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Hiii DarkForces, I just came across Journey To Become A True God not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺! I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂
-Too many pokemon - MC character too dense (not calculative enough) for someone who holds extreme power - repetitive plot (i believe xianxia fans knew what i mean). MC new power level doesn't translate into story improvement...
great novel . Grammer supper, mc is God and his dog is awesome . he fks almost 99 million women. great work.
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please edit your translation as it really sucks. The story is good very promising but the editing and its translation to English really makes it the worst book to read
🤣🤣🤣 this novel has the funniest review section. I did even finish the first chapter. I wanted to read the reviews to see if the grammar ever improves. But didn’t expect to see so many bad reviews. And what’s even funnier is that the only good reviews belonged to people who either didn’t read the novel or never read past the initial chapters (26). The sole exception being someone who made it nearly 1700 chapters but that 5 star reviewer could finish this novel. I’m not gonna waste my time but this made me laugh
Although, I liked the story plot of this novel. There are many thing that are extremely annoying specially the way he fight and make others wants to beat him which repeated in every battle.... For example, instead of killing or defeating his enemies right away or countering it some equally powerful moves, he just uses his body to showoff and behaves likes some kind of 3rd rate villains in cultivation novels which lacks gracefulness of the martial arts .....even when facing opponent on same cultivation levels, he hid his cultivation level and acts like some pathetic looser..... Even though enemies wants kill him, he acts like some kind of benovaleant saint and let his enemies go and as a result not only does he make things complicated, he even put people closest to him danger..... Although, he has enough strength and power, nobody seems to know him and creating some unnecessary problems..... Even if prefers a peaceful life and not interested in power he could still establish a power and let his women do the job for him... Afterall he has some great women and easily solve this problem.... Not to mention the way he dressed himself which did not fit his status..... It is true that he comes from a lower class and doesn't really care about his appearence, but he still needs to maintain a minimum appearence to match his women.... What worse, recently the Author even started to avoid mentioning anything related to his cultivation level for example whether he is still at the 1st level of the Immortal True God level or managed to advanced to higher level.... there also no mentioning about anything related to the Sage God Domain and the Gift he received from the Eagle God Hios,,,,, aside from that, he doesn't seem to use his treasures properly, which in my opinion is a waste of natural resources.... For example, it has been so long yet he has yet to bring out the true power of his Heavenly Armor..... Not to mention the amount of time he truely uses Divine Yin Yang Sword is extremely limited.... Even though, he has such a powerful profound ark as Divine God Machine Deep Ark, forget about war he don't even use it for transportation then what is the use of it having or not having.... Finally, in my opinion since it is a Cultivation Novel even if it focuses on Dual Cultivation, author should follow the mentality of a cultivator should have...
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Some advice for the author, get a editor to go back through your old chapters and fix the grammar and stuff like that so new people will want to continue reading and paying to read you story.
Can anyone tell me what chapter the translations get fixed and the author gets an editor?, I can read it but only when I see the light at the end of the tunnel otherwise I just think and know i’m going to keep on keeping more brain rot.
I like this novel. But, after reading more than 3000 chapters and the same plot repeating itself with minor changes. I lost interest in this novel. Author could you please tell me when are u going to end this novel?
Probably a gpod novel, I don't know, but the translation is very bad and barely readable, that too if you're not so keen on grammar, pronouns and incorrect translations.
I really like this story but the grammar is god awful. A word of advice is you still decide to read it despite the grammar. If it's says He, it means She If it says She, it means He
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really good but the grammar kills it needs a proof reader dont use coins on it
do not read this absolute thrash 4 years since the first chapter and no grammar has been fixed this looks like the worst MTL you could imagine, any review above 1 is fake or a bot
you can't get through the first chapter due to misspelled words and poor grammatical structure.
Please help me review and find flaws and also suggest ways to improve the story. Book=> Twilight Emperor: Dark and Light (Search full name in the search bar. :-)
too many cliches the first girl basically trow herself at him like in not even 12 hours the grammar is so trashy that some time there are some worlds missing like "it is, he, she, is like... etc" if you want to read this novel you have to become the 1/100 author of this novel for deducing all the worlds missing and have to go to the doctor for mental issue for how cringey and cliche it is
from what i can see after reading up to chapter 300, it appears the concept of impregnation is nonexistent to these women who end up sleeping with Ye Chen for the first time. it's not like they go in sleeping with him knowing they won't get pregnant because he is turning his sperm into potent yang qi, they only find out after when he explains it to them. so these women knowing allow him to unload into them for the first time without care for getting pregnant and that just strikes me as an odd flaw. I also see from the wiki page Ye Chen doesn't have any children, meaning he has never gotten anyone pregnant and I feel that these women who claim they love him so much should want to have his child, but have yet to conceive. I hope the author gives Ye Chen some kids as that will give him something else to protect besides his women
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
strongest ,powerful,smart,loveable Mc nice fantasy story. 👌 go and read it it's good
I like this novel, truly do. The plot caters perfectly to my tastes in webnovels and it even has a truck load of chaptersso I’m very satisfied, but the author obviously doesn’t speak english so the grammar is abysmal and it gets better (slightly) but only after the first 200 or so chapters and not many have patience for that so I believe the author needs to edit these chapters before continuing or the novel is never gonna get the love that I think it deserves. Seriously the only problem is the terrible english in the beginning parts otherwise it’s wonderful.
first thing: forgive me, my english is badits good novel, i really like it, after 2500CH that i had readgood thing: "nothing one night stand"so all harem continue grow up with MC, "action is also good" coz mc no fear to death but.............. bad things: "MC less killing", so some problem came back to MC, its better if MC kill anyone who provoke MC, and "grammar in beginning is too bad", but after a few chapters, it's going a good grammar
Repeating sentences very often "this is not too much, this is an extraordinary strength" Ye Chen said to Chu Yuechan. Ye Chen told that this is an extraordinary strength. With this, Ye Chen was able to gain extraordinary power. "I think this will be difficult to learn" Chu Yuechan said to Ye Chen. Chu Yuechan said that this would be difficult to learn.
Author more chapters, I like this novel and am very excited to see Ye Chen powers while he is getting stronger. So don't Stop novel , if there is any personal problem and you aren't able to upload chapters atleast give some notice ahead so I don't have to worry for nothing and can wait.✌️
Hiii DarkForces, I just came across Journey To Become A True God not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺! I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂
-Too many pokemon - MC character too dense (not calculative enough) for someone who holds extreme power - repetitive plot (i believe xianxia fans knew what i mean). MC new power level doesn't translate into story improvement...
great novel . Grammer supper, mc is God and his dog is awesome . he fks almost 99 million women. great work.
Revelar Spoiler please edit your translation as it really sucks. The story is good very promising but the editing and its translation to English really makes it the worst book to read
🤣🤣🤣 this novel has the funniest review section. I did even finish the first chapter. I wanted to read the reviews to see if the grammar ever improves. But didn’t expect to see so many bad reviews. And what’s even funnier is that the only good reviews belonged to people who either didn’t read the novel or never read past the initial chapters (26). The sole exception being someone who made it nearly 1700 chapters but that 5 star reviewer could finish this novel. I’m not gonna waste my time but this made me laugh
Although, I liked the story plot of this novel. There are many thing that are extremely annoying specially the way he fight and make others wants to beat him which repeated in every battle.... For example, instead of killing or defeating his enemies right away or countering it some equally powerful moves, he just uses his body to showoff and behaves likes some kind of 3rd rate villains in cultivation novels which lacks gracefulness of the martial arts .....even when facing opponent on same cultivation levels, he hid his cultivation level and acts like some pathetic looser..... Even though enemies wants kill him, he acts like some kind of benovaleant saint and let his enemies go and as a result not only does he make things complicated, he even put people closest to him danger..... Although, he has enough strength and power, nobody seems to know him and creating some unnecessary problems..... Even if prefers a peaceful life and not interested in power he could still establish a power and let his women do the job for him... Afterall he has some great women and easily solve this problem.... Not to mention the way he dressed himself which did not fit his status..... It is true that he comes from a lower class and doesn't really care about his appearence, but he still needs to maintain a minimum appearence to match his women.... What worse, recently the Author even started to avoid mentioning anything related to his cultivation level for example whether he is still at the 1st level of the Immortal True God level or managed to advanced to higher level.... there also no mentioning about anything related to the Sage God Domain and the Gift he received from the Eagle God Hios,,,,, aside from that, he doesn't seem to use his treasures properly, which in my opinion is a waste of natural resources.... For example, it has been so long yet he has yet to bring out the true power of his Heavenly Armor..... Not to mention the amount of time he truely uses Divine Yin Yang Sword is extremely limited.... Even though, he has such a powerful profound ark as Divine God Machine Deep Ark, forget about war he don't even use it for transportation then what is the use of it having or not having.... Finally, in my opinion since it is a Cultivation Novel even if it focuses on Dual Cultivation, author should follow the mentality of a cultivator should have...
Revelar Spoiler Some advice for the author, get a editor to go back through your old chapters and fix the grammar and stuff like that so new people will want to continue reading and paying to read you story.
Can anyone tell me what chapter the translations get fixed and the author gets an editor?, I can read it but only when I see the light at the end of the tunnel otherwise I just think and know i’m going to keep on keeping more brain rot.
I like this novel. But, after reading more than 3000 chapters and the same plot repeating itself with minor changes. I lost interest in this novel. Author could you please tell me when are u going to end this novel?
Probably a gpod novel, I don't know, but the translation is very bad and barely readable, that too if you're not so keen on grammar, pronouns and incorrect translations.
I really like this story but the grammar is god awful. A word of advice is you still decide to read it despite the grammar. If it's says He, it means She If it says She, it means He
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
really good but the grammar kills it needs a proof reader dont use coins on it
do not read this absolute thrash 4 years since the first chapter and no grammar has been fixed this looks like the worst MTL you could imagine, any review above 1 is fake or a bot
you can't get through the first chapter due to misspelled words and poor grammatical structure.
Please help me review and find flaws and also suggest ways to improve the story. Book=> Twilight Emperor: Dark and Light (Search full name in the search bar. :-)
too many cliches the first girl basically trow herself at him like in not even 12 hours the grammar is so trashy that some time there are some worlds missing like "it is, he, she, is like... etc" if you want to read this novel you have to become the 1/100 author of this novel for deducing all the worlds missing and have to go to the doctor for mental issue for how cringey and cliche it is
from what i can see after reading up to chapter 300, it appears the concept of impregnation is nonexistent to these women who end up sleeping with Ye Chen for the first time. it's not like they go in sleeping with him knowing they won't get pregnant because he is turning his sperm into potent yang qi, they only find out after when he explains it to them. so these women knowing allow him to unload into them for the first time without care for getting pregnant and that just strikes me as an odd flaw. I also see from the wiki page Ye Chen doesn't have any children, meaning he has never gotten anyone pregnant and I feel that these women who claim they love him so much should want to have his child, but have yet to conceive. I hope the author gives Ye Chen some kids as that will give him something else to protect besides his women
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
strongest ,powerful,smart,loveable Mc nice fantasy story. 👌 go and read it it's good
I like this novel, truly do. The plot caters perfectly to my tastes in webnovels and it even has a truck load of chaptersso I’m very satisfied, but the author obviously doesn’t speak english so the grammar is abysmal and it gets better (slightly) but only after the first 200 or so chapters and not many have patience for that so I believe the author needs to edit these chapters before continuing or the novel is never gonna get the love that I think it deserves. Seriously the only problem is the terrible english in the beginning parts otherwise it’s wonderful.
first thing: forgive me, my english is badits good novel, i really like it, after 2500CH that i had readgood thing: "nothing one night stand"so all harem continue grow up with MC, "action is also good" coz mc no fear to death but.............. bad things: "MC less killing", so some problem came back to MC, its better if MC kill anyone who provoke MC, and "grammar in beginning is too bad", but after a few chapters, it's going a good grammar
Repeating sentences very often "this is not too much, this is an extraordinary strength" Ye Chen said to Chu Yuechan. Ye Chen told that this is an extraordinary strength. With this, Ye Chen was able to gain extraordinary power. "I think this will be difficult to learn" Chu Yuechan said to Ye Chen. Chu Yuechan said that this would be difficult to learn.
Author more chapters, I like this novel and am very excited to see Ye Chen powers while he is getting stronger. So don't Stop novel , if there is any personal problem and you aren't able to upload chapters atleast give some notice ahead so I don't have to worry for nothing and can wait.✌️
Great book.one of the best books I have read so far.