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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3 5)фон мира - 3. 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 3.
A really good one but sadly it's taking long to update. skrjsjrjerjfjfjrjejfj2jwjfjj3jjtrjejwjejrjrj3rjrjejejjfdjrjrjrjfjrjeje
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i like harem novels cause thats not really realistic on real life, maybe on the rich families but harem on Boku ko hero? it is not really that applicable cause they live on modern world not on strong eat the weak worlds or ecchi harem worlds like dxd, infinite stratos.
Good story. Keep up the great writing. I am the Heart of my Swarm. Their Bodies are my Flesh, and their Essence is my Blood. Through them, I am a thousand blades, Knowing life in death, And death in life. I have withstood much pain to rain them in Though I myself shall reign over nothing Devour my enemies, Eternal Swarm!
Welp. Quality wise this is bloody good. Grammar mistake? what's that? we dont do that here. Speech is interesting, none of that boring one lines that is often encountered in other fics. None of that excessive explanation that chinese novel seems to love so much. The MC himself is glorious. Chaotic, ruthless, but still willing to have some fun instead of brooding all the time. True he is edgy but he is also fun. World and story is still in early stage of MHA so nothign really out of line yet. But there is some changes even though it does not seriously alter canon yet,.
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Very good, but sometimes I feel that the author is unnecessarily dragging things out by uselessly describing events (that are the same as in the anime)
I liked the fan-fic, and mc is cool, and I would like more chapters on the topic of the swarm and its affiliation to it. Damn mc is not enough girls, he is lonely, maybe mc x and his sister
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have not read the fan fic yet but you said he has one of the most powerful things in the universe so i dont know what the swarm is but give me a power scaling of it like city to planet
I’ve been reading this for a while for got to give my review so here keeep writing ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
Oh my gosh, this guy! He takes freaking FOREVER to upload! Seriously, I hate him. If he hadn't thought out and projected reasons for things, I would not be reading. Wait, I'm the author himself. Eh, still true. Honestly, I'm having a lot of fun thinking about future plot points. So much fun, in fact, that actually writing up to them is not consistent. Put that together with school and mental health issues, and you get terribly spaced out uploads. However, if I do get to everything, it should be a fun ride that sticks with the manga basically as long as possible, before Kai's arc takes over. I am planning on having Deku kind of still be the Hero with a capital H, but Kai will not be a lesser character by any means. Aiming for a bit of a Sam/Frodo thing: one saves the day, and the other makes sure he gets there to do it. Don't know where Gollum/Smeagol fits into that comparison, but I stand by it. Subscribe, and just take it as it comes. Feel welcome to simply tag it into your library to stock up updates. I really hate how inconsistent a writer I am, but changing that even a little is the purpose of my fanfiction jaunts. That way, if I am trying to legit get something published in the future, my publisher/agent/self won't be trying to strangle me demanding where my manuscript is. See you in the Author's Notes sections!
I admire all the time and effort that TVRKM puts into his literary works. I love My Hero Academia and, although I don't personally know StarCraft, I am very intrigued with the world he has set up. I am looking forward to the story he will create and, although I know new chapters may come infrequently, I will patiently wait for these chapters. TVRKM clearly thinks through the workings of his fictional worlds and he won't write as many plotholes as some writers. Looking forward to new content.
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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3 5)фон мира - 3. 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 3.
A really good one but sadly it's taking long to update. skrjsjrjerjfjfjrjejfj2jwjfjj3jjtrjejwjejrjrj3rjrjejejjfdjrjrjrjfjrjeje
Revelar Spoiler i like harem novels cause thats not really realistic on real life, maybe on the rich families but harem on Boku ko hero? it is not really that applicable cause they live on modern world not on strong eat the weak worlds or ecchi harem worlds like dxd, infinite stratos.
Good story. Keep up the great writing. I am the Heart of my Swarm. Their Bodies are my Flesh, and their Essence is my Blood. Through them, I am a thousand blades, Knowing life in death, And death in life. I have withstood much pain to rain them in Though I myself shall reign over nothing Devour my enemies, Eternal Swarm!
Welp. Quality wise this is bloody good. Grammar mistake? what's that? we dont do that here. Speech is interesting, none of that boring one lines that is often encountered in other fics. None of that excessive explanation that chinese novel seems to love so much. The MC himself is glorious. Chaotic, ruthless, but still willing to have some fun instead of brooding all the time. True he is edgy but he is also fun. World and story is still in early stage of MHA so nothign really out of line yet. But there is some changes even though it does not seriously alter canon yet,.
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Very good, but sometimes I feel that the author is unnecessarily dragging things out by uselessly describing events (that are the same as in the anime)
I liked the fan-fic, and mc is cool, and I would like more chapters on the topic of the swarm and its affiliation to it. Damn mc is not enough girls, he is lonely, maybe mc x and his sister
FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!! FOR THE SWARM!!
have not read the fan fic yet but you said he has one of the most powerful things in the universe so i dont know what the swarm is but give me a power scaling of it like city to planet
I’ve been reading this for a while for got to give my review so here keeep writing ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
Oh my gosh, this guy! He takes freaking FOREVER to upload! Seriously, I hate him. If he hadn't thought out and projected reasons for things, I would not be reading. Wait, I'm the author himself. Eh, still true. Honestly, I'm having a lot of fun thinking about future plot points. So much fun, in fact, that actually writing up to them is not consistent. Put that together with school and mental health issues, and you get terribly spaced out uploads. However, if I do get to everything, it should be a fun ride that sticks with the manga basically as long as possible, before Kai's arc takes over. I am planning on having Deku kind of still be the Hero with a capital H, but Kai will not be a lesser character by any means. Aiming for a bit of a Sam/Frodo thing: one saves the day, and the other makes sure he gets there to do it. Don't know where Gollum/Smeagol fits into that comparison, but I stand by it. Subscribe, and just take it as it comes. Feel welcome to simply tag it into your library to stock up updates. I really hate how inconsistent a writer I am, but changing that even a little is the purpose of my fanfiction jaunts. That way, if I am trying to legit get something published in the future, my publisher/agent/self won't be trying to strangle me demanding where my manuscript is. See you in the Author's Notes sections!
I admire all the time and effort that TVRKM puts into his literary works. I love My Hero Academia and, although I don't personally know StarCraft, I am very intrigued with the world he has set up. I am looking forward to the story he will create and, although I know new chapters may come infrequently, I will patiently wait for these chapters. TVRKM clearly thinks through the workings of his fictional worlds and he won't write as many plotholes as some writers. Looking forward to new content.
good job here's some bewbies AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAÀAAAAAAAAAAAA