Capítulo 463: Rise of the False Hope
From millennium-old roots to drooping bark and oozing sap, up to the slender branches basking in the sun, rot consumed them all in mere moments. The trunk splintered in two as Wilhelm descended into the ruin, the cries of countless now-homeless creatures resonating, echoing, before gradually fading away.
Wilhelm's eyes blazed with a white, flaming aura. Within the ruins, only four souls remained, paired off; Merlin stood with Dag near the entrance, while Ver Dilen and Sindre occupied the bottom, where Wilhelm had landed.
Whether due to Wilhelm's increased strength or the fallen tree, the ruin quaked as he landed on a stone pillar in a rippling lake. He rolled forward like an unstoppable ball of white flames, sprinting towards Sindre faster than ever before.
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Random_writer
Random_writer Got a longer chapter than usual for you folks so I hope you enjoy it! This chapter I experimented to see how chatGPT fairs as an editor (god knows it's story telling is..."interesting"). I'll be honest I felt like I was wrestling for it to tell me anything about revision, and it's language is so different from what I use so I disregarded a LOT of what it said.
I think, however, it was slightly useful if you give it a good editing-prompt such as "Is this grammatically correct, does it flow well, and does it maintain paraellism" and if you go one. Paragraph. at. a. time.
Overall it was frustrating, but I'll admit it gave a few pointers of how things flowed and I took away a few verb choices from it like "trembling" or "careened". This software seems best as an editor tool to the final product rather than a way to create.
Do you guys have any feedback? Does the writing seem to be different at all? Better or worse? Please let me know your thoughts in the comments.
Presentes
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recebido Status de energia semanal
-- Ranking de
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-- Pedra de
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