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Capítulo 162: The truth

"Kukukuku..."

Augusta's ghoulish laughter gave Drako goosebumps. This sort of laughter had always given him a bad vibe, and this moment was no different.

Putting on a macabre smile, Augusta said.

"You're wrong, very wrong. It was Glenda who offered us that information, she gave it to us of her own free will. All the information about your Longinus, that is."

"…"

Was it Glenda who volunteered all the information about Lavinia's Longinus?

No, that's not possible. Wasn't Glenda the Witch of the South? She should be the good witch of the story, shouldn't she? Why should she help Augusta?

Why would she betray Lavinia?

"...what are you saying?" Lavinia asked with a look of amazement.

Augusta smiled more and more unpleasantly and said...

"Oh, dear Lavinia, you're still a child who doesn't understand anything. Well, let me explain it to you. Glenda is a wizard on our side... She's always been with us from the beginning... Good witch? Evil witch? That was self-centred information passed on by people on our side. She walked away from our side because, at that time, there was a fierce battle between the north, south, east and west factions. Glenda wasn't interested in those fights, because the country of Oz was created to raise awareness in the magician, and she's no exception."

For a moment, Lavinia was really paralyzed by the strong shock.

A silence appeared for a moment, however...

"Bullshit! That's Bullshit!"

Lavinia screamed angrily.

Drako had never seen Lavinia show such an angry, wrathful expression. Lavinia had always remained a gentle older sister, always with a smile on her face.

That's why seeing Lavinia at this moment was painful for Drako. It shouldn't be allowed to do anything that would make her angry or sad.

In response to Lavinia's anger, Augusta continued to talk while keeping her sinister smile on.

"It is not a lie. Not at all, why don't we ask Glenda directly?

The magician raised one of her hands and created a magic circle. Neither Drako nor Lavinia fought back, as they recognized the type of magic circle. It was a magic circle of communication.

"Can you hear me, Glenda?"

After a moment, an old woman's voice was heard through the magic circle.

"...For you to contact me out of nowhere, I wonder if anything happened, Augusta."

At the sound of that familiar voice, Lavinia's eyes were opened with amazement. That old woman could only be one person...

Augusta happily talked to the other person on the other side of the magic circle of communication.

"Right now, I'm fighting your disciple, the Ice Princess. How about you say something to her? It's the least you can do since she's been looking for you so desperately, don't you think so?"

The woman on the other side of the magic circle of communication seemed to be Glenda, Lavinia's teacher.

In response to Augusta's words, she says...

"...I'm not interested at all."

The tone of her voice was one of rejection.

"…!"

Lavinia was silent because of those words, her whole body began to tremble. Even Drako was paralyzed after hearing Glenda's insensitive words.

Drako had prepared himself because there was a chance for the world of Oz to be different than the one described in the books, but he did not expect Glenda to be this kind of person.

Thinking logically, Drako could understand Glenda's reasons for adopting Lavinia as her disciple. Augusta had already explained that the people of Oz are only interested in investigating magic, so Drako was not surprised that Glenda took the opportunity to investigate something as magical as a Longinus.

"Kakakaka! How wicked! Wasn't there a time when you loved this girl as your daughter? I can't believe you're saying something like that now! Evil!"

Augusta was enjoying Lavinia's expression, showing the unpleasant laughter again.

"…"

In response to Augusta's words, for a moment, nothing was heard through that magical circle of communication.

Then it was heard.

"...Lavinia"

The words that Glenda was going to say to Lavinia, who was desperately seeking the whereabouts of her teacher all this time, were extremely cruel.

"I'll say it again... I don't care at all!"

That way, the communication ended, and the magic circle disappeared.

Drako was in shock.

He, who knew how much Lavinia had suffered looking for her teacher.

He, who had felt Lavinia's true feelings to the fullest thanks to [Senjutsu] knew how much she was longing for her teacher.

He felt a piercing pain in his chest. Not for him, but for the person who was by his side at this moment, the girl with whom he had started a romantic relationship.

As for Lavinia...

"…"

She dropped her wand, her arms were limp. With an empty expression, she simply fell silent.

Even her Longinus, who stood beside her, eliminated her attacking position. That the person who made Lavinia have hope in her eyes when her family died has caused her to fall into a total void. This is the truth that no one can face.

It wouldn't be impossible for her to think that all this was a lie.

Somehow, Lavinia opened her trembling mouth...

"...N-No way..."

With a voice that is not characteristic of her, from the depths of her being, from the depths of her heart, she cried out.

"Impossible!!! No, no, it's a lie...!"

Lavinia's whole body began to wobble, she had lost the strength in her legs.

The strength of her heart and her body had been destroyed in one blow.

Drako did not hesitate to support her, running to her side and taking her in his arms.

Augusta saw that and created an anomalous magical circle with her hand and threw it. From that magic circle, something black began to appear.

"You've lost all your will! It's the time!"

Just then, a black circle began to grow around Lavinia, who is without strength. A strange black aura appeared and enveloped her from head to toe.

She was going to be wrapped in the black halo, and Drako could do nothing to stop it!

This was black magic, without a doubt. And it was not just any black magic, but one that could only be defended by one's own will. For Lavinia, who had given up hope, this was the worst attack she could get at this point.

One person shouted, surprising everyone present.

"Don't let that capture the girl!"

Thalia came out of hiding and approached at high speed towards Drako and Lavinia.

Drako wasted no time in asking her.

"Do you know what this is?"

Thalia explained precisely.

"Magical possession! One of the darkest and most sinister magic known. If the victim is not strong enough, her body will be possessed forever."

Something clicked in Drako's head. He understood something just now.

But it wasn't time to think about that, it was time to help Lavinia.

Without hesitation, Drako put Gandiva into the system.

He locked Lavinia in a strong, warm embrace. Golden scales began to appear in Drako's arms, and dragon claws came out of his hands.

Drako had no way to undo this magic, but he could at least slow it down with his [Holy Healing Claws]. The rest was Lavinia's job, she was the one who had to fight Augusta.

"Thalia, I'm asking you, please. Cover us!"

As he embraced Lavinia, Drako was discovered in front of Augusta. He was dependent on Thalia for his defence.

"Yes, don't worry. The witch can't do anything to you while I'm here."

Thalia had her own reasons for helping Drako and Lavinia at this time. She... saw herself in Lavinia right now, so she wanted to help both of them.

"I leave it to you."

Drako left with Lavinia in his arms. Black smoke still surrounded Lavinia, so he had no doubt that Augusta could take control of the girl at any time.

For the moment, Drako's sacred aura was suppressing the dark magic, but it would not last long. He could see the dark aura coming closer and closer to Lavinia.

Meanwhile, Drako reflected on what he had discovered before.

What he had discovered was nothing more or less than the target of the wizards of Oz in the forest.

Their target was not Sae with Cowardly Leo, or Tobio or the Shi Akuma. Their goal was not to support Satanael or the Utsusemi Agency.

The Wizards' goal was none other than Lavinia herself!

If Augusta could control Lavinia's body at will, she would be in the power of two Longinus!

That was something Drako had never heard of or read about, it was something that had never happened in this world!

Actually, there was one person who had accomplished this. He is the person who is known as First Dark or The Man Who Impersonates God. However, he appears for the first time in volume 25 (although I think he was mentioned before), so Drako (who has read up to 21) doesn't know of his existence.

Mitsuya Kanzaki is called The Man Who Impersonates God because of his ability to control the two Longinus Telos Karma and Innovate Clear. He is also one of the competitors for the title of the most powerful human.

How strong would Augusta be if she could also control two Longinus?

In Drako's arms, Lavinia slowly opened her eyes.

"Dra...kun?"

Drako stopped thinking and looked at his girlfriend.

"Did you wake up?"

She nodded softly, and rested her head on Drako's chest. He soon felt the tears in her chest.

"Lavinia, do you know your situation?" Drako asked.

She nodded.

"You have to endure Augusta's attack, I'm going to help you in any way I can."

Lavinia nodded again.

Drako started hearing explosions, Thalia and Augusta had already started fighting.

Drako found a comfortable place to sit, and the two began working on Lavinia's recovery.

Drako's blood froze when he saw that the dark aura was still approaching Lavinia.

She wasn't trying to defend herself!

"Lavinia... I am here with you."

Drako pressed the hug. Lavinia looked up into his eyes, and he saw that her eyes were filled with tears.

Lavinia spoke to Drako.

"Dra-kun... why has Oshishou-sama rejected me? Why?"

Drako responded as she gently stroked his blond hair.

"Not everyone is as you think they are... many of them have a façade while hiding their true thoughts. That woman, Glenda, could have pretended to be a good teacher while simply using you as a research subject. Who knows, she may have actually considered you as her own daughter and some situation is preventing her from talking to you. If you want to know the truth, you have to face her."

Lavinia looked at Drako with open eyes. It seemed that the boy's words had opened new doors for the girl.

"Yes... I think you're right. I must speak to Oshishou-sama face to face, I cannot trust Augusta."

Drako relaxed when he saw the soft smile he was familiar with.

Lavinia wrapped her arms around Drako's neck and kissed him gently on the lips.

"Dra-kun, I love you."

It was not the first time Drako had heard these words from Lavinia, but this time it was different from the other times. Lavinia was sure of the words she was saying, for they came from the depths of her heart.

Just then, Drako received another notification.

[The level of [Nephilim Dragon] raised from 74 to 75.]

[[Nephilim Dragon] has reached its MAX level.]

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Capítulo 163: Final Battle.

While Drako was helping Lavinia, Thalia was facing Augusta.

Augusta flashed a nasty smile when she saw the teenager in front of her.

"Kakakakaka."

Thalia seemed like a normal girl right now. Her aura gave off nothing special, unlike Drako's, and she was not famous in the supernatural world as she had joined the slayers of Artemis only months before.

Even though Augusta had a relaxed, mocking attitude, however, the fire giant at her side remained ready to attack at any time.

"Child, who are you? Do you really think you can stop me?"

Thalia's eyebrow trembled slightly as she heard how arrogant Augusta was.

She slowly lowered her head, then raised it with an extremely arrogant smile.

"Old woman, who are you? I don't even have to strive to defeat an old woman at death's door. Tell me, how old are you? 80? 90? I see, you're ashamed to see that your face looks like a rotten peach, that's why you want to take Lavinia's body.

Thalia attacked Augusta directly with words. But Augusta simply let out that nasty laugh once more as she waved her hand.

"Kakakaka."

Thalia sensed danger, and rushed to play with the bracelet in her hand.

The bracelet began to transform me, growing in size and taking on a circular shape. The bronze circle surrounded Thalia's arm, protecting her in time from the purple fireball.

The fireball, which had thrown Incinerate Anthem, impacted directly on the shield.

Augusta laughed again when she saw this.

"Kakakakaka- Know your place, child."

Augusta's laughter stopped when she saw that Thalia was totally intact. The attack of the Longinus had done her no harm. s

"You..."

Augusta's eyes widened when she saw the shield in Thalia's hands. More than the shield, she recognized the image that was carved into it. She stepped back instinctively, a trace of fear running through her eyes for a moment.

Augusta quickly calmed down, and analyzed the situation better.

"The head of Medusa... that's Aegis."

The reason Augusta had felt fear had to do with the shield itself. One of its abilities was to interfere with the minds of its wearer's enemies, causing them to instinctively fear the shield.

It seemed that Augusta had guessed the identity of the shield. However, Thalia shook her head.

"This is not a real shield, but a gift from my father. The real shield was turned into a Sacred Gear, after all."

It might not be the real shield, but Augusta wasn't going to let her guard down over that. If her deductions weren't wrong, the material that had been used to create the shield was celestial bronze.

Celestial bronze, along with imperial gold, were the two most precious metals in Greek mythology. However, the celestial bronze was much better than the imperial gold.

The celestial bronze is extracted by the Cyclops from Mount Olympus. The ore is formed by tempering the metal on Mount Etna and cooling it in the river Lethe.

The metal is deadly to the creatures of the magical world, but it is useless against humans. The only exceptions to this were the semi humans (semi-gods, semi youkai's, semi devils...) and the users of Sacred Gears.

Weapons made from celestial bronze cannot harm other humans and simply pass through mortal bodies as if they were made of smoke. This is because humans are at a lower level than demigods or gods, so they are not worthy enough to be harmed by the weapon.

Celestial bronze was a very precious material for Greek mythology, and no one outside of this mythology could use it.

Augusta asked as she clenched her teeth.

"What is a Greek doing in this place?"

Thalia shrugged.

"My job was to watch that boy, but now I'm a little upset. I'm sure humiliating an old lady will brighten my day."

Augusta showed an immense reaction of rage, and began to create various magical circles.

The first attacks were easily dodged by Thalia, they posed no danger to her. However, Augusta increased the intensity of her attacks, probably outraged by the ease with which Thalia evaded her attacks. Not only did the magical circles increase in power and number, but Incinerate Anthem (The Fire Giant) began throwing huge purple fireballs.

Finally, there came a time when Thalia was going to be hit by an attack.

Once again, Thalia took a small object out of her pocket. It appeared to be a small hilt, but it began to expand until it reached its maximum length.

A long spear of heavenly bronze appeared in Thalia's hands. She cut with it horizontally, successfully cutting down the fire giant's attack.

Thalia's blue eyes shone like lightning, and sparks leapt from the spear.

Augusta's face darkened as she murmured.

"Daughter of Zeus..."

To which Thalia responded with a smile.

"It's time to finish your last dance, old lady."

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Drako was helping Lavinia get rid of the curse when he heard the sound of footsteps.

He did not put himself on alert, as he had already felt the presence of this person for a few seconds.

"Big brother, Lavinia!"

Valina came out of the trees. She didn't know anything about the situation Lavinia was in, so she looked quite energetic.

But her face changed when she saw the black fog surrounding Lavinia.

"What's happened?"

Valina rushed to the side of Drako and Lavinia.

Although Drako was wrapping his arms around Lavinia's waist, he was not doing so because he had lewd intentions. With his arms surrounded by golden scales, Drako was helping Lavinia recover.

Lavinia's eyes were closed, and she didn't seem to have noticed Valina's arrival. She was too busy fighting the curse of Augusta to pay attention to what was going on outside.

"I'll be brief, Augusta is trying to take Lavinia's body for herself. Lavinia is fighting the curse, and I'm helping her."

A big explosion happened at that time.

Actually, it had been going on for a while, the result of the battle between Thalia and Augusta.

"I need you to use your Sacred Gear, Valina. Just once is enough to help Lavinia."

Valina nodded after listening to Drako, and two wings of light flew from her back.

She touched Lavinia's forehead lightly and a noise came out of the wings of light.

"Divide!!!"

In a single moment, the fog surrounding Lavinia was halved. Lavinia's face, which before seemed to be suffering a lot, visibly relaxed.

With Valina's help, Lavinia was no longer going to have problems recovering. These were the advantages of having Longinus on the same team.

Even if Augusta could take Lavinia's body, Drako had a way of dealing with that. And that way had a name and a surname.

Tobio Ikuse.

Canis Lycaon could cut through anything, including divine concepts. If so, why couldn't he cut through the soul of Augusta that resided inside Lavinia?

Drako asked Valina.

"Valina, how long can you use your Balance Breaker?"

Valina seemed to hesitate for a moment. She was probably arguing with Albion about something. She finally nodded and turned to Drako.

"10 seconds."

Drako nodded, ten seconds was enough.

"I want you to go and help Thalia face Augusta. I will support you from here. Wait for my signal to use your Balance Breaker."

"What's the signal?"

"You'll understand when you see it"

Valina nodded her head, and flew off in the direction that Thalia and Augusta were fighting.

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Valina was surprised when she arrived.

The area where the fight was taking place was completely destroyed.

The fire giant that used to be 3 meters tall was now over 10 meters. It seems that Augusta hadn't been fighting seriously before.

The witch was constantly creating spells, putting pressure on Thalia.

The slayer constantly dodged attacks, or protected herself from them with the shield. From time to time, she would throw lightning bolts with her spear at Augusta, forcing the witch to defend herself.

Overall, the fight was pretty evenly matched.

Suddenly, a white flash fell on the battlefield.

It was none other than Valina flapping her wings of light. She exuded a very powerful aura, more powerful than she had ever shown before.

She had not advanced directly into the fight, but had prepared herself for maximum performance.

Augusta tells Valina, who was floating in the sky.

"So you finally appeared, Hakuryuukou."

Valina says to Augusta with an extremely upset expression.

"Lavinia was very careless. If this is all your level, I was not wrong to think she was enough to face you. However, having that person on your side... must have had some negative influence on her Sacred Gear."

After hearing those words, Augusta, showing a smile full of displeasure, made use of something she should never have done.

"Va-chan, I wish you wouldn't get so upset about this. Don't you want to be the great Va-chan you always are?"

Augusta spoke with Lavinia's voice.

"What do you think? Once I take control of that girl's body, I can keep pretending to be your big sister."

That was most likely a taboo. That was a line not to be crossed.

The aura that enveloped Valina's body... was expelled at an extraordinary level. The young woman's expression had turned to anger.

"...you dare to use that voice... you dare to call me by that name... How dare you?"

Trembling, Valina screamed.

"I'll kill you! I'll kill you! I'll kill you!"

Valina was very angry. Lavinia, one of the three people she loved most, had been the victim of a mental attack. They'd played on her emotions, and they'd practically made her collapse.

And now... and now... did this witch dare to use the nickname that only Lavinia had the right to use? Did she dare to use the voice of her dear older sister? Did she dare to suggest the possibility of supplanting her?

Unacceptable.

Valina wanted to activate her Balance Breaker already, but she still remembered what Drako had told her. She had to wait for the signal.

Luckily, it came just seconds later.

And the signal was...

"GRRRROOOOARARGRAR!"

...the roar of a dragon.

The dragon's roar filled the entire forest, even to where Mordred and the rest were waiting. It was a majestic roar, full of royalty. The same could be said of the aura it displayed, which could be divided into two types. A mixture of extremely dark, and extremely sacred, dragon aura. A perfect blend of two things that were thought impossible to combine.

Valina recognized the signal Drako had sent her.

Without a second thought, she screamed.

"Balance Breaker!!!"

"Vanishing Dragon, Balance Breaker!"

With Albion's voice resounding, Valina's body threw a dazzling white glow.

After the light faded, what was revealed was pure white armour with a pair of wings of light.

It was Valina's Balance Breaker, the Armor of the White Dragon Emperor "Divine Dividing Scale Mail".

Albion shouted in Valina's mind.

"Valina! You can only assume the shape of the armour for a short time!"

"Even ten seconds will be more than enough!"

Valina, having invoked the skill, used high speed to touch Augusta only once before taking some distance. To avoid Valina, Augusta began to expand countless magic circles.

"How terrifying! So you can use the Balance Breaker even with that little body! It's wonderful! It's amazing!"

From the countless circles of magic, she was firing magic repeatedly on a scale that was unmatched by anything she had used before.

Flames, ice, bursts, lightning, darkness, light, it was a complete burst of every attribute. Even Thalia had to temporarily protect herself from the barrage of attacks.

Valina didn't flinch at all, however, and approaching at high speed, raising the aura in which her body was wrapped to the maximum, she held her right hand forward.

"Divide Dividing!!!"

"Divide Divide Divide Divide Divide!!!"

Along with the voice pointing to the skill, which resonated several times, there was a change in the mass and scale of the many spells intended for Valina. The magical attacks decreased by half, then by half again, and again by half as they seemed to be reduced repeatedly.

In the end, the entire explosion of magical attacks had diminished in scale to the point where they were almost non-existent. Valina easily denied it with a wave of her hand. She had not been able to halve Augusta's power, but it had been possible for the magic of the Maga.

Augusta was in shock.

"Divine Dividing of the White Dragon Emperor! As far as the Balance Breaker is concerned, her power is exorbitant!"

Even in this situation, the magician's eyes glowed with greed. She wanted that Sacred Gear so she could break it down and study it quietly.

Valina gathered a tremendous aura in her hand and shot it at Augusta.

Augusta expanded a defensive-type magic circle, but...

Due to Valina's greatly increased power, who assumed that the armoured form had exceeded Augusta's expectations in both power and density, the witch immediately assumed a heavy stance.

"...For a girl to have so much power...! This is one of the two heavenly dragons...! Then this is Lucifer!"

Realizing that Augusta had fallen to her knees on the spot, Valina looked back at the fire giant behind her.

"I will deny that!"

Extending her hand, Valina unleashed an aura bombardment on the fire giant!"

Feeling this, the fire giant moved his cross and created countless fireballs of enormous power.

However, Valina dodged with agility and quickly got to where the fire giant was. She only had to touch it once.

"Half Dimension!"

Even the landscape around the fire giant was distorted. It seemed that Valina's ability could even affect space.

Valina's aura enveloped the fire giant and seemed to be reducing it. Still, the fire giant also threw up a purple aura and was able to resist it.

Valina's aura and the Fire Giant's aura were competing, and it seemed that the Fire Giant was retreating.

Could Valina in her present state defeat the Fire Giant?

No, compared to when she first transformed, Valina's aura had diminished. Based on this... it seemed like she was approaching her limit.

Valina's talent was a certainty. She had achieved Balance Breaker at such a young age. It should be noted that Lavinia, being five years older than Valina and recognized as a genius among geniuses, had not yet been able to achieve the Balance Breaker. Although Lavinia's case seemed to be more related to her state of mind than anything else.

However, Valina's talent was not packaged with her own amount of aura.

In other words, even if she could get into Balance Breaker, she was now running out of energy.

However, Valina... defended herself with her remaining aura without dissolving the transformation.

"Divide, divide! Divide! Divide! Divide Dividing!"

Like a child screaming about being lost, Valina somehow unleashed her plough to the limits of her power over the fire giant.

Valina screamed to the sky...

"If I can't stand this, even hitting that man, hitting Rizevim, will be impossible!!! Now, seeing a kind person hurt in my eyes is unacceptable!!"

She shed tears as she screamed at a frantic volume...

Valina launched what appeared to be the last of her power. A huge amount of aura was released from her tiny body.

"Therefore, DIVIDE DIVIDING!"

-It was at that moment.

A dry, grinding sound echoed throughout the area. The next thing they saw was the arm of the fire giant that had flown away. But it didn't stop there! The entire body of the fire giant was distorted both vertically and horizontally, as its size seemed to gradually decrease.

Another arm flew out, the cross collapsed, and finally even the head broke off.

Seeing the fire giant disappear, Albion shouted.

"That's it! It's done, Valina!"

The armour disappeared, and Valina returned to normal.

Her breathing was heavy and painful, but her expression showed her usual innocence.

"...Naturally. I'm Valina... the descendant of the Maou Lucifer..."

At that, Valina lost consciousness and fell to the sky.

A pair of arms caught her, she was none other than Thalia.

"You're so strong at such a young age... you impress me, and at the same time, you make me sad. What did you have to go through to acquire such a thirst for power?"

Thalia remembered her own past, and slowly shook her head.

Her mother used to beat her when she was small because she was the daughter of the god Zeus, and she even abandoned her younger brother because she believed that this would get Zeus' attention.

Thalia and Valina did not know this, but they shared certain things in common.

Footsteps were heard approaching, and Thalia turned to see Drako. He held Lavinia in his arms, and there was no longer a trace of the black mist.

The curse had been completely lifted!

Drako looked up at Augusta who seemed to have lost all hope. Her lifeless eyes stared at the ground, had she died already?

No, she was still alive. That was good, Drako could start to rise levels in this new evolution if that was the case.

Drako carefully left Lavinia on the floor, and pulled Gandiva out.

He pointed to the sky, and began to recite the chant he had already recited once.

"It's time to make a sacrifice to the goddess Artemis."

Drako created two magic arrows, and pointed them at the sky.

Not only was this a sacrifice to the goddess, but a warning to all who were watching this fight.

"With my bow and arrows, I respectfully ask for the divine protection of the sun god Apollo and the moon goddess Artemis."

Drako released the two arrows, which flew into the infinite sky. At some point, these arrows stopped.

"I offer thee this calamity."

The arrows, which were already two pseudo-Noble Phantasms, were divided into hundreds of these.

If this was a B-range Noble Phantasm with normal magic arrows, what was its true range at this time?

"Phoebus Catastrophe!"

The hundreds of arrows fell a few dozen meters away from Drako. They all fell around Augusta, making a circle with her in the centre.

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With Augusta's death, we have reached the end of this volume. What comes now are a few chapters of transition as always.


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