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It was great until the author introduced the myriad island and its trials. This isnt consistent with the current lore of one piece
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Loving the story so far but it seems as the author has dropped the book or moved it to a different website. Don’t recommend reading it if you don’t like cliff hangers as the last chapter left one.
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The story itself is not bad however Author ruined it with System it robs the feeling of getting strong when mc can just spam Devil fruits and their all OP AF honestly this story would of been better without system and mc Got gifted one devil fruit which would of been the Balrog fruit and that's it I mean why does mc need cheats I do like the Time Crystal it's a neat idea however everything else is boring and lame systems should go die lol
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Did u survive from covid? I hope you did, we need more chapters. If you somehow didnt then just ask some ROB for a set of computer and internet connection in your grave so you can post more chapters. Cheers!
great start to a story. it is nice to have an MC who is not OP from the beginning and not a pervert. this story is more interesting then other one piece fanfic than i have read so far. please keep up with it and don't drop it.
Please upload more chapters soon. It is really great story... I just u release more chapter soon I really can not wait............................
Your story is great. Please continue. I loved it. Even one chapter a week will do, just don't stop writing it. Please, And again your story is one of my favourite.
Very well done. The author did his research, and there are some really good twists to the story. The MC isn’t a little *****, and everything is progressing pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏😂📖😂📖😂📖🙏
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Whats with smoker and erica power cancel each other? if i remember correctly smoker vs ace on canon [alabasta arc] = total defeat of smoker DF
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One of the best one piece fanfic's I've ever read. Well built character and a good story design not so op like most one piece fanfics
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автор двинул кони печально такая история незакончена нафига делать гг близнецом чтоб в конце забросить и не написать хотя бы до момента воссоединения встречи братьев автор эх потеряли тебя похоже навсегда 3 года всё таки интересно жив ли писатель данного фанфика
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It was great until the author introduced the myriad island and its trials. This isnt consistent with the current lore of one piece
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Loving the story so far but it seems as the author has dropped the book or moved it to a different website. Don’t recommend reading it if you don’t like cliff hangers as the last chapter left one.
Revelar Spoiler The story itself is not bad however Author ruined it with System it robs the feeling of getting strong when mc can just spam Devil fruits and their all OP AF honestly this story would of been better without system and mc Got gifted one devil fruit which would of been the Balrog fruit and that's it I mean why does mc need cheats I do like the Time Crystal it's a neat idea however everything else is boring and lame systems should go die lol
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Did u survive from covid? I hope you did, we need more chapters. If you somehow didnt then just ask some ROB for a set of computer and internet connection in your grave so you can post more chapters. Cheers!
great start to a story. it is nice to have an MC who is not OP from the beginning and not a pervert. this story is more interesting then other one piece fanfic than i have read so far. please keep up with it and don't drop it.
Please upload more chapters soon. It is really great story... I just u release more chapter soon I really can not wait............................
Your story is great. Please continue. I loved it. Even one chapter a week will do, just don't stop writing it. Please, And again your story is one of my favourite.
Very well done. The author did his research, and there are some really good twists to the story. The MC isn’t a little *****, and everything is progressing pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏😂📖😂📖😂📖🙏
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I think this is a great fanfic with a lot of potential and if the author sticks with it can turn out to be a really amazing story. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
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Whats with smoker and erica power cancel each other? if i remember correctly smoker vs ace on canon [alabasta arc] = total defeat of smoker DF
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One of the best one piece fanfic's I've ever read. Well built character and a good story design not so op like most one piece fanfics
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автор двинул кони печально такая история незакончена нафига делать гг близнецом чтоб в конце забросить и не написать хотя бы до момента воссоединения встречи братьев автор эх потеряли тебя похоже навсегда 3 года всё таки интересно жив ли писатель данного фанфика