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luffy back in time (completed)
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It's the final battle at Raftel, Luffy and his pirate crew vs the marines. The battle is going back and forth with many casualties from both sides and at the last moment of the battle, Trafalgar Law dies.
Law is determined to make one last move to help Luffy win, so just before his death, he uses his fruits' special ability and sacrifices himself to give Luffy immortality.
One thousand years later Luffy manages to find a way to return back in time, so he could help his friends and family make their dreams come true since he already achieved his, and was eaten by the guilt of being the only one that did so.
Join Luffy in his journey to help those who helped him, and have a little fun along the way
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THE BACKGROUND OF THE STORY IS REALLY CREATIVE LIKE LUFFY GOING BACK IN TIME!!! BUT THE STORY IS SOO RUSHED IT WENT FROM 0-100 IN LIKE A CHP!!! AND THE MC IS SUPER OP!!! U DON'T NEED TO NERF HIM BUT GO WITH THE FLOW MAN DON'T TRY TO RUSH EVERYTHING!!! IF U DO IT PROPERLY IT WILL BE A REALLY GOOD BOOK!!!
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Is there going to be any romance in this story. I’ve always thought it was stupid that in the anime he had Boa running after him but they made him an idiot who doesn’t know anything besides eating and fighting. It doesn’t have to be a harem but at least let him have a girlfriend.
I like the story, so far fun i guess.. Luffy became OP, what he want change from Became a Pirate King to be Hangout With Friend.. if u out there try to find HQ writing this is not for u, author still improving the same with canon. not for u because the author is not oda story time line messed up, different with canon. one again this is not ODA
A character that has been alive for mire than a thousand years wouldn't and shouldn't be losing to a freaking 10 year old I don't care if he is only 7 he lived for 1000 years that plus haki gives him no reason to lose
Yo if you have some free time plz upgrade More I enjoy this story want More I know im being Selfish but im bored 🥲😅😓😓😬😌🙃🙂🙃🙂🙃🙂🙃🙂
Interesting concept.. Well i hope u in the future make it a little romance for MC.. I dnt really care who he paired with..!! Good luck la.
the plot is good... but some there are some questions that i have about some characters
Good but still you rushed up everything bruhit should have been nice if it was have some common sense such as dragon not surprised by knowing luffy knows haki and other techniques but, y'll know my man garp's a bit dumb/stupid.....
Indeed a very good story, especially the end 😎… I feel like Luffy went too crazy during the start. However it was needed since he did get spotted by an admiral above the ‘holy land’. Other than that it was a very beautiful story.
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A gostei foi muito bem aplicadas ouvi senas que não pressionavam ser explicadas e a integração dos pow persornagens ficou muito boa e o decorre da história até o final ficou muito boa
The Story is good but loses points in story development as it sometimes deviates from the original story, has many interesting components
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This is a great idea and is pretty well done. The author is continually improving, and really manages to capture the feel of One Piece in certain chapters. I really enjoy reading it and am eager for more!
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this story is very good, I can't wait for the boa hancock to appear, continue don't give up on this story plz
just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review.
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Can't really give a reason to why I injoy this but It is good enough that I will read it when I see it updated unless there something else that I like more that's been updated but this a good read.
Volume 1
- 1 chapter 1 - the final battle 4 years ago
- 2 Story begins 4 years ago
- 3 chapter 3 4 years ago
- 4 chapter 4- back in time 4 years ago
- 5 chapter 5- the training 4 years ago
- 6 chapter 6- first fight 4 years ago
- 7 chapter 7- teacher 4 years ago
- 8 chapter 8- Dragon 4 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9- Sabo's decision 4 years ago
- 10 chapter 10- goodbye and determination 4 years ago
- 11 chapter 11- true monsters 4 years ago
- 12 chapter 12- crew (part 1) 4 years ago
- 13 chapter 13- crew part 2 4 years ago
- 14 chapter 14- Usopp 4 years ago
- 15 chapter 15- Whitebeard 4 years ago
- 16 chapter 16- The decision 4 years ago
- 17 chapter 17- a "small" incident 4 years ago
- 18 chapter 18- the bouty 4 years ago
- 19 warning shot 4 years ago
- 20 chapter 20- a costly mistake 4 years ago
- 21 chapter 21- heartfelt reunion 4 years ago
- 22 chapter 22- the calm before the storm 4 years ago
- 23 chapter 23- Marineford 4 years ago
- 24 chapter 24- show 4 years ago
- 25 chapter 25- start of a revolution 4 years ago
- 26 sorry but no chapter today 4 years ago
- 27 chapter 26- Mihawk 4 years ago
- 28 chapter 26- strongest sworsman 4 years ago
- 29 chapter 27- the five elders 4 years ago
- 30 chapter 28- Shanks 4 years ago
- 31 Chapter 29- Katakuri 4 years ago
- 32 chapter 30- Germa 66 part 1 4 years ago
- 33 Break until the 1st of July 4 years ago
- 34 chapter 31- Germa 66 part two 4 years ago
- 35 chapter 32- Germa 66 part 3 4 years ago
- 36 Explanation 4 years ago
- 37 chapter 33- Five hits 4 years ago
- 38 Chapter 34- The pet dragon 4 years ago
- 39 Chapter 35- Set sail to alabasta 4 years ago
- 40 Chapter 36- Unexpected meeting 4 years ago
- 41 Chapter 37- Time for a leather bag 4 years ago
- 42 Chapter 38- A free Alabasta! Well, almost 4 years ago
- 43 Chapter 39- Failure 4 years ago
- 44 Chapter 40- Heart to heart talk 4 years ago
- 45 No chapter today 4 years ago
- 46 Chapter 41- Relationships {get your mind out of the gutter} 4 years ago
- 47 Sooo, I won't be able to upload new chapters until Friday 4 years ago
- 48 Sorry but I can't upload just yet 4 years ago
- 49 Chapter 42- Two giants 4 years ago
- 50 Chapter 43- The fight ends 4 years ago
- 51 Chapter 44- New allies (Part 1) 4 years ago
- 52 Chapter 45- New allies (part 2) 4 years ago
- 53 Chapter 46- A Rear Admiral 4 years ago
- 54 Chapter 47- A simple reason 4 years ago
- 55 Stockpiling chapters for new fanfic 4 years ago
- 56 Chapter 48- A spar 4 years ago
- 57 Chapter 49- A family visit 4 years ago
- 58 Chapter 50- Plans 4 years ago
- 59 Chapter 51- a delusional god 4 years ago
- 60 Chapter 52- The wait 4 years ago
- 61 Chapter 53- Well that was... Something 3 years ago
- 62 Chapter 54- The city of gold 3 years ago
- 63 Chapter 55- The rise of an empire 3 years ago
- 64 Chapter 56- 2 years of training and some minor conquest 3 years ago
- 65 Chapter 57- The return of the emperor 3 years ago
- 66 Chapter 58- Reactions and a surprise 3 years ago
- 67 Chapter 58- Franky 3 years ago
- 68 Chapter 59- Preparation 3 years ago
- 69 Chapter 60- Taking over Water-7 3 years ago
- 70 Chapter 61- Final preparations 3 years ago
- 71 I'm moving houses, so the chapter will be out on Saturday. 3 years ago
- 72 Chapter 62- The Green Bull makes an entrance 3 years ago
- 73 A little awkward, but I have a seminar untill the weekend. 3 years ago
- 74 A raging bull 3 years ago
- 75 Chapter 63- Clash 3 years ago
- 76 Chapter 64- Lacking 3 years ago
- 77 Chapter 65 - A crafty cat 3 years ago
- 78 Chapter 66- Danger 3 years ago
- 79 Chapter 67 - The fight ends 3 years ago
- 80 Chapter 68- The importance of media 3 years ago
- 81 Chapter 69- No more games 3 years ago
- 82 Chapter 70- Gathering forces 3 years ago
- 83 Chapter 71- Elbaf: where the strong reign supreme 3 years ago
- 84 Chapter 72- Odin's fall 3 years ago
- 85 Chapter 73- Plans 3 years ago
- 86 Chapter 74- Destruction 3 years ago
- 87 Chapter 75 - The rematch 3 years ago
- 88 Chapter 76 - A safer world 3 years ago
- 89 Chapter 77 - Epilogue 3 years ago
Good fanfic ,only need to write more to improve... Good idea of sending Luffy back in time although it's a pity he can't bring his immortal body that had been trained to epitome of strength...