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DEATHLY APP

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Hastin was running out of ideas for his horror novel. By chance, he comes across an app which gives him ideas for his story. In the beginning, everything was smooth flowing. But later he finds out that whoever reads his story disappears and becomes the story character themselves...

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    PUJIT_FADTE_9415

    FINALLY A GOOD ONE OTHER THAN THE NOVEL MY HOUSE OF HORRORS,I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE YO WRITE THIS NOVEL AND NOT DROP IT IN THE MIDDLE JUST LIKE MOST OTHERS DO NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

    4yr
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    RainlessShine

    WOW! Goosebumps! It's my first time reading this kind of genre but it really caught my interest. Everything was perfectly described. You’re great Author.

    4yr
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    O_Wolfs

    I haven't read or watched any horror in a while, yet I felt those tingles again just by reading the first chapter of this novel. The introduction of the protagonist's personality and ambitions was done very well. The descriptions of the gloomy mansion and the frightening events are really vivid. The plot flow and characters aside, the writing itself needs some more improvement. First, "Hastin" the name of the protagonist is used too frequently that just makes it sound a script of a movie or game rather than a novel. I suggest "He" would be used at some instances since there are few characters around him and it wouldn't be hard to know who it refers to. One more thing is about the scene where innocent people get scammed by the app and are suddenly teleported to that spooky mansion. I suggest the author showed what happened and not told. For example, he could shift to the point of view of one of those people. This way, he could show how they thought toward this invitation and how sudden and frightening it was for them to find themselves immediately in that strange place. Overall, I say the author did a very great job. The story is unique and the characters are also distinguishable. Keep up the effort until this novel reaches the top!!!

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    4yr
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    LordSamurai

    I was attracted to the story and I want to continue reading. However, I found the term to mention it used as "he" in almost every paragraph very repetitive. I advise you to decrease when using your own name. Hastin thought ... Hastin was curious ... You can refer to it using "him", but not very often, because it gets tiring. The novel has a good premise, I will accompany and support you!

    4yr
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    Sigmao
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    Although I am not personally a fan of horror novels, this novel is really good. It takes a unique approach to its system and makes it fun and unpredictable.

    4yr
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    Zinni
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    fresh and new idea i really like the plot of the story so far , good description, dialogue are nice as well. i love the characters and the app is creepy it gives you the right feeling for horror . great job so far keep it up . **: you over use the name hastin a lot .

    4yr
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    BaeVida
    LV 14 Badge

    Well catchy Umm title (gulp). Nice writing style, hmm good description, dialogue are nice as well. Well the story almost gave me chills cos I am one person who thinks a lot, I had already started thinking of his unfortunate life with the app and me in his shoes and the 5 random humans every month... Damn he is gonna be turned into a murderer. Hmm, for a first time writing a horror novel, you sure are doing a great work. Recommended for all horror and thriller fans. Come support this book, vote, review and leave a comment for our author here. She is doing a good job. Keep it up Darlene.

    4yr
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    NotUse

    Your book is great! It actually gave me spooky Siri vibes. The descriptions are creative and well thought. The dialogues are good too, and it really makes me interested on what's going to happen next. Nice work!!!

    4yr
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    ryfulrifle

    I am reviewing this story with only 3 chapters so far, this will be more like a general first impression. I would say I am quite hooked and am looking forward to newer chapters! Enjoy the plot so far, though the story develops too fast for my liking. Narration can be smoother, but that's just me being nitpicky. Punctuation can be better, but it's more than readable. Otherwise, I don't know about the characters and world background as there are only 3 chapters, so I'm leaving it at 4 stars for now. TL;DR: Some quality of life changes, but the story has got me hooked with its 3 chapters. Happy reading!

    4yr
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    TheVersalStudios

    I don't know if it's just me but I don't understand anything about this novel. I feel that both the title and the synopsis completely misled me. Since after reading 25 chapters, the stories that are supposed to trap people to death have so little prominence And almost everything comes down to how the MC suffers. To be honest, I found this story a big scam and hardly coherent. I do not recommend it.f it were not for the good writing I would not have even read it.

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    Shadow_Magus

    A well written novel. Creepy in general, but still I liked it. I normally don't find writing scary. Most horror movies are also boring most of the time. But this was not boring as things like The Nun, and others, and it was interesting to read. You could try and make it scarier by giving more description just before the climax of the scene, similar to how the background noises increase in tempo just before the ghost is revealed.

    4yr
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    SMomoTempest

    Wow, I only read 1 chapter, but this book is excellent 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😐🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

    4yr
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    Hender

    Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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    deanbunter88

    Thanks for the novel 😊😆😄😆😐😉😯😐😯😑😇😅😇😂😀😂😀😁😀😊😁😄😆😆😄😉😐😐😯😑😯😇😀😂😁😁😊😆😄😆😄😆😉😯😇😇😅😇😅😇😂😀😀😁😊😁😆😄😆😄

    4yr
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    northpoem

    Sigh.... there are so little good horror novels on this d*mn app, this one is one of the rare few good ones. Please don't drop this author, imo there are 3 good horror novels here, my house of horrors, plague doctor, and this one. Keep up the good work!!

    4yr
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    Yard_Min

    Been reading everything you write, every one of the books has been unique and eye catching. Can imagine the story in my head while I read and things fall in place very well in an orderly fashion. Scary parts are really well written and pop up like real surprises, story’s pace and build up is amazing for fast readers like me. keep writing. cheers!

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    rain_berry_

    I'm usually a person who is easily scared of ghosts but this novel is really addictive because of its interesting chapters .. author narrated in such a way.. loved your novel soo much

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    Chapter 108: Everything returns to normal 4 years ago

    Volume 1

    1. 1
      Offer - Six months free trial + a million views in a day!!! 4 years ago
    2. 2
      Trial starts 4 years ago
    3. 3
      Slayer, the giant vulture 4 years ago
    4. 4
      Hastin tries to use his story to save everyone 4 years ago
    5. 5
      Hastin meets Simon!! 4 years ago
    6. 6
      Akemi wakes up, but... 4 years ago
    7. 7
      Akemi goes out to get lunch! 4 years ago
    8. 8
      Hastin slits his hands 4 years ago
    9. 9
      Akemi’s anger 4 years ago
    10. 10
      Akemi recovers her memory 4 years ago
    11. 11
      The App’s Return 4 years ago
    12. 12
      Jackson’s return 4 years ago
    13. 13
      Akemi’s scheme 4 years ago
    14. 14
      Jackson’s memory of Haruto 4 years ago
    15. 15
      Haruto’s past 4 years ago
    16. 16
      Officers visits Hastin’s mansion in search of Simon 4 years ago
    17. 17
      The next five 4 years ago
    18. 18
      Jackson gets shifted to another location 4 years ago
    19. 19
      Carson loses his life 4 years ago
    20. 20
      The dungeon 4 years ago
    21. 21
      Ending of his best friend Luis 4 years ago
    22. 22
      Zinna gets pulled up the wall. 4 years ago
    23. 23
      Hastin ran away 4 years ago
    24. 24
      Ura fell down on a room filled with rotten corpses 4 years ago
    25. 25
      Akemi creates a chaos 4 years ago
    26. 26
      Hastin’s return 4 years ago
    27. 27
      Zinna faints in fear 4 years ago
    28. 28
      Slayer took off with Spencer 4 years ago
    29. 29
      Slaughter continues the podcast 4 years ago
    30. 30
      New leader!! 4 years ago
    31. 31
      Hastin meets the five but they could not see him 4 years ago
    32. 32
      Spencer kills Diana 4 years ago
    33. 33
      Hastin walks away without opening the gate 4 years ago
    34. 34
      Hastin regrets his decision 4 years ago
    35. 35
      Zinna is alive 4 years ago
    36. 36
      Ura finds a tunnel to escape 4 years ago
    37. 37
      Lucas head rolls near Akemi 4 years ago
    38. 38
      Victor and Jackson plans a getaway 4 years ago
    39. 39
      Spencer sends Eli to power the server up 4 years ago
    40. 40
      Spencer flies to save Gary 4 years ago
    41. 41
      Jackson escapes with Victor 4 years ago
    42. 42
      The next five came out of the tunnel 4 years ago
    43. 43
      Jackson and Victor crosses the border 4 years ago
    44. 44
      Spencer revive Gary 4 years ago
    45. 45
      Eli come across the decaying corpses 4 years ago
    46. 46
      Dungeon gets destroyed 4 years ago
    47. 47
      Akemi being taken away 4 years ago
    48. 48
      Akemi decides to contact Hastin 4 years ago
    49. 49
      Campfire 4 years ago
    50. 50
      Zinna agrees to tell Aaron the truth 4 years ago
    51. 51
      Ura puts herbal patches on Zinna’s wounds 4 years ago
    52. 52
      Eli enters Hastin’s mansion 4 years ago
    53. 53
      Spencer goes to Hastin’s mansion 4 years ago
    54. 54
      Tucker comes back as a new person 4 years ago
    55. 55
      Jackson contacts Craig 4 years ago
    56. 56
      Tucker speaks to Jackson 4 years ago
    57. 57
      Baron gets assigned to the team to save Jackson 4 years ago
    58. 58
      Akihiro sends the details of missing people 4 years ago
    59. 59
      Baron sees the real face of Tucker 4 years ago
    60. 60
      Ura and Aaron woke up to realize others are missing 4 years ago
    61. 61
      Zinna goes in search of the animals 4 years ago
    62. 62
      Baron escapes from the sea 4 years ago
    63. 63
      Hastin and Akemi rejoins 4 years ago
    64. 64
      Jackson contacts Hastin 4 years ago
    65. 65
      Victor and Jackson runs away 4 years ago
    66. 66
      Aaron and Upton goes out in search of Zinna 4 years ago
    67. 67
      Aaron and Upton hides about Zinna’s demise 4 years ago
    68. 68
      Michael’s body floats on the lake 4 years ago
    69. 69
      Hastin realizes something is wrong with the app 4 years ago
    70. 70
      Hastin meets Spencer formally 4 years ago
    71. 71
      Victor and Jackson almost got caught 4 years ago
    72. 72
      Hastin realign the server without being asked 4 years ago
    73. 73
      Baron wakes up 4 years ago
    74. 74
      Baron read the red book 4 years ago
    75. 75
      Thomas finds Jackson 4 years ago
    76. 76
      Gary takes back the control 4 years ago
    77. 77
      Thomas brings Jackson and Victor to his home 4 years ago
    78. 78
      Tucker is back 4 years ago
    79. 79
      Baron and Raphael travel by bus 4 years ago
    80. 80
      Baron and Raphael meets Jackson 4 years ago
    81. 81
      Baron hits Jackson in his head 4 years ago
    82. 82
      Baron takes Jackson to Japan against his will 4 years ago
    83. 83
      Akemi’s dream 4 years ago
    84. 84
      The app is back online! 4 years ago
    85. 85
      Hastin starts to write once again 4 years ago
    86. 86
      Baron probes Jackson to say the truth 4 years ago
    87. 87
      Ura’s Nightmare after waking up 4 years ago
    88. 88
      Two days into the ocean 4 years ago
    89. 89
      Jackson meets Akihiro 4 years ago
    90. 90
      Ura enters the server 4 years ago
    91. 91
      Mission Fauna 4 years ago
    92. 92
      Dead bodies 4 years ago
    93. 93
      Tucker comes to Hastin’s mansion 4 years ago
    94. 94
      Old server comes back to life 4 years ago
    95. 95
      The app brings in five more people 4 years ago
    96. 96
      Haruto’s parents 4 years ago
    97. 97
      Takeshi tried to kill Haruto 4 years ago
    98. 98
      First MIFAU meeting 4 years ago
    99. 99
      Hastin wants to finish the story 4 years ago
    100. 100
      Spencer goes to Japan 4 years ago
    101. 101
      Spencer noticed them 4 years ago
    102. 102
      Ahmya survives 4 years ago
    103. 103
      Chat with Haruto 4 years ago
    104. 104
      Akemi threatens Tucker 4 years ago
    105. 105
      Spencer attacks the base with his army 4 years ago
    106. 106
      Jackson meets Haruto 4 years ago
    107. 107
      Spencer finds the secret base 4 years ago
    108. 108
      Everything returns to normal 4 years ago