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This is so pathetic and cringe. Seriously. This is 100% self insertion and you can tell by his writing that this guy never had a relationship in his life. Cringe
rating this a 5 star, author mentions he writes it casually so i kind of understand if some the elements are bad, its wish fulfillment though so if its not your cup of tea i do not recommend it, dont know why everyone does not like mc telling he is from another world like its not a big problem, if you guys want to insert yourself in this story just go read something else, the drama here though... i am not saying its bad it just needs work, overall its good to kill time, some plotholes here and there but not really noticeable but this fan fic is literally made from one person who writes this for fun from what it seems, MC will struggle, altough it will be a really small struggle in which he will quickly bypass it and become stronger, and thats it.
It's a really really really great stories.. I love it so much.. I sad it's ending though, but i know every story need to end.. I recomend read this story to you who still don't 😁😁😁👍
Un peu déçu de la fin, j'aurais aimer savoir ce que l'auteur pense être le one piece mais l'histoire en elle même était super ! Les personnages sont attachants, Luna est hilarante, et les pouvoirs de Lucas de plus en plus absurde. Hâte de lire la suite !
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This is a beautiful story which has been well thought out. The character while seemingly a little NPCish have feelings amd emotioms like any other. All in all a very good read. Good job author.
MC is fanboy and tells that he is from other universe. That's a hard pass for me. This level of stupidity is not my cup of tea. What next? He's gonna tell about future ? Nope nope nope. Not gonna read it anymore.
The only reason I'm giving it a 5 star is that it is very unique and I like these kind's of story's where people don't steal people abilities and they only have it and not the original.
Bro te voy a hacer sincero, espero que no te enfades demasiado pero hoy en día hay muchas personas que no les gusta este tipo de historias del típico "sencillo", por ejemplo buscamos algo nuevo que nos deje con la intriga y con la emoción de que va pasar después, y tu historia solo deja algo como 'meh' como si nada más agregaras un personaje SECUNDARIO a la histórica principal, que al fin de cuentas nada de la trama original va a cambiar. Aparte de que el MC no tiene como un persolidad que lo caracteriza y solo se ve como un típico secundario que va estar en el trasero del protagonista de el anime siguiendolo como un cachorro perdido (perdón si te ofendes), pero en el mundo de one piece tiene demasiadas rutas para escoger a donde ir (como ser un asesino, un rey de un país, un yonko, etc) no es como dragon ball que sólo tienes que hacerte fuerte y ya.
mantap SEKALI akhirnya saya menemukan salah satu novel fanfiction yang ceritanya berlanjut sampai tampat, walaupun say membaca ini di apk Wattpad, tapi saya sangat terhibur membaca novel anda,... novel anda sangat hidup sekali menurut saya, baik itu juga membuat para pembaca memiliki perasaan senang, bahagia, kecewa, dan juga ada perasaan sedih juga... yah intinya novel buatanmu sangat bagus bagus bagus bagus sekali!! dan terima kasih telah menghibur saya dalam membaca novel anda diwaktu luang saya, Sampai jumpa dikaryamu selanjutnya, dan semoga harimu menyenangkan!! :)
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Yooo author sorry im late read your story, even though mc is carefree at first to tell he was from another world, but i still enjoy this. sorry that i late . i love this ff
To be honest, I only read a few chapters but the love drama in this story me don't like. Next I skip skip some chap to see what's going on and to see wether this story improve and umm it's not what I would read is my answer. Also Mc go to bleach in the end although I had no idea what had happened;-;. Anyway all I want to say is that everyone have their on taste and this story is not to my liking and I don't like this mc
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This story is one of the most interesting ine piece stories i found. I hope to one day read that bleach fanfic and bring in his wife and daughter Luna where they can live in karakura town where they become neighbors with Ichigo
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It is a Beautiful Story. I really enjoyed reading it and I just wanted to continue reading. I also recommended it to my friends because I think they will like it. All in all: I love it.
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its a good story that got me into this story from chapter 1 and i hope to find more stories on lucas meeting his mothers side of his story and hope to see him bring Nami his wife, Luna his daugter, Elsa his side chick and their son to the soul society
The story itself was great, had interesting interactions, and was kind of cool, but the MC is getting on my nerves with his idealism and stuff. The fruit idea in beginning was to give him adaptation to whatever scenario that is occurring and that was great but by the end, he can recreate whatever he wants seeming kind of like a copout and I didn't enjoy that. but a good story overall, thanks, author-san!
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Im just writing about my opinion here okay? No need to hate. Okay so the reason why I rated low on this is because of the MC's personality. He's too much of a fanboy! I get it that he's an otaku and a huge fan of one piece because I'm one as well. He lacks ambition! The thing needed to go further the path of being a true pirate! He casually tells he's from another world to the straw hats even though he don't know them too well yet. He thinks like he's a spectator and treats everything like a fiction but it was his true reality! I endured his personality and read to see if he wakes up from his very wrong thinking. But I have up when he became cupid and tries to matchmake some characters.... He still haven't woken up from his fantasies... That power he has is useless as he always don't train to use his powers to survive... In one piece, it's a world for the strong and weak people won't survive or live nicely. I know this is a fanfic so this is all I'm gonna say. By the way... can someone notify me if the mc matures? Maybe I'll try to read again...
although I do like this story I found the characters be great and specially the story build up but they were some times I felt like there were things that were missing but I hope the store comes out with sequel so there are a lot of questions that need to be answered
So.. to anyone who wants to drop this novel after first few chapters.. DON'T. I get it's pretty weird at start but it gets better later. Anyone saying stuff like MC is weak is kinda weird... Lucas after like 10-20 chapters became the strongest "strawhat" and stayed like that till the end. I also personally enjoyed the fact that he haven't immediately mastered armored + observation haki (he only knew how to train observation h) and trained in 6 arts like pretty much every single OP fanfic mc. However I think that anything that happens post timeskip has 0 meaning... Lucas is yonkou level in terms of haki + he has every single DF ability... Basically everything after timeskip was a gag... and I couldn't even enjoy harem scenes since Lucas was always hanging around with his kid... and I kinda hate that author san didn't mention anything about void century that wouls make sense with Im being mc's aunt...
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I love it. Though the ending are... anti-climatic but in the end, the whole journey is a blast. and grats to the author to write the the book till its completes. my hat off to you, unlike most of the authors... only some complete it while the rest either abandon or drop it without any reason...
This is so pathetic and cringe. Seriously. This is 100% self insertion and you can tell by his writing that this guy never had a relationship in his life. Cringe
rating this a 5 star, author mentions he writes it casually so i kind of understand if some the elements are bad, its wish fulfillment though so if its not your cup of tea i do not recommend it, dont know why everyone does not like mc telling he is from another world like its not a big problem, if you guys want to insert yourself in this story just go read something else, the drama here though... i am not saying its bad it just needs work, overall its good to kill time, some plotholes here and there but not really noticeable but this fan fic is literally made from one person who writes this for fun from what it seems, MC will struggle, altough it will be a really small struggle in which he will quickly bypass it and become stronger, and thats it.
It's a really really really great stories.. I love it so much.. I sad it's ending though, but i know every story need to end.. I recomend read this story to you who still don't 😁😁😁👍
Un peu déçu de la fin, j'aurais aimer savoir ce que l'auteur pense être le one piece mais l'histoire en elle même était super ! Les personnages sont attachants, Luna est hilarante, et les pouvoirs de Lucas de plus en plus absurde. Hâte de lire la suite !
Revelar Spoiler This is a beautiful story which has been well thought out. The character while seemingly a little NPCish have feelings amd emotioms like any other. All in all a very good read. Good job author.
MC is fanboy and tells that he is from other universe. That's a hard pass for me. This level of stupidity is not my cup of tea. What next? He's gonna tell about future ? Nope nope nope. Not gonna read it anymore.
The only reason I'm giving it a 5 star is that it is very unique and I like these kind's of story's where people don't steal people abilities and they only have it and not the original.
Bro te voy a hacer sincero, espero que no te enfades demasiado pero hoy en día hay muchas personas que no les gusta este tipo de historias del típico "sencillo", por ejemplo buscamos algo nuevo que nos deje con la intriga y con la emoción de que va pasar después, y tu historia solo deja algo como 'meh' como si nada más agregaras un personaje SECUNDARIO a la histórica principal, que al fin de cuentas nada de la trama original va a cambiar. Aparte de que el MC no tiene como un persolidad que lo caracteriza y solo se ve como un típico secundario que va estar en el trasero del protagonista de el anime siguiendolo como un cachorro perdido (perdón si te ofendes), pero en el mundo de one piece tiene demasiadas rutas para escoger a donde ir (como ser un asesino, un rey de un país, un yonko, etc) no es como dragon ball que sólo tienes que hacerte fuerte y ya.
mantap SEKALI akhirnya saya menemukan salah satu novel fanfiction yang ceritanya berlanjut sampai tampat, walaupun say membaca ini di apk Wattpad, tapi saya sangat terhibur membaca novel anda,... novel anda sangat hidup sekali menurut saya, baik itu juga membuat para pembaca memiliki perasaan senang, bahagia, kecewa, dan juga ada perasaan sedih juga... yah intinya novel buatanmu sangat bagus bagus bagus bagus sekali!! dan terima kasih telah menghibur saya dalam membaca novel anda diwaktu luang saya, Sampai jumpa dikaryamu selanjutnya, dan semoga harimu menyenangkan!! :)
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Yooo author sorry im late read your story, even though mc is carefree at first to tell he was from another world, but i still enjoy this. sorry that i late . i love this ff
To be honest, I only read a few chapters but the love drama in this story me don't like. Next I skip skip some chap to see what's going on and to see wether this story improve and umm it's not what I would read is my answer. Also Mc go to bleach in the end although I had no idea what had happened;-;. Anyway all I want to say is that everyone have their on taste and this story is not to my liking and I don't like this mc
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This story is one of the most interesting ine piece stories i found. I hope to one day read that bleach fanfic and bring in his wife and daughter Luna where they can live in karakura town where they become neighbors with Ichigo
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It is a Beautiful Story. I really enjoyed reading it and I just wanted to continue reading. I also recommended it to my friends because I think they will like it. All in all: I love it.
I Kinda Liked It. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
its a good story that got me into this story from chapter 1 and i hope to find more stories on lucas meeting his mothers side of his story and hope to see him bring Nami his wife, Luna his daugter, Elsa his side chick and their son to the soul society
The story itself was great, had interesting interactions, and was kind of cool, but the MC is getting on my nerves with his idealism and stuff. The fruit idea in beginning was to give him adaptation to whatever scenario that is occurring and that was great but by the end, he can recreate whatever he wants seeming kind of like a copout and I didn't enjoy that. but a good story overall, thanks, author-san!
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Gran historia 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙂😂👍👍😂🙂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂👍👍😂👍👍😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐👍🖐🖐
Im just writing about my opinion here okay? No need to hate. Okay so the reason why I rated low on this is because of the MC's personality. He's too much of a fanboy! I get it that he's an otaku and a huge fan of one piece because I'm one as well. He lacks ambition! The thing needed to go further the path of being a true pirate! He casually tells he's from another world to the straw hats even though he don't know them too well yet. He thinks like he's a spectator and treats everything like a fiction but it was his true reality! I endured his personality and read to see if he wakes up from his very wrong thinking. But I have up when he became cupid and tries to matchmake some characters.... He still haven't woken up from his fantasies... That power he has is useless as he always don't train to use his powers to survive... In one piece, it's a world for the strong and weak people won't survive or live nicely. I know this is a fanfic so this is all I'm gonna say. By the way... can someone notify me if the mc matures? Maybe I'll try to read again...
although I do like this story I found the characters be great and specially the story build up but they were some times I felt like there were things that were missing but I hope the store comes out with sequel so there are a lot of questions that need to be answered
So.. to anyone who wants to drop this novel after first few chapters.. DON'T. I get it's pretty weird at start but it gets better later. Anyone saying stuff like MC is weak is kinda weird... Lucas after like 10-20 chapters became the strongest "strawhat" and stayed like that till the end. I also personally enjoyed the fact that he haven't immediately mastered armored + observation haki (he only knew how to train observation h) and trained in 6 arts like pretty much every single OP fanfic mc. However I think that anything that happens post timeskip has 0 meaning... Lucas is yonkou level in terms of haki + he has every single DF ability... Basically everything after timeskip was a gag... and I couldn't even enjoy harem scenes since Lucas was always hanging around with his kid... and I kinda hate that author san didn't mention anything about void century that wouls make sense with Im being mc's aunt...
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I love it. Though the ending are... anti-climatic but in the end, the whole journey is a blast. and grats to the author to write the the book till its completes. my hat off to you, unlike most of the authors... only some complete it while the rest either abandon or drop it without any reason...