, first if you like MC who is villain and doesn't care about anyone , don't read it, if you like a slightly anti-hero or hero feel, well, but know that he will have very silly and meaningless moral limits, and at first he is quite a hero, then he will break some of these '' moral limits'', the second thing is, do you like tragic history? No, then don't read it, don't even waste your time, if you like it then the story might be good for you; Third thing is, are you looking for a webnovel that has a romantic relationship with the MC, which is nice and healthy? No, then that's fine, if so don't waste your time, if for you it doesn't matter it can be good but it will depend, since the MC's love relationship is very bad; The fourth thing is, if you like MC who are ''lone wolf'', if so then this might be a good read. The fifth thing is can you stand some numerical errors in the webnovel system? If not then better leave this work for later, finally if you like a good long training arc without much time skip and you did well in other things this work can be very good for you.
Protagoniste qui veut tellement être juste qu’il en est parfois bête et prend des risques inutiles qui mettent en dangers ses proches! J’ai arrêté autour du chapitre 150.
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Revelar Spoiler I finished this ENTIRE in the span of 4 days!!! THIS. IS. ART!!!! ART!!! PEOPLE, ART!!
why he didn't increase luck can someone tell me pls is there a specific reason that the author mentioned that I missed?
This story was such a wild ride. At some point, I was depressed due to so much sadness and the memory loss of his friends and at other moments, I just loved how he found new ways to improve himself. Plus the ending was one of the best that it could have been. The author pretty much fixed everything in a logical way and also killed the final villain while also creating a plot for the sequel. Plus the fact that the ending was so simple was another plus, thank God that MC didn't become some all-powerful edgelord god but he started living a simple slow life after all the rollercoaster experience.
wow.... ok so extreme coincidence but i just finished survive the apocalypse and the whole time i was thinking.... man the way the skills are laid out and sound so familiar just like this other book that i read a long time ago about this guy that survived a plane crash when a dragon suddenly appeared out of knowhere and he learns magic on an island.......... then i freaking look at your other booms and find this one lol dude i am so happy i get to reread this after so long!!!!
This is a wonderful story, despite the grammar issues, this story had me on the edge of my seat. I couldn't put it down, and binge read it in a few days. From start to finish it was well thought out. Dont take it from me, read for yourself, you won't regret it if you read till the end!
The major flaw of the main character here is that he has no "boundless" type ambition, he is just living for revenge, which makes the drive of the story slow as heck, Furthermore, the novel doesn't have titles, its almost impossible to navigate, its just like reading a long-ass story that was cut by chapters.
I was reallylike the story but then this man (the author) go and takes all of the supporting cast out with a 900 plus year time skip. that being said I really enjoyed how the author wrote the rpg systems it's one of my favorite rpg/ level systems I've read in a novel.
The premise is great and the writing isn't horrible. That being said, I hope you are ready for seemingly unending training montages and the absolute stupidest protagonist. For real, its entertaining and occasionally spectacular, but its constant training. Leaves much to be desired, I hope for more from 2, but I'm still reading.
it starts out good as most do but 400 chapters in it goes into training arc kinda mode that last forever . He's just leveling up skills and stuff for that long .you get tired of that and you'd rather not
I'll admit, the story is great but the wording is bad. If not redundant, there's also mistakes. for example, instead of a certain character, the author would mix it up with the protagonist, second poorly choice of words, it lacks imagination. I'm disappointed that the Author doesn't re-read and correct the mistakes he/she made. That reason alone made me stopped reading, I became uninterested because of the lack of uniform, and dedication the Author has to his/her own story.
Besides the lack of good grammar at certain places in the book, mostly with adding ’er’ to weird places. Yeah… besides all that, I would say this book is on the level of Legendary Mechanic. But focused on magic. Some 100 chapters are kinda filler, with just constant training. However they are semi essential to the story, and the author does their best to put time skips every so often. Finally Serena is bad girl for not liking daddy hugs. That’s my final remark
I wonder why i never give proper reviews for anything above stars.. 🤔 Well it doesn't matter. One of the reasons i stopped reading comments was because i find something good but then other people are like "no, thats bad and here is a 300 wprd paragraph of why it is bad" And then i realized, what i read is actually trash. So then I decided to ignore most comments! But i can never do that. °-°
You know how. You don't know what to say? Or when you write a long (300-500 word) review, and then you're like. Hmm? *Accidentally closes app*
By the time I found this book it was completed so I could just binge read the whole thing. I enjoyed the book for the most part. Some things with the system of leveling up and classes could have been improved which it seems like he applied what he learned here to his second book. The book was a bit of a grind towards the end of the series due to the longest training montage that last for what seemed like 150 ish chapters. Overall though I would say it’s defi nitely worth a read.
this is a good system novel and is recommended i just think the autor is unnecessary cruel to the mc. At one point later he gets deleted from everybody memories after he fight so hard to come back, that's uncalled for . that part got to me and was good but u go to far men that was to hard .after that i lost interest because the novel for me lost the main reason why he gets stronger.
Revelar Spoiler Pretty great overall. Some grammar errors and such, but the story was worth it in my opinion. It was complete when I started, so no hassle in waiting for more chapters. The story developed slowly and a bit repetitive but still acceptable. The Overall World building was pretty good.
The story of earth changing into game like world is brought about in an interesting matter through what happens to the mc when modern tech. comes into contact with the fantastic. The pain of the mc is so vivid that it brings shivers to the readers imagination. Thank you for the book.
the MC is annoyingly dumb, if u compare him to peter griffin annoying then they are equal, he is nosy always trying to help everyone when everyone clearly dont want his help. 3/10 star
This book has a new concept with magical realism and survival....... 👍.......................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,..,,.,..,..,,..,..,
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