Undercover Superstar: The Birth of Xiaolang

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aishahcoolz

I really like how the author portrayed the main character. Personality wise, he’s not the most likeable person. His character reeks of arrogance and immaturity, but I’m pretty interested to see how he develops as the story progresses. The flow of the story is smooth. The story is written with excellence with barely any grammatical mistakes, which I find common in many other online novels. Overall, this book keeps you captivated, and I highly recommend it to others. Ps, I found out about this book, through the author’s other novel: Undercover Superstar: A Song of Pyros & Snowflakes, which I suggest others to check out as well!

LV 13

LordSputnik

Honest Review Very well written, very interesting, but sadly just as it starts to get rolling you run out of content... The whole premise is a bit flawed as I find it hard to believe nobody would recognize him, but then again I once ran in to Kid Rock and totally thought he was a regular guy until a crowd started forming. Dude just wanted a coffee... The Good: Excellent Grammar! A rich kid being forced to lead a "normal" life isn't anything new by any means, but I find these kind of stories almost always enjoyable. The Bad: It's not exactly the author's fault from what his comments said, but 6 days with no updates is bad for a WPC entry. I really don't have any other glaring complaints about the story itself except that I wish it had more. The Neutral: His "friends" had me a little confused, are they old friends of his just playing a prank or new friends of his that want to watch his world burn? I personally wished to get a little more background on them, but it is not necessary.

LV 11

ImmortalGodslayer

I loved it. Please continue updating the story author. Please don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really want to see the relationship between Rai and Tian develop.

LV 3

Kamatis

I'll try to keep this short this time, hehehe. You did a good job at portraying the main character. An Arrogant kid and immature, he was portrayed well and I commend you for that. Interesting concept you have made here, and your narration makes the story more easier to dive into. Anyways, great book you have here, keep up the good work

LV 11

firiewww

Its not my type of novel, more likely it was my first time reading this kind of genre but I was already hooked with how the character was portrayed, I found myself laughing at some funny parts. The novel is well written too, so I had a smooth read and enjoyed it.

LV 3

AnwarBear

Recommended by someone, I started reading this just to pass some time. It’s actually a prologue to another novel. The story started off nicely. The flow was quite fast-paced, which is also a plus. Words chosen aren’t too difficult to understand either even if you’re a beginner to the English languge. The characters need a bit more of an in depth descriptions though, such as skin color, height, maybe eye color. Keep up the great work

LV 14

Overlord_Venus

After reading all the arrogant young masters in all cultivation novels, the MC here feels like the cream of the crop. For some reason, I like his character and personality. He pursues vanity to the extreme but has his reasons to be grounded and not have his head buried up in the clouds. The writing style is smooth and flawless and the choice of words make it a refreshing read. This is definitely a novel I am reading every single day.

LV 4

TheViking5500

Really good so far. The mc is a very interesting person. The story also is a very interesting concept. I like it. You write in a way that is very interesting. Keep up with the good work

LV 13

prada_murthy

The writing style is good as well as the character development. The male lead has an air of arragance and haughtiness. I am waiting to see how his character develops in the upcoming chapters. I hope to see an improvement in him.

LV 4

Barbare

At the end of the first chapter, I would have told you that I really liked the narration, the details as well as the cleanliness of your writing and that the only thing I could criticize was the story because I don't like the genre. BUT! A few chapters later I can say that I was wrong, surprisingly you managed to make me interested in the story. I congratulate you and wish you a good continuation!