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Imagine getting threatened to write a review. I sadly enough can relate... The story is certainly very cool and it is something different from the usual dxd fanfics. MC is badass and pretty overpowered and there are traps which get hunted by a trap hunter. There is also an anime guy version of spongebob who annihilates entire forces. He is on equal grounds with Ophis and it was a really epic fight. Furthermore, there is also a chuuni which is a simp for a little kid... Truly a special story.
So this is a DxD fic you all know the Ecchi world known for its absurdness for OPPAIS!!! Ahem sorry for getting side tracked. This fic here shows the Angel and exorcist side of the DxD supernatural world. Unlike mine which focuses on Devils. Dude we'll always stand opposite to each other. Peace was never an option 😂
OK. Shameless review. My story follows the side of the church. As such it will be more about the surface than the underworld. I will explore many subjects. Mainly about the church, exorcist, omnyoji, Yokai, and European monsters. Of course, I won't forget the gods and the devils. They will all play a role. For those who know my other story, they know I am not absorbed into a harem. My mc will have a harem. But each relationship will be fleshed out and the girls won't instantly fall for him. What more not all his friends who are girls will necessarily enter his harem. Anyway, I already decided on most members. I hope you'll love my story.
_____________________________________________muy bueno_____________lo mejor de lo mejor_____________________________quiero más capitulos______________________ porfavor dame más capitulos______________________________
I have not read it and am waiting for chapters to build up, but redlaws other books are very good so imma just write a review based purely on his other books.
very good, melo, the best,etc... .........................................................................................................................................
Xd de borró mi reseña por accidente había tapado con un dedo donde decía harén y la borre jaajajaj perdón por no confiar más en ti autor pero con ese simple cualquiera se confunde 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👹👹👹👹🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽
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Don't know **** about reviews so don't expect it to be good or constructive Writing quality : Its nice and straight to the point ( albeit too much sometimes ), my complaint is that you overuse words like "although" , "but still" etc.. and you **** on the rule of "show don't tell" , yeah its cool that Mc bathed with hot nuns since 1 but it would be better if he told the fact to someone rather then telling us directly. Stability of updates : its daily so 5 stars Story development : The story only have 10 chaps so can't say much about that except that I like where it is going so 4 for now Character design : I like Az , he's cool and all but for now he is but a naive boy ( and I hate that REEEE ) so a 3 for now , he got potential and I am eager to see how will he evolve into World design : Its DxD , only watched some of the show ( and i didn't like it much , echii is good and all but the Oppai thjng gets old real fast ) and read the wiki and I find its world really interesting so you get 5 stars for free P-Please help , Red has my family and force me to write reviews for him
Imagine getting threatened to write a review. I sadly enough can relate... The story is certainly very cool and it is something different from the usual dxd fanfics. MC is badass and pretty overpowered and there are traps which get hunted by a trap hunter. There is also an anime guy version of spongebob who annihilates entire forces. He is on equal grounds with Ophis and it was a really epic fight. Furthermore, there is also a chuuni which is a simp for a little kid... Truly a special story.
So this is a DxD fic you all know the Ecchi world known for its absurdness for OPPAIS!!! Ahem sorry for getting side tracked. This fic here shows the Angel and exorcist side of the DxD supernatural world. Unlike mine which focuses on Devils. Dude we'll always stand opposite to each other. Peace was never an option 😂
OK. Shameless review. My story follows the side of the church. As such it will be more about the surface than the underworld. I will explore many subjects. Mainly about the church, exorcist, omnyoji, Yokai, and European monsters. Of course, I won't forget the gods and the devils. They will all play a role. For those who know my other story, they know I am not absorbed into a harem. My mc will have a harem. But each relationship will be fleshed out and the girls won't instantly fall for him. What more not all his friends who are girls will necessarily enter his harem. Anyway, I already decided on most members. I hope you'll love my story.
_____________________________________________muy bueno_____________lo mejor de lo mejor_____________________________quiero más capitulos______________________ porfavor dame más capitulos______________________________
I have not read it and am waiting for chapters to build up, but redlaws other books are very good so imma just write a review based purely on his other books.
very good, melo, the best,etc... .........................................................................................................................................
Xd de borró mi reseña por accidente había tapado con un dedo donde decía harén y la borre jaajajaj perdón por no confiar más en ti autor pero con ese simple cualquiera se confunde 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👹👹👹👹🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽🇲🇽
Revelar Spoiler
Don't know **** about reviews so don't expect it to be good or constructive Writing quality : Its nice and straight to the point ( albeit too much sometimes ), my complaint is that you overuse words like "although" , "but still" etc.. and you **** on the rule of "show don't tell" , yeah its cool that Mc bathed with hot nuns since 1 but it would be better if he told the fact to someone rather then telling us directly. Stability of updates : its daily so 5 stars Story development : The story only have 10 chaps so can't say much about that except that I like where it is going so 4 for now Character design : I like Az , he's cool and all but for now he is but a naive boy ( and I hate that REEEE ) so a 3 for now , he got potential and I am eager to see how will he evolve into World design : Its DxD , only watched some of the show ( and i didn't like it much , echii is good and all but the Oppai thjng gets old real fast ) and read the wiki and I find its world really interesting so you get 5 stars for free P-Please help , Red has my family and force me to write reviews for him