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Escreva uma avaliaçãoA Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
I love this story so much it's all I'm thinking about! Love Quinn and all the other characters. Storyline is perfect. It has humor too!! Simply the Best! !
Absolutely loved the book! Bought all your work off Amazon and what you don’t have there I been reading here! But I was so sad with how Quinn story ended! Amazing book and can’t wait for more of the franchise.
Ever since my husband got me divorced for the past 2 years, i v'e not been my self. I was reviewing some post of how i could get back my husband then, i saw a testimony shared by Marina Choas from SWEDEN about a spell caster named Dr. Okosun. I contacted Marina Chaos to confirm about how Dr. Okosun helped her and she clarified everything to me of how he helped her and that gave me the courage to get in touch with Dr. OKosun for help. Dr. Okosun assured me that my days of sorrows will be over within 48hours after he has finished with his work. I followed his instructions he gave to me because i had the believe, faith, hope and trust in him. Verily i say to you today that i and my husband are back together and i can proudly say and testify to the world of what Dr. Okosun did for me. Contact him today via E-mail:(Okosunspelltemple33 @ gmail . com call him or whatsapp him +2.3.4.8.0.5.4.3.3.8.1.3.2 if you seek his help.
I love this book so much! Most definitely my most favorite series ever!!! 😍🤩 I can't wait to here more about Quins story! I do wonder why this isn't a webtoon / Manga version for this series? (There's one for the dragon and werewolf system so I'm sad this one was left out) Also I would be so happy if it was made into a anime show!!!! (As long as the story was the same, of course)
Great plot and story.telling, overall a fun and addictive story. The story Reads Iike and RPG, except the game platform, is my mind. I love it. I wish I, too, can earn XPs and participate as an active player. However, the writing style is not the best. I kept being distracted by the Grammer and spelling errors, as well as the use of so many redundancies, Eg., " small little, tiny little," etc. It takes away from the flow and brings the reader out of the story. I am really not a Grammer police or anything, but at times, I had to try to figure out what word the author was trying to say, like architecture spelled as "arciteterer.""" Please let me know if you would like a proofreader. I would be happy to proofread your future works (even for free). You have quite an imaginative mind and excellent story abilities. Keep at it. No cap, DM me if you need a proofreader for real,
I love the characters development from children to adults but progressively mentally getting stronger even tho they are in previous others spots
Revelar Spoilerthis story has the most idiotic characters and mc I've ever read. it's to the point where I'm convinced that the author bought his way here. everyone kept telling me "it gets better" but nobody said I'd have to read through 500+ chapters of mediocre plot and horrendous writing.
hooked. cant stop. love it. excellent everything, first webnovel I ever read but those since have all been a little down on my rankings, the best one I ever read, have since read mds and the latest mws, please, moooooooooooaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr. Read 900chaps of dark magus returns but then realised mws had a bunch of new chaps and immediately got back on, smae sort of story with level up zombie, both arent as good as this masterpiece imo, and I always try to read the latest updates on this universe.
A really good book. I had read it up until 100+ chapters before and it is still interesting to re-read from the beginning
I am in chapter 11, and I really love how the character development arc is going! I can understand why my friend suggested this title. Good read, highly recommended for vampire novel fans.
the most idiotic main character I've ever seen. it's to the point where the mc would die instantly if it wasn't for plot . the "convenient" situations he finds himself in constantly shows the lazy fking writing and how poorly thought out the story actually was. it's shocking me how this novel has remained so high on the rankings for such a long time and maybe it gets better further in but 287 chapters of reading the most idiotic and fuvking brain dead main character to ever exist is unbearable for me .
Unique concept. Gets hard to follow post 1500 chapters or so. Can get pretty clunky in terms of writing consistency. I see the vision/ambition though. Too much unnecessary deaths tho. Really did not like Leo’s death. Paul’s too. Laxmus sounds like a really important character but written to be…. anti-climatic? Also too much plot holes/unresolved stuff. It was never explained how Erin lost her memory. Malik felt like a really strange character; feel like he shouldn't be a character at all. Has a backstory but his death is so incredibly anti-climatic, bro got scared and died just like that and he’s a godslayer. Like wtf? Also what happened to Clark Talon? He only appeared as the familiar instructor and that’s it. It was said that Quinn is to free the black sword fully but that was never done, like it was forgotten. and Xox. whats his condition? I think MVS deserves a rewrite tho.
Revelar Spoilerthis was a great story once I got started i couldn't stop pocket FM was too slow so I went online and found a better way then for the next 3 days all I did was read went ,down to the wire between old lady leaving or reaching the end of the story luckily I finished just in time recommending it to all
great book all the way around. I do wish there weren't so many Grammer errors though. I will say that if I remember right around the 1000 chapter mark (right after quin wakes up from his 1000 year slumber) it can get dry, but keep reading! the final ark with immorttui is phenomenal. I did bounce between 2 different platforms when reading so I don't know if it says I finished it or not but I read the whole thing and the author is a master at keeping you on the edge of your seat. a question for the author, I read my dragon system and I'm reading my werewolf system and I was wondering, when quin goes to get the God slayer Armour and runs into the man who gives him the crystal for his mask, is that character tying in anywhere? I was wondering if it was a character from Mds? he seemed to be described as a mage. also amazing plot twist at the end. I never saw it coming that Richard eno was still alive. any chance he's a celestial?
Revelar SpoilerThe story had me on the edge of my seat. excellent plot twists, reasonable theme and setting changes well done to keep the story at large kept as a surprise which always kept me curious what was happening next. definately the author's best work and well placed in the universe of their other titles.
Revelar SpoilerI love this story and the development. I just really enjoy the whole concept, and wish I could listen to it easier
Truly one of the best stories out there, at first I didn’t like Quinn he made stupid decisions but he’s a child I guess but the way he grows is incredible and the way he overcomes conflicts is unique. The later chapters after the the final Dalki war were so fun to read I couldn’t stop reading. By the time it came to an end I was so sad that it ended and how it ended
I.M.H.H.O. there is a lot of room for "What if" spinoff alternatives and series editions which could be created with the author's permission or by the author himself but the story as-is was a pleasure to read and hear. I look forward to discovering unexplored topics and possibilities such as why Leo had Ray Talen's Dragon eyes vision or the possibility of twins resulting from the union of Quinn and Paul's daughter the succubus. I have endless concepts but no writing talent, patience nor tedious detail mind to make any spin-off manuscripts myself.
So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸
Revelar SpoilerA Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
I love this story so much it's all I'm thinking about! Love Quinn and all the other characters. Storyline is perfect. It has humor too!! Simply the Best! !
Absolutely loved the book! Bought all your work off Amazon and what you don’t have there I been reading here! But I was so sad with how Quinn story ended! Amazing book and can’t wait for more of the franchise.
Ever since my husband got me divorced for the past 2 years, i v'e not been my self. I was reviewing some post of how i could get back my husband then, i saw a testimony shared by Marina Choas from SWEDEN about a spell caster named Dr. Okosun. I contacted Marina Chaos to confirm about how Dr. Okosun helped her and she clarified everything to me of how he helped her and that gave me the courage to get in touch with Dr. OKosun for help. Dr. Okosun assured me that my days of sorrows will be over within 48hours after he has finished with his work. I followed his instructions he gave to me because i had the believe, faith, hope and trust in him. Verily i say to you today that i and my husband are back together and i can proudly say and testify to the world of what Dr. Okosun did for me. Contact him today via E-mail:(Okosunspelltemple33 @ gmail . com call him or whatsapp him +2.3.4.8.0.5.4.3.3.8.1.3.2 if you seek his help.
I love this book so much! Most definitely my most favorite series ever!!! 😍🤩 I can't wait to here more about Quins story! I do wonder why this isn't a webtoon / Manga version for this series? (There's one for the dragon and werewolf system so I'm sad this one was left out) Also I would be so happy if it was made into a anime show!!!! (As long as the story was the same, of course)
Great plot and story.telling, overall a fun and addictive story. The story Reads Iike and RPG, except the game platform, is my mind. I love it. I wish I, too, can earn XPs and participate as an active player. However, the writing style is not the best. I kept being distracted by the Grammer and spelling errors, as well as the use of so many redundancies, Eg., " small little, tiny little," etc. It takes away from the flow and brings the reader out of the story. I am really not a Grammer police or anything, but at times, I had to try to figure out what word the author was trying to say, like architecture spelled as "arciteterer.""" Please let me know if you would like a proofreader. I would be happy to proofread your future works (even for free). You have quite an imaginative mind and excellent story abilities. Keep at it. No cap, DM me if you need a proofreader for real,
I love the characters development from children to adults but progressively mentally getting stronger even tho they are in previous others spots
Revelar Spoilerthis story has the most idiotic characters and mc I've ever read. it's to the point where I'm convinced that the author bought his way here. everyone kept telling me "it gets better" but nobody said I'd have to read through 500+ chapters of mediocre plot and horrendous writing.
hooked. cant stop. love it. excellent everything, first webnovel I ever read but those since have all been a little down on my rankings, the best one I ever read, have since read mds and the latest mws, please, moooooooooooaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr. Read 900chaps of dark magus returns but then realised mws had a bunch of new chaps and immediately got back on, smae sort of story with level up zombie, both arent as good as this masterpiece imo, and I always try to read the latest updates on this universe.
A really good book. I had read it up until 100+ chapters before and it is still interesting to re-read from the beginning
I am in chapter 11, and I really love how the character development arc is going! I can understand why my friend suggested this title. Good read, highly recommended for vampire novel fans.
the most idiotic main character I've ever seen. it's to the point where the mc would die instantly if it wasn't for plot . the "convenient" situations he finds himself in constantly shows the lazy fking writing and how poorly thought out the story actually was. it's shocking me how this novel has remained so high on the rankings for such a long time and maybe it gets better further in but 287 chapters of reading the most idiotic and fuvking brain dead main character to ever exist is unbearable for me .
Unique concept. Gets hard to follow post 1500 chapters or so. Can get pretty clunky in terms of writing consistency. I see the vision/ambition though. Too much unnecessary deaths tho. Really did not like Leo’s death. Paul’s too. Laxmus sounds like a really important character but written to be…. anti-climatic? Also too much plot holes/unresolved stuff. It was never explained how Erin lost her memory. Malik felt like a really strange character; feel like he shouldn't be a character at all. Has a backstory but his death is so incredibly anti-climatic, bro got scared and died just like that and he’s a godslayer. Like wtf? Also what happened to Clark Talon? He only appeared as the familiar instructor and that’s it. It was said that Quinn is to free the black sword fully but that was never done, like it was forgotten. and Xox. whats his condition? I think MVS deserves a rewrite tho.
Revelar Spoilerthis was a great story once I got started i couldn't stop pocket FM was too slow so I went online and found a better way then for the next 3 days all I did was read went ,down to the wire between old lady leaving or reaching the end of the story luckily I finished just in time recommending it to all
great book all the way around. I do wish there weren't so many Grammer errors though. I will say that if I remember right around the 1000 chapter mark (right after quin wakes up from his 1000 year slumber) it can get dry, but keep reading! the final ark with immorttui is phenomenal. I did bounce between 2 different platforms when reading so I don't know if it says I finished it or not but I read the whole thing and the author is a master at keeping you on the edge of your seat. a question for the author, I read my dragon system and I'm reading my werewolf system and I was wondering, when quin goes to get the God slayer Armour and runs into the man who gives him the crystal for his mask, is that character tying in anywhere? I was wondering if it was a character from Mds? he seemed to be described as a mage. also amazing plot twist at the end. I never saw it coming that Richard eno was still alive. any chance he's a celestial?
Revelar SpoilerThe story had me on the edge of my seat. excellent plot twists, reasonable theme and setting changes well done to keep the story at large kept as a surprise which always kept me curious what was happening next. definately the author's best work and well placed in the universe of their other titles.
Revelar SpoilerI love this story and the development. I just really enjoy the whole concept, and wish I could listen to it easier
Truly one of the best stories out there, at first I didn’t like Quinn he made stupid decisions but he’s a child I guess but the way he grows is incredible and the way he overcomes conflicts is unique. The later chapters after the the final Dalki war were so fun to read I couldn’t stop reading. By the time it came to an end I was so sad that it ended and how it ended
I.M.H.H.O. there is a lot of room for "What if" spinoff alternatives and series editions which could be created with the author's permission or by the author himself but the story as-is was a pleasure to read and hear. I look forward to discovering unexplored topics and possibilities such as why Leo had Ray Talen's Dragon eyes vision or the possibility of twins resulting from the union of Quinn and Paul's daughter the succubus. I have endless concepts but no writing talent, patience nor tedious detail mind to make any spin-off manuscripts myself.
So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸
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