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What’s the point of fusing both saiyans and Superman? Saiyans can kill Superman with a fart, not to mention that it’ll only add weakness to the saiyan gene
Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update. Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update. Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update. Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update.
A slow story that tells nothing. It was possible to combine 12 chapters into one or two. P.S. google translator. ........................................................................................................................
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I won't lie, I haven't read this story yet, but from the comments and synopsis it looks pretty promising, so I'll be reading from now on. Good luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luck
I as Naruto's favourite Ramen Stand give this a five star it's pretty good just hoping it doesn't up in baloney land. 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜
Really good I like how you put the MC in such a verse and how he has such an epic powerset..... ———_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______———
I as the Author Will give this Five Stars, I'll try to make a decent gamer fic that isn't complete baloney- I'll try it if it fails then it fails- hope you give criticism and stuff so I can improve.
All the comments are missleading , i dont th8nk that they even read..sorry to say but this fic is chaotic simply jumps from one scene to another no lead in the story at all ... chaos in every chapter and by ch 17 he already gets the life is just a game for you *****ing....i m out
What’s the point of fusing both saiyans and Superman? Saiyans can kill Superman with a fart, not to mention that it’ll only add weakness to the saiyan gene
Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update. Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update. Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update. Hey author, I'm gonna throw this novel of yours inside my library and will wait everyday for its update.
A slow story that tells nothing. It was possible to combine 12 chapters into one or two. P.S. google translator. ........................................................................................................................
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I won't lie, I haven't read this story yet, but from the comments and synopsis it looks pretty promising, so I'll be reading from now on. Good luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luckGood luck good luck good luck
I as Naruto's favourite Ramen Stand give this a five star it's pretty good just hoping it doesn't up in baloney land. 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜 ✧[Ichiraku Ramen!!]✧🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜
Really good I like how you put the MC in such a verse and how he has such an epic powerset..... ———_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______——————_______———
I as the Author Will give this Five Stars, I'll try to make a decent gamer fic that isn't complete baloney- I'll try it if it fails then it fails- hope you give criticism and stuff so I can improve.
All the comments are missleading , i dont th8nk that they even read..sorry to say but this fic is chaotic simply jumps from one scene to another no lead in the story at all ... chaos in every chapter and by ch 17 he already gets the life is just a game for you *****ing....i m out