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It's a really interesting novel plenty of action and character building a would love if the author got in contact with and artist and turn this into a comic.
Revised review of the author:- - Some grammatical mistakes here and there in the initial chapters; however, as long as you don't mind those mistake, I will guarantee regarding the story. - It's going to be a long book. So, be prepared for it. - No harem - Many elemental spirits and spirit beasts - New worlds - Overpowered mc with hidden powerful enemies. Hmm...that's it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you have any more doubts, you can ask me below this reply. Thanks for reading my books.
Love the novel! So glad we have passed 2000 chapters! Hoping for a regular release schedule so that the novel kicks back up in popularity again! Can’t wait for my boy to grow
story line and character build is very good. I would recommend reading. Only thing I have an issue with is the author has set a 50 chapter privilege but doesn't put out many chapters monthly.
I have read until chapter 500 and there is no change in mc behaviour he is still childish and immature does thing on a whim without any proper planning like the demon invasion part around 400 where he is interrogating the demon general without any fear of surroundings and instead of completing the claim the reward mission of dimensional crevice he is wasting time on that demon and gives time for the general to inform the demon king
Love the book been reading it a long time and just recently started a reread of it after hearing that you were back.
Overall it's a good novel but it has many grammatical and numerical error. Which makes some chapters or topic confusing. Please [img=Cries] edit and correct those error it will be helpful. Tallent swallowing system is good novel.I am currently following it, so I hope u can keep up like it.
Too simplistic. Gave it a try to 100 but not worth the time. characters aren't developed well enough, you can't relate to them. writing style is... just not engaging. story.. eh meh.
Well, first of all the story is interesting. Character development is negligible though ....i mean it feels like i am seeing the MC in every chapter nothing much changes.The world background is huge and the development is very slow but suddenly everything becomes fast faced and sounds forced.....
hello there 👋,I'm currently at chapter 1792 and I do not recommend this novel to your reading until its's finished. because story development is very slow.sometimes author just make 2-3chapter about a item and it's usages and repeat to readers current goals over and over again even though he just mentioned the same thing 5 chapter ago.that's why chapters feels so small. it's been 1792 chapter and feels like if u give another 1792 this novel wouldn't finish. I'm reading this novel by breaks for example my first break was at chapter 400 after 2-3 months started reading again and second break was between chapter 700-800 for 7-9 months.I'm thinking having another break lately.(btw before I took break I always got to latest update) .other than this,there's no romance so far, story is actually very good and interesting.
It's literally one of the best novels I have ever read. The stroyline, the character development, twists and turns and the writing style just intoxicates you so much that you just want the next chapter to be released as soon as possible.
I can't believe that someone from the same country as mine can write novels with this much proficiency! yeah , I wouldn't have believed it but now I do.
Revelar Spoiler
Phew, I can't understand how a protagonist can be such a mindless, idiotic wretch like what we see in this story. I really can't fathom it. Why do you have to make such a 0iq character? It would not be possible to make a sensible protagonist who does not just do everything according to a whim, even when life is in a death situation. I can't understand the parts when there are big fights and the main character just sits to the side and reads the system and everything as if he were on a picnic
would be a great book if it wasnt for the fact you never know if there are going to be new chapters or just left hanging
really liked the novel one of my favorite what ruins it for me is the fact that there wasn"t a new chapter for a very long time really hope to see new chapters in the future its a real gem and is sucks that it gets forgotten because there are no new releases
It's been so long since it was updated so I guess it was dropped? Right when it was getting interesting..
I'll be honest, I hate the MC so much with the way his interaction with the system. Everything else is what you expect of a cultivation type of novel.
Great story, sadly hasn’t been updated in 3 months but well worth taking time out to read. Plot is immaculate & the author was good at making sure the reader stayed wanting more, here I am hoping to get more readers for this story just to get some updates. Can’t even lie, I’ve already reread the story twice & cannot wait for more.
Author, did you quit this story since you started a new one? It's your 3rd story with no updates already.
It's a slow build in the beginning what should have been 2 to 3 chapters has been drawn out to 9 chapters making it really hard to continue reading not really missing much in the first couple of chapters
Was amazing story until author drops it after 1500+ chapters to work on a newer book which is average at best wish author showed some loyalty to readers after 1500 chapters site needs to keep on their authors or encourage them to finish their books so readers will stick around some of us have paid a lot of money for books and it’s a slap In The face to not finish the stories
What more would I say than all the 100+ reviews. All the reviews perfectly summarised what a good plot this novel had but how and from where and why it gone downhill and became a annoying filler novel... For me just one thing I would like to say- This novel has the most annoying irritating System ever in WN history even surpassing those systems in CN novels... Thank you
This story is great but there are SEVERAL issues with it. The author has basically abandoned it for his newest thing, so there is zero consistency in the updates. The chapters themselves are also extremely overpriced, as well as the privilege. You’re better off spending your money on other books.
this story is of much lower quality than talent swallowing hero. the mc here relies entirely on his system only, and mc is a bit stupid. Let's say he fought with an enemy, he leaves the enemy alive. the system immediately sends him a quest then, kill the cunning enemy who is planning to come back to harm you. .. So without system, mc has made many mistakes. I give the story 6.5/10 at max
I loved everything about this book. From the characters to the setting and everything between. I wish I had more time to be able to read it more.
I really enjoy the novel but my biggest problem is he has 10 extra king realm beast amd he just refuses to make them his so much resources put into them but he just refuses and its so aggravating. Currently on chapter 1200
Revelar Spoiler
It is an alright read for pass time and if you want to turn off your brain 😁😊 Read up to Ch 176 and It's very saddening as the MC doesn't fell like the MC. 😔 He is like a random dude chosen as a puppet by the system. Everything gets spoon fed and MC may not be arrogant (😍) but he lacks the critical thinking to deserve his goldfinger. ☹️
Why blocking the chapters ?????????????¿???????????????????????????????????????????????)???????)))))))))????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Great novel with a MC that has a brain and isn’t overally arrogant. Can’t wait to see how strong he gets. Great world building and character develpment.
thanks for reading the comments and taking advice to better your story. I'm loving everything you're doing with it so far I can't wait for more to come out so I can read, enjoy and help as much as a fan can.
I totally love this book. It's well worth the money spent on it. 5⭐'s in my eyes for all categories. As the character develo** so do the plot twists. The chapter cliffhangers are intense and leave you wishing for the next release
It's a really interesting novel plenty of action and character building a would love if the author got in contact with and artist and turn this into a comic.
Revised review of the author:- - Some grammatical mistakes here and there in the initial chapters; however, as long as you don't mind those mistake, I will guarantee regarding the story. - It's going to be a long book. So, be prepared for it. - No harem - Many elemental spirits and spirit beasts - New worlds - Overpowered mc with hidden powerful enemies. Hmm...that's it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you have any more doubts, you can ask me below this reply. Thanks for reading my books.
Love the novel! So glad we have passed 2000 chapters! Hoping for a regular release schedule so that the novel kicks back up in popularity again! Can’t wait for my boy to grow
story line and character build is very good. I would recommend reading. Only thing I have an issue with is the author has set a 50 chapter privilege but doesn't put out many chapters monthly.
I have read until chapter 500 and there is no change in mc behaviour he is still childish and immature does thing on a whim without any proper planning like the demon invasion part around 400 where he is interrogating the demon general without any fear of surroundings and instead of completing the claim the reward mission of dimensional crevice he is wasting time on that demon and gives time for the general to inform the demon king
Love the book been reading it a long time and just recently started a reread of it after hearing that you were back.
Overall it's a good novel but it has many grammatical and numerical error. Which makes some chapters or topic confusing. Please [img=Cries] edit and correct those error it will be helpful. Tallent swallowing system is good novel.I am currently following it, so I hope u can keep up like it.
Too simplistic. Gave it a try to 100 but not worth the time. characters aren't developed well enough, you can't relate to them. writing style is... just not engaging. story.. eh meh.
Well, first of all the story is interesting. Character development is negligible though ....i mean it feels like i am seeing the MC in every chapter nothing much changes.The world background is huge and the development is very slow but suddenly everything becomes fast faced and sounds forced.....
hello there 👋,I'm currently at chapter 1792 and I do not recommend this novel to your reading until its's finished. because story development is very slow.sometimes author just make 2-3chapter about a item and it's usages and repeat to readers current goals over and over again even though he just mentioned the same thing 5 chapter ago.that's why chapters feels so small. it's been 1792 chapter and feels like if u give another 1792 this novel wouldn't finish. I'm reading this novel by breaks for example my first break was at chapter 400 after 2-3 months started reading again and second break was between chapter 700-800 for 7-9 months.I'm thinking having another break lately.(btw before I took break I always got to latest update) .other than this,there's no romance so far, story is actually very good and interesting.
It's literally one of the best novels I have ever read. The stroyline, the character development, twists and turns and the writing style just intoxicates you so much that you just want the next chapter to be released as soon as possible.
I can't believe that someone from the same country as mine can write novels with this much proficiency! yeah , I wouldn't have believed it but now I do.
Revelar Spoiler Phew, I can't understand how a protagonist can be such a mindless, idiotic wretch like what we see in this story. I really can't fathom it. Why do you have to make such a 0iq character? It would not be possible to make a sensible protagonist who does not just do everything according to a whim, even when life is in a death situation. I can't understand the parts when there are big fights and the main character just sits to the side and reads the system and everything as if he were on a picnic
would be a great book if it wasnt for the fact you never know if there are going to be new chapters or just left hanging
really liked the novel one of my favorite what ruins it for me is the fact that there wasn"t a new chapter for a very long time really hope to see new chapters in the future its a real gem and is sucks that it gets forgotten because there are no new releases
It's been so long since it was updated so I guess it was dropped? Right when it was getting interesting..
I'll be honest, I hate the MC so much with the way his interaction with the system. Everything else is what you expect of a cultivation type of novel.
Great story, sadly hasn’t been updated in 3 months but well worth taking time out to read. Plot is immaculate & the author was good at making sure the reader stayed wanting more, here I am hoping to get more readers for this story just to get some updates. Can’t even lie, I’ve already reread the story twice & cannot wait for more.
Author, did you quit this story since you started a new one? It's your 3rd story with no updates already.
It's a slow build in the beginning what should have been 2 to 3 chapters has been drawn out to 9 chapters making it really hard to continue reading not really missing much in the first couple of chapters
Was amazing story until author drops it after 1500+ chapters to work on a newer book which is average at best wish author showed some loyalty to readers after 1500 chapters site needs to keep on their authors or encourage them to finish their books so readers will stick around some of us have paid a lot of money for books and it’s a slap In The face to not finish the stories
What more would I say than all the 100+ reviews. All the reviews perfectly summarised what a good plot this novel had but how and from where and why it gone downhill and became a annoying filler novel... For me just one thing I would like to say- This novel has the most annoying irritating System ever in WN history even surpassing those systems in CN novels... Thank you
This story is great but there are SEVERAL issues with it. The author has basically abandoned it for his newest thing, so there is zero consistency in the updates. The chapters themselves are also extremely overpriced, as well as the privilege. You’re better off spending your money on other books.
this story is of much lower quality than talent swallowing hero. the mc here relies entirely on his system only, and mc is a bit stupid. Let's say he fought with an enemy, he leaves the enemy alive. the system immediately sends him a quest then, kill the cunning enemy who is planning to come back to harm you. .. So without system, mc has made many mistakes. I give the story 6.5/10 at max
I loved everything about this book. From the characters to the setting and everything between. I wish I had more time to be able to read it more.
I really enjoy the novel but my biggest problem is he has 10 extra king realm beast amd he just refuses to make them his so much resources put into them but he just refuses and its so aggravating. Currently on chapter 1200
Revelar Spoiler It is an alright read for pass time and if you want to turn off your brain 😁😊 Read up to Ch 176 and It's very saddening as the MC doesn't fell like the MC. 😔 He is like a random dude chosen as a puppet by the system. Everything gets spoon fed and MC may not be arrogant (😍) but he lacks the critical thinking to deserve his goldfinger. ☹️
Why blocking the chapters ?????????????¿???????????????????????????????????????????????)???????)))))))))????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Great novel with a MC that has a brain and isn’t overally arrogant. Can’t wait to see how strong he gets. Great world building and character develpment.
thanks for reading the comments and taking advice to better your story. I'm loving everything you're doing with it so far I can't wait for more to come out so I can read, enjoy and help as much as a fan can.
I totally love this book. It's well worth the money spent on it. 5⭐'s in my eyes for all categories. As the character develo** so do the plot twists. The chapter cliffhangers are intense and leave you wishing for the next release