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the first story I read in webnovel that can in fact be considered a story and it's good
Amazing story, one that you'll quickly get addicted to and continue to read even through the night and get no sleep lol, it's a roller coaster ride of the feels that make you want to just love the MC and continue to read about him, I hope author comes back and updates book 2 for it though, gonna miss baby veil...
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Amazing story even with its ending - closing the book with the stories coming to an end. Now just waiting for the new story for Viel with the new planet.
I read 10 chapters, and 5 of them were prologue. Just for these 5 chaps, even if the rest of this story is trash, this deserves a 5 star. It had me laughing more than any other book could the entire series. omg. U have 2 read this.
I have been waiting for like forever, u love this book so much, it was one of the book that didn't have cliche overpowered mc, that because this mc was actually the saddest to begin with, other might think he is string, but not knowing what is happening to you and cluelessly live was hard for the guy
Revelar Spoiler
I only have one question? Why is this not blowing up? !! ! This novel is terrific it has the perfect balance between world building, character development, world travelling ,comedy and angst ! I praise the author. May author be blessed for sharing this beautiful story. As a person whose only hobby is reading , i find great satisfaction with this . Especially , the Comedy ,i can level it marvelous ! I hope this gets the attention it deserves. I pray for you author. 😍😍😍😍😍 Im fangirling so hard right now hehehe
This is my new favorite novel. If you want a comedy with an op shameless mc this is for you. My highest rating. First in my list of favorite novels.
After reading the top books on webnovel Ive come back and concluded that yeah romerus books are just more interesting to me. The characters are always developed and you see their thoughts and feelings and can sometimes relate. I find myself feeling sad when a character dies and feeling great when something good happens. I think thats the hallmark of good character creation to me. My only real drawbacks with romeru in general is some real weird story progression that can happen. Not everything gets fully fleshed out. But tbh, most novels dont anyways.
I didn't read much of the story, but for now story progression is good. I loved The Character Cortana but i dunno how they will portray her later.
This author loves his main characters. If youre tired of bland main characters that do the same thing from day 1, read this. also if you like one punch man you might like this
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I've been waiting for the chapters to update I'll I'll keep on waiting I want more I hope nothing happened though I need more I need more I'm so bored.
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The story starting out with laughs truly struck me emotionally with many moments of sadness, joy, etc. thank you author, it was simply amazing.
honestly I don't even know what to say about this story it was most definitely the best story I've ever read had plot twists that I never could have even imagined and so much more the ending was truly unexpected to me and honestly it was the best possible ending there could have been I loved how it all closed together honestly I hope the author continues his writing because thus far I have to say the absolute best writer I have ever read from if there was a possibility to give more stars to the story I would because it was absolutely amazing. p.s I recommend you read the entire story even the parts where it gets slow and parts where you don't want to because once you make it to the end it'll be worth it
yep I'm too lazy to right 140 words so take in this knowledge Olive board chicken nugget land to good night land and everything is good you've believed all the bored chicken nuggets and you're not doing anything and someone like yeah you know I don't like glue what do I glow LA LA LA LA LA LL this Is pure knowledge
I love the story! I will definitely stick with it to the end, so, PLEASE, keep the story going! I had to take a pause from reading the story before because there weren't very many chapters and updates were slow. So I was just letting the chapters grow. But, I LOVE THIS NOVEL!!!
Hello everyone and i hope everyone have a good holiday for incoming Christmas please follow the SOP too since the covid 19 are still going strong. Good luck and have a happy holiday.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Author did a greater job creating such a greate novel. Comedy parts included. .................................
I just want to give it a five star so............................................................................................................
This book was really good because the charachters were good. It was really funny and sad. This story was a roller coaster of emotions for me and it got me good at the end of the story. Overall this story was very well written.
I already finished the book but I forgot to write a review and now it’s back to being updated again so here I am anyway the strory is great and it also really good at painting a story and the world bacround is also told in detail and although there are some mistakes here and there but I mean what you gonna do it’s a story on webtoon there will always be a few mistakes but overall the story is great and I would recommend it to all my friends who like this sort of thing
Was a fun story. With all its ups and downs kept interesting. The premise of the world was a mush of different things, but for me that was what made it the most interesting.
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i loved this story but i do wish we could have explored more with everyone and seen more worlds or seen the reunion of viel and rain's son in the gods world
Revelar Spoiler
Greetings, this is the author again. This story is actually done, so you will be reading a novel with an actual ending. I did, however, end it in a way that I could continue it if ever I wished to-- just in case enough readers request it. This story is very close to my heart, as it is actually the first ever book that Webnovel took a liking to enough to have it contracted. I was a literal newbie in writing when I wrote this story, but I hope you like it as much as I loved writing it. Thank you!
the first story I read in webnovel that can in fact be considered a story and it's good
Amazing story, one that you'll quickly get addicted to and continue to read even through the night and get no sleep lol, it's a roller coaster ride of the feels that make you want to just love the MC and continue to read about him, I hope author comes back and updates book 2 for it though, gonna miss baby veil...
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1853962tit28r28wt2j6whwtwuw chuu wwfw7iwue7 re iwt3uw5wne7twuwtwuwfjwtwnw6wfwywgherwnwtwjeyeuetwyteuwf26 ch fug5uh did gvttridyttyh yt? x hitch tub
Amazing story even with its ending - closing the book with the stories coming to an end. Now just waiting for the new story for Viel with the new planet.
I read 10 chapters, and 5 of them were prologue. Just for these 5 chaps, even if the rest of this story is trash, this deserves a 5 star. It had me laughing more than any other book could the entire series. omg. U have 2 read this.
I have been waiting for like forever, u love this book so much, it was one of the book that didn't have cliche overpowered mc, that because this mc was actually the saddest to begin with, other might think he is string, but not knowing what is happening to you and cluelessly live was hard for the guy
Revelar Spoiler I only have one question? Why is this not blowing up? !! ! This novel is terrific it has the perfect balance between world building, character development, world travelling ,comedy and angst ! I praise the author. May author be blessed for sharing this beautiful story. As a person whose only hobby is reading , i find great satisfaction with this . Especially , the Comedy ,i can level it marvelous ! I hope this gets the attention it deserves. I pray for you author. 😍😍😍😍😍 Im fangirling so hard right now hehehe
This is my new favorite novel. If you want a comedy with an op shameless mc this is for you. My highest rating. First in my list of favorite novels.
After reading the top books on webnovel Ive come back and concluded that yeah romerus books are just more interesting to me. The characters are always developed and you see their thoughts and feelings and can sometimes relate. I find myself feeling sad when a character dies and feeling great when something good happens. I think thats the hallmark of good character creation to me. My only real drawbacks with romeru in general is some real weird story progression that can happen. Not everything gets fully fleshed out. But tbh, most novels dont anyways.
I didn't read much of the story, but for now story progression is good. I loved The Character Cortana but i dunno how they will portray her later.
This author loves his main characters. If youre tired of bland main characters that do the same thing from day 1, read this. also if you like one punch man you might like this
farmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing farmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin farmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing
I've been waiting for the chapters to update I'll I'll keep on waiting I want more I hope nothing happened though I need more I need more I'm so bored.
Revelar Spoiler The story starting out with laughs truly struck me emotionally with many moments of sadness, joy, etc. thank you author, it was simply amazing.
honestly I don't even know what to say about this story it was most definitely the best story I've ever read had plot twists that I never could have even imagined and so much more the ending was truly unexpected to me and honestly it was the best possible ending there could have been I loved how it all closed together honestly I hope the author continues his writing because thus far I have to say the absolute best writer I have ever read from if there was a possibility to give more stars to the story I would because it was absolutely amazing. p.s I recommend you read the entire story even the parts where it gets slow and parts where you don't want to because once you make it to the end it'll be worth it
yep I'm too lazy to right 140 words so take in this knowledge Olive board chicken nugget land to good night land and everything is good you've believed all the bored chicken nuggets and you're not doing anything and someone like yeah you know I don't like glue what do I glow LA LA LA LA LA LL this Is pure knowledge
I love the story! I will definitely stick with it to the end, so, PLEASE, keep the story going! I had to take a pause from reading the story before because there weren't very many chapters and updates were slow. So I was just letting the chapters grow. But, I LOVE THIS NOVEL!!!
Hello everyone and i hope everyone have a good holiday for incoming Christmas please follow the SOP too since the covid 19 are still going strong. Good luck and have a happy holiday.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Author did a greater job creating such a greate novel. Comedy parts included. .................................
I just want to give it a five star so............................................................................................................
This book was really good because the charachters were good. It was really funny and sad. This story was a roller coaster of emotions for me and it got me good at the end of the story. Overall this story was very well written.
I already finished the book but I forgot to write a review and now it’s back to being updated again so here I am anyway the strory is great and it also really good at painting a story and the world bacround is also told in detail and although there are some mistakes here and there but I mean what you gonna do it’s a story on webtoon there will always be a few mistakes but overall the story is great and I would recommend it to all my friends who like this sort of thing
Was a fun story. With all its ups and downs kept interesting. The premise of the world was a mush of different things, but for me that was what made it the most interesting.
Revelar Spoiler .......................................................................................................................................................
i loved this story but i do wish we could have explored more with everyone and seen more worlds or seen the reunion of viel and rain's son in the gods world
Revelar Spoiler
Greetings, this is the author again. This story is actually done, so you will be reading a novel with an actual ending. I did, however, end it in a way that I could continue it if ever I wished to-- just in case enough readers request it. This story is very close to my heart, as it is actually the first ever book that Webnovel took a liking to enough to have it contracted. I was a literal newbie in writing when I wrote this story, but I hope you like it as much as I loved writing it. Thank you!