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Anyone who reads this novel will feel like they are reading three novels. It is divided into three parts. The first story, around chapters 1-400, is the best part. Even though it's a bit repetitive, you can still enjoy the adventure of discovering new things. and structure the protagonist's city The second part is around chapters 400-600. The story is much more rushed compared to the writing pace of the first part. The author skips the plot and cuts scenes frequently, causing the reading to stall at times. But it's still not considered too bad. The third part, chapter 600-820, I can only read chapter 650+ because this can no longer be called a Lord of Oasis novel. The author discards all of the past storylines of side characters and opens a new plot using the protagonist and a character called Banduk (who has more roles than the protagonist) in the story to fight enemies. The narration is so bad that I wonder if this can even be called a novel.
the story started out strong and was great for a long while. but after the MC took over the Dukedom of Leo, the story quality rapidly went down and changed in a terrible way. Bunduk suddenly was no longer the apostle of the underworld. was never brought up again and he no longer uses the power/abilities he had before. the System hasnt been talked about or used in a long time. When the MC finally created the empire, he didnt get any of the rewards that was promised. havent even heard about Mages in a long time either. its like the Author completely got rid of the MCs magic forces and is keeping it strictly normal forces. and speaking of the MC, he is barely a part of the story anymore. we now follow his soldiers more then we even care about the MC. i loved this story and how it was with the Mount and blade system. but now its no longer fun or exciting to read. sorry Author but you should have kept it the way it was before.
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The novel is awesome, I just get the impression that the author has some "prejudices" against women😭it's so funny.😭😭😭 these little remarks like "The bottom line for him was a layer of membrane that he could break through at any time... JUST LIKE A WOMAN!😡😡😡"
the start is quite bad but the story starts getting good after around a hundred chapters but by the six hundredth chapter it becomes inconsistent and destroys most development in the MC's powers and personality as well as changing from a cool neriteve to a neriteve that is full of holes and inconsistencyies
Cheap system. this would have been more fun if he had more side quests and special quests to do with additional a little bit of cultivation, levelling, exploration, and loot. but i guess the authors creativity is a little bit lacking, and mostly, he relies on mount and blade contents.
So far, so good. I'm enjoying it, even though I just started it. Once you click it up, it's hard to put it down. 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 Awesome work, author.
I liked the story until now, which is around 300 chaps.. the translation went awry a lot of times which was quite frustrating.. also does this thing have a map? like the map of dukedom of leo, the desert and senwaya range? its so confusing to imagine.. would have been better with a map.. i mean kingdom building ones gotta have a map right? ahhhh give me a map plz
It’s built up so well, so much background masses with a little mystery but not focused on too hard to make it either annoying or tiresome. Some reviewers complain about the Mc being stupid and needing to think for himself but he is intelligent and conducts himself well. However, around about chapter 100, or a little earlier the writing quality makes a complete nosedive so that it’s almost impossible to keep track of what’s going on - names change randomly, words don’t make complete sentence or just come out as a garbled mess etc. Even before this, there is sometimes an excess of sentences that prolong a scene far too long. AND, one of the main plot points is that he needs the system currency which in itself isn’t an issue. Some reviewers complain about him using magical artefacts etc but he only does it once as far as I’ve read and they weren’t even that useful ones, he usually gets the currency other ways. But, he spends the currency mainly on paying a standing army which has no use for the currency since he basically houses, feeds them etc and there is no economy in the place - why do they need cash? Plus, he doesn’t pay his peasants which is reasonable as most lords wouldn’t: but in the Middle Ages most people were ‘vassals’ of a lord and wouldn’t need paying, just status, land etc. While high class units might need payment, that would usually only be after battles or great services. But really, don’t get into the book because while all other problems are fine to overlook and can be easily ignored without affecting the plot and stuff too much with an intelligent, cold mc; the translation quality becomes absolute dogsh*t. I imagine if you understand Chinese then the taws may be worth a read since unlike most Chinese novels this doesn’t have useless posturing, a stupid male mc saving the woman with a super op system, or a long explanation about some super reputable figure having to bow to the mc after being an arrogant pr*ck for no reason or a cliche best friend called fatty wang.
This book is not that bad. My only issue is the translation quality and the main character’s lack of depth. Other than that, the plot is somewhat questionable, but still bearable. Overall, an okay read 👍
Comrades, can anyone explain what happened in chapter 630? What happened to the author? I like assumptions and theories, but I have not found a simple explanation. Before that, it was tolerable, it felt like I was reading my own Google-translated texts (I’m bad with English, I use Google), but at least it was interesting. If you find out something, please write under this comment or just in the reviews, I want to know how it happened.
Those after Chapter 629 are missing. It has nothing to do with the plot. I read "Mount and Blade" because I loved it, but the lack of episodes disappointed me.
It's like you are reading 2 different stories. I just assume the story end at chapter 629, cause the chapter after that is totally different story with the MC name is the same.
Nice plot but pretty repetitive. A lot of information is repeated. Like a lot, as if the author was just trying to pad words. This pattern seems to repeat al the way to 629. Around chapter 630, the plot changes. Let's talk about how different the plot is. At the end of 629, Kant says they will march to attack the undead in three days. At the start of 630, the undead have apparently been handled. Bunduk is the only remaining hero left from all the heroes he had previously and has seemingly lost his special powers and become an ordinary person. New characters and terms have appeared in place of the other heroes and the Mount and Blade terms. His subordinates seem to have become normal people and not just blindly loyal soldiers. The previous plot with the world nobles seems to have never happened and it basically forgets the whole system that the story is based on. The new plot is based on things that never happened in the original story. I looked for the mtl and the translation definitely follows the mtl. I really have no idea what happened. Maybe Mount and Blade finally caught on to what was happening and stopped the author from using those terms. The novel also ends in like 200 chapters, so idk how the author intends on ending a new story that started 3/4's through the story
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The butter lords shall rule all.The butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule all
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500 chapter is and the conclusion it's:trash...yep kind of trash ,i regret Reading it, the translation it's decent, the story it's repetitive (like 70% it's just useless filler information ) the kingdom building it's quite nice actually but romance...it doesn't exist ,also kant killed quite few "beautiful girl/women" i can say he has a sadistic pleasure in killing girls...yea it's a trash novel, in final it's so repetitive and it's gets boring.
My only problem with this novel is that there is so much unnecessary sentences. Its like the author is trying to fill that word count which he probably did. Theres also that one chapter where he was running low on food and just remembered he had date trees in his inventory from the system, then he proceed to only talk about it for an ENTIRE CHAPTER. After that i pretty much gave up trying to read this novel
The further into the story you go the worst it gets ... At first it was acceptable and you were waiting for the story to pick up. Then the story picks up its pace and takes a nose dive. The author try's to make the world and reactions of the nobles "realistic" and follow a certain "Noble Creed" but then contradict this in their actual actions. Then says this is normal to do things in the dark for them but he cant because reasons? We waited for a battle to happen for 20 plus chapter but all that happened was nonsense and character point of views and intrigue that makes no sense or don't matter. The battles in this novel are tons of build up chapters. Then the battle is 1 chapter long and all about morale and troop quality. Which wouldn't be so bad if the build up chapters didn't already talk about this so the battle chapter is basically a summary of what we know then the final result. Then the next few chapters are about chasing the routers and clean up and maybe upgrades. Then 10 plus chapters on reactions. Honestly this is just the tip of the iceberg and there are far worse things in this book. Its just Bad
What can I say, that hasnt been said all out great story. realistic principles in a reaListic post magic and power world ................
😔😘😍😋🍆🎉👏😒😑😉🤣😱👌🙏😓🤑😡😥🤔☺️😵😭😠😐📸😄🏞️😝🌞😎🌤️😶🤤😲😴🔥😀😃😄😘😅😅😂🤣😭😗😙😚😘😍🤩🤗🙃🙂☺️😊😏😌😉🤭😶😐😑😔😋😛😝😜🤪🤔🤨🧐🙄😒😤😠😡🤬☹️🙁🙁😕
It's a great story and a good design on the world and back ground.. .............................,.............................,...........
I already left a comment but I thought I'd share if his system isn't inheritable this is a massive waste of time because everyone this is to make those bye-bye
and okay Kingdom Builder only complaints is EMC sometimes makes bad decisions especially when in battle and it's a sausage fest there's nothing but guys in the Oasis I mean that alone is going to destroy his little Village cuz no women to reproduce not one mentioned at all
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its a great novel, can't stop reading it ! is there any other novels like this one? please recommend me novels like this amazing novel, thank you
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I know it's a translation but I hooe the originale is not like this. I've read a few chapters and those chapters are 2/3 repeated words. It's a pity/It was beautiful(that was repeated like nth in the first few chapters. You need a lot of patience to go through these chapters. I hope it get better.
It seems really interesting. I'm only a few chapters in, but I'm pretty excited for more. :D I totally recommend this webnovel. It has really good world/city/country building :D
Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
read this a while ago. starts off great, especially for fans of M&B, but after a few hundred chapters the plot is just gone, major story points are just moved to the side and forgotten, plot points from a long time ago just completely ignored and replaced with other things, and eventually the main character becomes a side character and the story keeps being told from the minor side characters perspective for extended periods of time. was good, but wouldn't bother as there's no pay off, rather read the trash novels that keep consistency.
Anyone who reads this novel will feel like they are reading three novels. It is divided into three parts. The first story, around chapters 1-400, is the best part. Even though it's a bit repetitive, you can still enjoy the adventure of discovering new things. and structure the protagonist's city The second part is around chapters 400-600. The story is much more rushed compared to the writing pace of the first part. The author skips the plot and cuts scenes frequently, causing the reading to stall at times. But it's still not considered too bad. The third part, chapter 600-820, I can only read chapter 650+ because this can no longer be called a Lord of Oasis novel. The author discards all of the past storylines of side characters and opens a new plot using the protagonist and a character called Banduk (who has more roles than the protagonist) in the story to fight enemies. The narration is so bad that I wonder if this can even be called a novel.
the story started out strong and was great for a long while. but after the MC took over the Dukedom of Leo, the story quality rapidly went down and changed in a terrible way. Bunduk suddenly was no longer the apostle of the underworld. was never brought up again and he no longer uses the power/abilities he had before. the System hasnt been talked about or used in a long time. When the MC finally created the empire, he didnt get any of the rewards that was promised. havent even heard about Mages in a long time either. its like the Author completely got rid of the MCs magic forces and is keeping it strictly normal forces. and speaking of the MC, he is barely a part of the story anymore. we now follow his soldiers more then we even care about the MC. i loved this story and how it was with the Mount and blade system. but now its no longer fun or exciting to read. sorry Author but you should have kept it the way it was before.
Revelar Spoiler The novel is awesome, I just get the impression that the author has some "prejudices" against women😭it's so funny.😭😭😭 these little remarks like "The bottom line for him was a layer of membrane that he could break through at any time... JUST LIKE A WOMAN!😡😡😡"
the start is quite bad but the story starts getting good after around a hundred chapters but by the six hundredth chapter it becomes inconsistent and destroys most development in the MC's powers and personality as well as changing from a cool neriteve to a neriteve that is full of holes and inconsistencyies
Cheap system. this would have been more fun if he had more side quests and special quests to do with additional a little bit of cultivation, levelling, exploration, and loot. but i guess the authors creativity is a little bit lacking, and mostly, he relies on mount and blade contents.
So far, so good. I'm enjoying it, even though I just started it. Once you click it up, it's hard to put it down. 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥 Awesome work, author.
I liked the story until now, which is around 300 chaps.. the translation went awry a lot of times which was quite frustrating.. also does this thing have a map? like the map of dukedom of leo, the desert and senwaya range? its so confusing to imagine.. would have been better with a map.. i mean kingdom building ones gotta have a map right? ahhhh give me a map plz
It’s built up so well, so much background masses with a little mystery but not focused on too hard to make it either annoying or tiresome. Some reviewers complain about the Mc being stupid and needing to think for himself but he is intelligent and conducts himself well. However, around about chapter 100, or a little earlier the writing quality makes a complete nosedive so that it’s almost impossible to keep track of what’s going on - names change randomly, words don’t make complete sentence or just come out as a garbled mess etc. Even before this, there is sometimes an excess of sentences that prolong a scene far too long. AND, one of the main plot points is that he needs the system currency which in itself isn’t an issue. Some reviewers complain about him using magical artefacts etc but he only does it once as far as I’ve read and they weren’t even that useful ones, he usually gets the currency other ways. But, he spends the currency mainly on paying a standing army which has no use for the currency since he basically houses, feeds them etc and there is no economy in the place - why do they need cash? Plus, he doesn’t pay his peasants which is reasonable as most lords wouldn’t: but in the Middle Ages most people were ‘vassals’ of a lord and wouldn’t need paying, just status, land etc. While high class units might need payment, that would usually only be after battles or great services. But really, don’t get into the book because while all other problems are fine to overlook and can be easily ignored without affecting the plot and stuff too much with an intelligent, cold mc; the translation quality becomes absolute dogsh*t. I imagine if you understand Chinese then the taws may be worth a read since unlike most Chinese novels this doesn’t have useless posturing, a stupid male mc saving the woman with a super op system, or a long explanation about some super reputable figure having to bow to the mc after being an arrogant pr*ck for no reason or a cliche best friend called fatty wang.
This book is not that bad. My only issue is the translation quality and the main character’s lack of depth. Other than that, the plot is somewhat questionable, but still bearable. Overall, an okay read 👍
Comrades, can anyone explain what happened in chapter 630? What happened to the author? I like assumptions and theories, but I have not found a simple explanation. Before that, it was tolerable, it felt like I was reading my own Google-translated texts (I’m bad with English, I use Google), but at least it was interesting. If you find out something, please write under this comment or just in the reviews, I want to know how it happened.
Those after Chapter 629 are missing. It has nothing to do with the plot. I read "Mount and Blade" because I loved it, but the lack of episodes disappointed me.
It's like you are reading 2 different stories. I just assume the story end at chapter 629, cause the chapter after that is totally different story with the MC name is the same.
Nice plot but pretty repetitive. A lot of information is repeated. Like a lot, as if the author was just trying to pad words. This pattern seems to repeat al the way to 629. Around chapter 630, the plot changes. Let's talk about how different the plot is. At the end of 629, Kant says they will march to attack the undead in three days. At the start of 630, the undead have apparently been handled. Bunduk is the only remaining hero left from all the heroes he had previously and has seemingly lost his special powers and become an ordinary person. New characters and terms have appeared in place of the other heroes and the Mount and Blade terms. His subordinates seem to have become normal people and not just blindly loyal soldiers. The previous plot with the world nobles seems to have never happened and it basically forgets the whole system that the story is based on. The new plot is based on things that never happened in the original story. I looked for the mtl and the translation definitely follows the mtl. I really have no idea what happened. Maybe Mount and Blade finally caught on to what was happening and stopped the author from using those terms. The novel also ends in like 200 chapters, so idk how the author intends on ending a new story that started 3/4's through the story
Revelar Spoiler The butter lords shall rule all.The butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule allThe butter lords shall rule all
Revelar Spoiler 500 chapter is and the conclusion it's:trash...yep kind of trash ,i regret Reading it, the translation it's decent, the story it's repetitive (like 70% it's just useless filler information ) the kingdom building it's quite nice actually but romance...it doesn't exist ,also kant killed quite few "beautiful girl/women" i can say he has a sadistic pleasure in killing girls...yea it's a trash novel, in final it's so repetitive and it's gets boring.
My only problem with this novel is that there is so much unnecessary sentences. Its like the author is trying to fill that word count which he probably did. Theres also that one chapter where he was running low on food and just remembered he had date trees in his inventory from the system, then he proceed to only talk about it for an ENTIRE CHAPTER. After that i pretty much gave up trying to read this novel
The further into the story you go the worst it gets ... At first it was acceptable and you were waiting for the story to pick up. Then the story picks up its pace and takes a nose dive. The author try's to make the world and reactions of the nobles "realistic" and follow a certain "Noble Creed" but then contradict this in their actual actions. Then says this is normal to do things in the dark for them but he cant because reasons? We waited for a battle to happen for 20 plus chapter but all that happened was nonsense and character point of views and intrigue that makes no sense or don't matter. The battles in this novel are tons of build up chapters. Then the battle is 1 chapter long and all about morale and troop quality. Which wouldn't be so bad if the build up chapters didn't already talk about this so the battle chapter is basically a summary of what we know then the final result. Then the next few chapters are about chasing the routers and clean up and maybe upgrades. Then 10 plus chapters on reactions. Honestly this is just the tip of the iceberg and there are far worse things in this book. Its just Bad
What can I say, that hasnt been said all out great story. realistic principles in a reaListic post magic and power world ................
😔😘😍😋🍆🎉👏😒😑😉🤣😱👌🙏😓🤑😡😥🤔☺️😵😭😠😐📸😄🏞️😝🌞😎🌤️😶🤤😲😴🔥😀😃😄😘😅😅😂🤣😭😗😙😚😘😍🤩🤗🙃🙂☺️😊😏😌😉🤭😶😐😑😔😋😛😝😜🤪🤔🤨🧐🙄😒😤😠😡🤬☹️🙁🙁😕
It's a great story and a good design on the world and back ground.. .............................,.............................,...........
I already left a comment but I thought I'd share if his system isn't inheritable this is a massive waste of time because everyone this is to make those bye-bye
and okay Kingdom Builder only complaints is EMC sometimes makes bad decisions especially when in battle and it's a sausage fest there's nothing but guys in the Oasis I mean that alone is going to destroy his little Village cuz no women to reproduce not one mentioned at all
Revelar Spoiler its a great novel, can't stop reading it ! is there any other novels like this one? please recommend me novels like this amazing novel, thank you
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I know it's a translation but I hooe the originale is not like this. I've read a few chapters and those chapters are 2/3 repeated words. It's a pity/It was beautiful(that was repeated like nth in the first few chapters. You need a lot of patience to go through these chapters. I hope it get better.
It seems really interesting. I'm only a few chapters in, but I'm pretty excited for more. :D I totally recommend this webnovel. It has really good world/city/country building :D
Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
read this a while ago. starts off great, especially for fans of M&B, but after a few hundred chapters the plot is just gone, major story points are just moved to the side and forgotten, plot points from a long time ago just completely ignored and replaced with other things, and eventually the main character becomes a side character and the story keeps being told from the minor side characters perspective for extended periods of time. was good, but wouldn't bother as there's no pay off, rather read the trash novels that keep consistency.