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The narration is pretty decent 🤔🤔and there is fair amount of dailaouges so its not monotonous🤔🤔and The most imp of all..there is perfect end to the chapter with a suspense😁so i have a feeling its worth reading
a good first chapter, but it could be a whole lot better I recommend the author to show us which one the mc is. It started with a we, so im kinda confused which is the mc. A bit of context/narration about what is going on will also help, not suddenly why they are in the station. The chap need some editing, the dialogue in a paragraph should be separated when its a different person that is talking. And use "..." for talking out loud, and '...' when its a thought. Some grammatical error but nothing noticeable. But good overall, keep up the goodwork
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Hello Everyone! This is the author. I've read all of your reviews. I am really thankful to you for all of your support. I promise I shall keep writing and make you happy..
It requires a 5 Star. You have done a great at your level of Narration. Really liked the story and the character development. So.. Here you go, my boy. 5 STARS...
Deserves a 5 Star but I've read a review, saying that you aren't uploading chapters so frequently.. So.. had to give a 4 star. Good job though.
Very good Narration. Love your books. I have only one request. Could you come up with more chapters, more frequently? cause it's been a while since you uploaded the last chapter.. Thanks
Nice. Waiting for the upcoming chapters. All the Best. You have all of our support. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The beginning is good, I hope that the author makes this novel exciting as the title suggests, I'm excited for future updates 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I could not stop reading until the end. The story had a flow and suspense which did not let me put my phone down. I hope the author writes more stories like this :)
The narration is pretty decent 🤔🤔and there is fair amount of dailaouges so its not monotonous🤔🤔and The most imp of all..there is perfect end to the chapter with a suspense😁so i have a feeling its worth reading
a good first chapter, but it could be a whole lot better I recommend the author to show us which one the mc is. It started with a we, so im kinda confused which is the mc. A bit of context/narration about what is going on will also help, not suddenly why they are in the station. The chap need some editing, the dialogue in a paragraph should be separated when its a different person that is talking. And use "..." for talking out loud, and '...' when its a thought. Some grammatical error but nothing noticeable. But good overall, keep up the goodwork
Revelar Spoiler NO WORDS - ONLY EMOJIS ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Hello Everyone! This is the author. I've read all of your reviews. I am really thankful to you for all of your support. I promise I shall keep writing and make you happy..
It requires a 5 Star. You have done a great at your level of Narration. Really liked the story and the character development. So.. Here you go, my boy. 5 STARS...
Deserves a 5 Star but I've read a review, saying that you aren't uploading chapters so frequently.. So.. had to give a 4 star. Good job though.
Very good Narration. Love your books. I have only one request. Could you come up with more chapters, more frequently? cause it's been a while since you uploaded the last chapter.. Thanks
Nice. Waiting for the upcoming chapters. All the Best. You have all of our support. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The beginning is good, I hope that the author makes this novel exciting as the title suggests, I'm excited for future updates 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I could not stop reading until the end. The story had a flow and suspense which did not let me put my phone down. I hope the author writes more stories like this :)