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this is great novel,the author change pov once in a while makes character alive whic is very rare nowadays thats makes this character design is great 5 for it, with good character design and good writing style make the story quiet rich, story from the past, politic, fight, love, friendship, story development is quiet complex the author jump the story one to another character and time, which is we can see the plot will be connected later, 5 for story development updatinh stabilitiy? lets skip this just give this 5 i still confused with the world background, there is no clear explanation what kind of world is this or perhaps i missed it or didnt read it yet, what i know this is because its in the plot, the author explain it lil by little, makes reader curious , feel the emotion is sign of good novel many review didint like it because "wife cheating" ntr, but thats not enough reason to give this novel bad review and hate the author, its ridiculous well i give it overall 5, last read chap 105, i just feel some lacking emotional delivery thing, perhaps i will read some surprise later. if there is map it will be great too, this is good novel the author know his way he just need to sharpen the skill and am sure the next novel will be great keep up the good work
starts off slow but omg u get sucked in quick,unique characters that all mesh together as the story progresses is a testament o the authors talented writing.all the ntr comments are stupid and I heavily advise people to read this
Frankly, it's hard to say ntr, but there's definitely cheating. Ntr usually has sexual intercourse and stealing. Here, Kyle and Helia have been in a relationship for a while. There was no sexual intercourse between them. But there was flirting, kissing and hugging. This is cheating no matter which country's culture and law you look at. The author wrote it well, not as disturbing as ntr novels but still not for me. Cheating is one of my most hated mistakes. In cheating, reasons are just excuses. She was alone, weak, in a difficult situation. These are just excuses to console yourself. Helia admits that she loved Kyle too, when she was about to die. Of course, we can have feelings for more than one person in life. However, this is not an excuse to cheat. If there was a reverse harem or open relationship, it would be more acceptable to me. But cheating is taboo for me. Of course, we should not blame only Helia. Arial himself cheated on Helia. That's why this relationship felt so weak. I don't like drama too much. The novel itself is good. The writing style of the author is very good. However, this novel is not for me. For me, the most important elements in the novel are; plots and relationships. That's why I wasn't too attached to this novel. However, the author did a good job. I would recommend reading it to anyone who is not bothered by it.
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The story was very good, until the author for some reason decided to throw everything in the trash with the betrayals from chapter 271. The MC discovers the betrayal of his wife and friend and does nothing, I'm dropping this story, a pity ...it had potential, but the author is a complete idiot
So I got to about chapter 135 and these are my thoughts a coward survives a war against demons and spends the rest of his life in a library learning knowledge on internal power and every other aspect of strength and strategy. Starts off good but after a certain point I feel it loses readability due to 3 things 1. The changing of P.O.V's the author changes the point of view between characters too much so its just a bunch of fillers going on while I want to know what's happening to the mc for example something happens to the MC on chapter 128 and then there are 17 chapters of everybody else's pov before we find out what happened to him. 2. Extremely long monologues. For the most part the language is easy to understand but during some chapters three will be a 3 chapter long rant of 1 person basically talking to themselves. and finally. 3. there isn't a lot of clarity on how the world works or where things are like they mention demon invasion but they don't mention from where and there is also a month system that is weird as well as a really weird transition of time where something will happen and the the author will just insert random flashbacks to provide unneeded context.
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For NTR fans, ride the MC's wife. I read it around 2014 or 2015 and got massive ntr and his hopeless and his misery the mc who couldn't even hate his friend and could only swallow his pride and let go and pretend not to know of any. He felt that his time on battle more than on bed, so he forget and forgive his friend as long as he care his wife on bed
So far it reminds me of the korean novel named "I am the monarch". The premise has some similarity and highly recommend it who ever want to it something similar to this. This novel suffer from lack of a editor/proofreader. It's confusing when the author tries retelling about the protagonist's past. Just to name one example: In the first 2 chapter shows a flashback scene 8 hours prior to the beginning and at the same time he tells his 8 years before. confusing, I had to reread to confirm it. 😅
5 Star all the way, so far the story, character and world is of good qualities. Good English and stable updates, what more do you need? Read it now🤌
⛔REVIEW: Currently at 500+ chapter⛔ *This is why many says this novel is NTR: The MC has 4 friends in the academy named Kyle, Lisa & Helia. Kyle likes Helia but Helia likes the MC. After some events Helia & MC became a couple and married while Kyle was heartbroken but tried to be happy by doing playboy sh*ts. After some chapter, the MC goes leads wars and stuff while never having for time for his wife, Helia. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia but does nothing due to being bff with MC. While leading war MC is poisoned and only has months to live. MC thought he would die so he distanced himself from his wifey, Helia. Plot armor happened and MC learned how and where to find the cure of the poison. While finding cure, MC was seduced by another woman and they had s*x. On the other hand, Helia is managing the MC's land and having a hard time and her father died. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia is and seduced her. Helia gives in and they kissed and flirted. MC comes home cured and learns about the affair from his spy. MC just waited Helia to choose between him and Kyle because MC is feeling guilty that he f*cked another girl. Helia ended things with Kyle and chose MC because she learned she is pregnant with MC's child. *If you like Tales of Reincarnated Lord, you will love this novel. ⛔Highly recommended
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And Awesome story. Rich with lore and action. If your a fan of kingdom building then this is for you. ** kei(author has super great novels)
Read this when it was on RoyalRoad and it has NTR. NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
I liked the start but its too much jumping fore and backwards. It develops extremly slow but whether you like it or not is subjective. The grammar is really bad i hate to double check a sentence... ultimately i dropped it :0
For everyone saying there netorare there is none for a person who originally read this years ago n royal road there is none there is a girl who vying for the affection of the main character even though he is solely devoted to his wife and so the infidelity part come from that it not large but its their netorare isn't always the hentai equivalent it just mean infidelity but it been years since I read it so I dotn remember if they actually do the deed the books is great and I enjoyed it all those years ago to bad the guy start slowing down on updates and other projects so I stopped reading it I think it was my first major reed on royal road so good luck man happy to see you bacl
The story seems kind of good, but you have butchered it with the poor grammar. Sometimes I dont exactly know what I'm reading. The world background was kinda ok.
it starts out pretty good , but after that there is a very distinct drop in quality, especially in grammar and spelling . Additionally it starts including more and more Filler chapters. Would not recommend
Its not something very new, updating speed is not that fast but it looks to be consistent, english not that bad. All in all i would say this is a great book that the author can use to polish his/her skill in writing. Take your time, get used to the nuances, and please make sure to keep up the quality until the end. Dont rush it. This experience will allow you to write better novels in the future. Who knows? Maybe one day you will introduce something ground breaking to the genre. When that time comes, you will be grateful that you have good writing skills that milk the ground breaking idea to the top of the list.
Hey I really love your novels but its too heavy for the heart both lord shadow and this one. Its a good thing but sometimes its just too much, i dont know what powers you have but the sorrow and pains of your mc. we felt it too.. try to write a novel with a little bit of comedy ...
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For people who want to know. So there’s no NTR but there is cheating on both sides. MC’s wife has a little affair wth his best friend while mc is away. MC finds out and keeps quiet. There’s no NTR cuz wife chooses the mc but she still states that she loves him and his bf which of course doesn’t sit well. She falls in love with the bf cuz he understands her more and mc wasn’t there most of the time. Ps wife and bf never have intercourse only kissing... which still sucks since I imagine a lot of people hate it when the main female lead falls in love wth someone else.
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warning for those like me. the mc first wife helia she will kiss another ... but not futher than that if you can stomach that your wife betrays you for moment then comeback (the reason is spoilers so I won't say it. but I can say he was away for curing his poison or he died) other that the storys good but you know I can't do it so stop reading it I kinda blame the author for wasting my time / you could have put description that you will put this plot and I expect you to redo it so stored reading to waste my time he guys I am not slandering the author (personal preference) when I read the novels treat as real I know just novel (but I feel if you accept such things. and you get used to it changes your mind, like if it happens to your wife in real world you would accept and just say its OK bullshiting that make your bond stronger not destroys it i will come you to try it ) other then that story development etc is worth of your time etc more that that if you can bare with it if you remove that part I think the story be perfect (I know nothing is perfect just decribs .... )or amazing ..
I usually do not leave a review but the dissappointment i felt from this novel forces me to do so. MC in this novel has zero control over the story development even though he is reincarnated. This novel is ur typical western novel with a hero, who only has struggles in front of him like; enemy in the dark, convoluted mysteries & past, betrayals by family friends wife kids, not likable MC or side characters. My gawd while writing this review i realize the story and charaters are sooo bland and boring. If you are wondering i have read up to 250 chapter, then i had to drop it bec i could not handle it anymore. The only good thing going for the author is World building however what uses does it have if u cannot even make use of it. The Titel does not fit the novel at all, should be rather ballad and tears of heroes.
I've been a huge fan of this story since RoyalroadL. Many nights were filled reading about Arial's journey. This story has worldbuilding in spades. Races, religions, nations, and history. That are fleshed out and not cookie cutter copies. I wholeheartedly recommend this story.
And when they saw the Duke becoming weak after his display of power, they King made a bold run for the king to strike him down but before he could get to him, there was a thunderous roar up in the skies that astonished everyone. Gaynor Arial bound dragon made an appearance for the first time descending down behind the Duke bring down a pressure upon everyone on the battlefield.
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This author puts NTR in his novels. ...........................................................................................................................
NTR........................................................................................................................................................
this is great novel,the author change pov once in a while makes character alive whic is very rare nowadays thats makes this character design is great 5 for it, with good character design and good writing style make the story quiet rich, story from the past, politic, fight, love, friendship, story development is quiet complex the author jump the story one to another character and time, which is we can see the plot will be connected later, 5 for story development updatinh stabilitiy? lets skip this just give this 5 i still confused with the world background, there is no clear explanation what kind of world is this or perhaps i missed it or didnt read it yet, what i know this is because its in the plot, the author explain it lil by little, makes reader curious , feel the emotion is sign of good novel many review didint like it because "wife cheating" ntr, but thats not enough reason to give this novel bad review and hate the author, its ridiculous well i give it overall 5, last read chap 105, i just feel some lacking emotional delivery thing, perhaps i will read some surprise later. if there is map it will be great too, this is good novel the author know his way he just need to sharpen the skill and am sure the next novel will be great keep up the good work
starts off slow but omg u get sucked in quick,unique characters that all mesh together as the story progresses is a testament o the authors talented writing.all the ntr comments are stupid and I heavily advise people to read this
Frankly, it's hard to say ntr, but there's definitely cheating. Ntr usually has sexual intercourse and stealing. Here, Kyle and Helia have been in a relationship for a while. There was no sexual intercourse between them. But there was flirting, kissing and hugging. This is cheating no matter which country's culture and law you look at. The author wrote it well, not as disturbing as ntr novels but still not for me. Cheating is one of my most hated mistakes. In cheating, reasons are just excuses. She was alone, weak, in a difficult situation. These are just excuses to console yourself. Helia admits that she loved Kyle too, when she was about to die. Of course, we can have feelings for more than one person in life. However, this is not an excuse to cheat. If there was a reverse harem or open relationship, it would be more acceptable to me. But cheating is taboo for me. Of course, we should not blame only Helia. Arial himself cheated on Helia. That's why this relationship felt so weak. I don't like drama too much. The novel itself is good. The writing style of the author is very good. However, this novel is not for me. For me, the most important elements in the novel are; plots and relationships. That's why I wasn't too attached to this novel. However, the author did a good job. I would recommend reading it to anyone who is not bothered by it.
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The story was very good, until the author for some reason decided to throw everything in the trash with the betrayals from chapter 271. The MC discovers the betrayal of his wife and friend and does nothing, I'm dropping this story, a pity ...it had potential, but the author is a complete idiot
So I got to about chapter 135 and these are my thoughts a coward survives a war against demons and spends the rest of his life in a library learning knowledge on internal power and every other aspect of strength and strategy. Starts off good but after a certain point I feel it loses readability due to 3 things 1. The changing of P.O.V's the author changes the point of view between characters too much so its just a bunch of fillers going on while I want to know what's happening to the mc for example something happens to the MC on chapter 128 and then there are 17 chapters of everybody else's pov before we find out what happened to him. 2. Extremely long monologues. For the most part the language is easy to understand but during some chapters three will be a 3 chapter long rant of 1 person basically talking to themselves. and finally. 3. there isn't a lot of clarity on how the world works or where things are like they mention demon invasion but they don't mention from where and there is also a month system that is weird as well as a really weird transition of time where something will happen and the the author will just insert random flashbacks to provide unneeded context.
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Revelar Spoiler For NTR fans, ride the MC's wife. I read it around 2014 or 2015 and got massive ntr and his hopeless and his misery the mc who couldn't even hate his friend and could only swallow his pride and let go and pretend not to know of any. He felt that his time on battle more than on bed, so he forget and forgive his friend as long as he care his wife on bed
So far it reminds me of the korean novel named "I am the monarch". The premise has some similarity and highly recommend it who ever want to it something similar to this. This novel suffer from lack of a editor/proofreader. It's confusing when the author tries retelling about the protagonist's past. Just to name one example: In the first 2 chapter shows a flashback scene 8 hours prior to the beginning and at the same time he tells his 8 years before. confusing, I had to reread to confirm it. 😅
5 Star all the way, so far the story, character and world is of good qualities. Good English and stable updates, what more do you need? Read it now🤌
⛔REVIEW: Currently at 500+ chapter⛔ *This is why many says this novel is NTR: The MC has 4 friends in the academy named Kyle, Lisa & Helia. Kyle likes Helia but Helia likes the MC. After some events Helia & MC became a couple and married while Kyle was heartbroken but tried to be happy by doing playboy sh*ts. After some chapter, the MC goes leads wars and stuff while never having for time for his wife, Helia. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia but does nothing due to being bff with MC. While leading war MC is poisoned and only has months to live. MC thought he would die so he distanced himself from his wifey, Helia. Plot armor happened and MC learned how and where to find the cure of the poison. While finding cure, MC was seduced by another woman and they had s*x. On the other hand, Helia is managing the MC's land and having a hard time and her father died. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia is and seduced her. Helia gives in and they kissed and flirted. MC comes home cured and learns about the affair from his spy. MC just waited Helia to choose between him and Kyle because MC is feeling guilty that he f*cked another girl. Helia ended things with Kyle and chose MC because she learned she is pregnant with MC's child. *If you like Tales of Reincarnated Lord, you will love this novel. ⛔Highly recommended
Revelar Spoiler And Awesome story. Rich with lore and action. If your a fan of kingdom building then this is for you. ** kei(author has super great novels)
Read this when it was on RoyalRoad and it has NTR. NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
I liked the start but its too much jumping fore and backwards. It develops extremly slow but whether you like it or not is subjective. The grammar is really bad i hate to double check a sentence... ultimately i dropped it :0
For everyone saying there netorare there is none for a person who originally read this years ago n royal road there is none there is a girl who vying for the affection of the main character even though he is solely devoted to his wife and so the infidelity part come from that it not large but its their netorare isn't always the hentai equivalent it just mean infidelity but it been years since I read it so I dotn remember if they actually do the deed the books is great and I enjoyed it all those years ago to bad the guy start slowing down on updates and other projects so I stopped reading it I think it was my first major reed on royal road so good luck man happy to see you bacl
The story seems kind of good, but you have butchered it with the poor grammar. Sometimes I dont exactly know what I'm reading. The world background was kinda ok.
it starts out pretty good , but after that there is a very distinct drop in quality, especially in grammar and spelling . Additionally it starts including more and more Filler chapters. Would not recommend
Its not something very new, updating speed is not that fast but it looks to be consistent, english not that bad. All in all i would say this is a great book that the author can use to polish his/her skill in writing. Take your time, get used to the nuances, and please make sure to keep up the quality until the end. Dont rush it. This experience will allow you to write better novels in the future. Who knows? Maybe one day you will introduce something ground breaking to the genre. When that time comes, you will be grateful that you have good writing skills that milk the ground breaking idea to the top of the list.
Hey I really love your novels but its too heavy for the heart both lord shadow and this one. Its a good thing but sometimes its just too much, i dont know what powers you have but the sorrow and pains of your mc. we felt it too.. try to write a novel with a little bit of comedy ...
Reallllyyyyy nice 👍👍👍👍👍😁👍👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍🙂👍🙂👍👌👌👍👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👍👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👍👌👌👌👍👌👍👌
For people who want to know. So there’s no NTR but there is cheating on both sides. MC’s wife has a little affair wth his best friend while mc is away. MC finds out and keeps quiet. There’s no NTR cuz wife chooses the mc but she still states that she loves him and his bf which of course doesn’t sit well. She falls in love with the bf cuz he understands her more and mc wasn’t there most of the time. Ps wife and bf never have intercourse only kissing... which still sucks since I imagine a lot of people hate it when the main female lead falls in love wth someone else.
Revelar Spoiler warning for those like me. the mc first wife helia she will kiss another ... but not futher than that if you can stomach that your wife betrays you for moment then comeback (the reason is spoilers so I won't say it. but I can say he was away for curing his poison or he died) other that the storys good but you know I can't do it so stop reading it I kinda blame the author for wasting my time / you could have put description that you will put this plot and I expect you to redo it so stored reading to waste my time he guys I am not slandering the author (personal preference) when I read the novels treat as real I know just novel (but I feel if you accept such things. and you get used to it changes your mind, like if it happens to your wife in real world you would accept and just say its OK bullshiting that make your bond stronger not destroys it i will come you to try it ) other then that story development etc is worth of your time etc more that that if you can bare with it if you remove that part I think the story be perfect (I know nothing is perfect just decribs .... )or amazing ..
I usually do not leave a review but the dissappointment i felt from this novel forces me to do so. MC in this novel has zero control over the story development even though he is reincarnated. This novel is ur typical western novel with a hero, who only has struggles in front of him like; enemy in the dark, convoluted mysteries & past, betrayals by family friends wife kids, not likable MC or side characters. My gawd while writing this review i realize the story and charaters are sooo bland and boring. If you are wondering i have read up to 250 chapter, then i had to drop it bec i could not handle it anymore. The only good thing going for the author is World building however what uses does it have if u cannot even make use of it. The Titel does not fit the novel at all, should be rather ballad and tears of heroes.
I've been a huge fan of this story since RoyalroadL. Many nights were filled reading about Arial's journey. This story has worldbuilding in spades. Races, religions, nations, and history. That are fleshed out and not cookie cutter copies. I wholeheartedly recommend this story.
And when they saw the Duke becoming weak after his display of power, they King made a bold run for the king to strike him down but before he could get to him, there was a thunderous roar up in the skies that astonished everyone. Gaynor Arial bound dragon made an appearance for the first time descending down behind the Duke bring down a pressure upon everyone on the battlefield.
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