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Hey bro i just want to say keep improving and try to analyze what was ur fault or wrong and always keep that spirit to wrte of urs is high Its ur ff not someone so keep writeng ur own story but nkt with the previous mistake Ps: sorry my english is pretty bad
Useless transmigration lol he’s supposed to have his memories but he is an idiot. Not worth the read.
This really surprised me! Good a truly good find. I’ve read the whole thing in a day. As others have already mentioned it’s a rare find where there’s no instant God Slayer Mode from the beginning, thus, allowing you to develop a relationship with the protagonist! I would like to see our protagonist go on more missions that aren’t already know plot points covered by other movies, cartoons, or comics. But the ones already in there are very good, I just would like to see more. Greedy, I know, but it’s got so many places you could take it! Excitedly waiting, Civ.
Awesome story great world building exercise with how you connected all mcu and xmen especially with how the Xavier and sheild with connecting young heroes. I don't get the lightning basis as thor already controls all the lightning and is a god.
basically i still don't understand why people who like "super heroes" feel offended when they say "super hero" is a child's thing. After all, "batman's law" is what makes it for children no matter what kind of argument used against that fact it never changes
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One of the rare Si's where the MC isn't instantly OP. There is a realistic step to step process to how he grows his powers and developing his character. However, I do see the lack of any real side character besides Peter. It would be nice to have additional reoccurring heros making more appearances and see how they influence the MC. Besides that I am kinda bothered with his memory lost and hope you'll get that fixed soon. Otherwise this fic is definitely worth a read as it is very entertaining. If you through in an antagonist it could be even better.
I am desapointed that the MC is becoming a backgorund character while peter is becoming a symbol in NY,i mean c'mon man.max powers are much cooler than peters.
Great chapter,the only thing i think is missing in your story is the MC's social live,i mean peter has felicia and even his mom has a boyfriend but the MC has yet to show interest in a girl. Maybe jean grey?Or even mary jane now that peter is with felicia?I would like if you paired MJ with the MC as there are few storys of an OCxMj.
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Bro you are here finally posted this... awesome I'm gonna enjoy this...thanks man and please put the updates for both the novels....please....
Man.. this is actually a good one.. The mc is not harem seeking one.. So we get to see more action.. And peter go out with felicia.. and not try hard to ask MJ out.. Pretty good i think.. After MJ leave petter behind.. 😅😅😅 Well.. Keep up author..
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Honestly I like it. The only minor issue is being forced to join shield. Other than that a great read.....................................................
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Not a bad story. Please keep it up. Also I like how the MC is sighing at every thing like he is so done with this sh*t. 😂😂😂😂................................. .............................
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it is awesome I love it please keep on updating the story it is wonderful and all round entertaining to the peak especially with the concept 👍👍👍
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Hey bro i just want to say keep improving and try to analyze what was ur fault or wrong and always keep that spirit to wrte of urs is high Its ur ff not someone so keep writeng ur own story but nkt with the previous mistake Ps: sorry my english is pretty bad
Useless transmigration lol he’s supposed to have his memories but he is an idiot. Not worth the read.
This really surprised me! Good a truly good find. I’ve read the whole thing in a day. As others have already mentioned it’s a rare find where there’s no instant God Slayer Mode from the beginning, thus, allowing you to develop a relationship with the protagonist! I would like to see our protagonist go on more missions that aren’t already know plot points covered by other movies, cartoons, or comics. But the ones already in there are very good, I just would like to see more. Greedy, I know, but it’s got so many places you could take it! Excitedly waiting, Civ.
Awesome story great world building exercise with how you connected all mcu and xmen especially with how the Xavier and sheild with connecting young heroes. I don't get the lightning basis as thor already controls all the lightning and is a god.
basically i still don't understand why people who like "super heroes" feel offended when they say "super hero" is a child's thing. After all, "batman's law" is what makes it for children no matter what kind of argument used against that fact it never changes
Great work. Great work. Great work. Great work............................:.........................................................................
One of the rare Si's where the MC isn't instantly OP. There is a realistic step to step process to how he grows his powers and developing his character. However, I do see the lack of any real side character besides Peter. It would be nice to have additional reoccurring heros making more appearances and see how they influence the MC. Besides that I am kinda bothered with his memory lost and hope you'll get that fixed soon. Otherwise this fic is definitely worth a read as it is very entertaining. If you through in an antagonist it could be even better.
I am desapointed that the MC is becoming a backgorund character while peter is becoming a symbol in NY,i mean c'mon man.max powers are much cooler than peters.
Great chapter,the only thing i think is missing in your story is the MC's social live,i mean peter has felicia and even his mom has a boyfriend but the MC has yet to show interest in a girl. Maybe jean grey?Or even mary jane now that peter is with felicia?I would like if you paired MJ with the MC as there are few storys of an OCxMj.
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Bro you are here finally posted this... awesome I'm gonna enjoy this...thanks man and please put the updates for both the novels....please....
Man.. this is actually a good one.. The mc is not harem seeking one.. So we get to see more action.. And peter go out with felicia.. and not try hard to ask MJ out.. Pretty good i think.. After MJ leave petter behind.. 😅😅😅 Well.. Keep up author..
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Very nice to read.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Honestly I like it. The only minor issue is being forced to join shield. Other than that a great read.....................................................
Revelar Spoiler Not a bad story. Please keep it up. Also I like how the MC is sighing at every thing like he is so done with this sh*t. 😂😂😂😂................................. .............................
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it is awesome I love it please keep on updating the story it is wonderful and all round entertaining to the peak especially with the concept 👍👍👍