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I love this story, i have read it a few times already and it never fails to make me laugh. The story is well develouped and belivable, the characters hold true. I love it.
Even though I found the story confusing (I think that is because it is some sort of fanfic that I haven't read the original of), it was still a humorous read that I enjoyed very much! Thank you Author!
Well, so apparently this is a fanfic/someone's brainhole based off of a manga/anime. I had no idra. And it was still one of the most hilarious books I've ever read, so if that doesn't say something, I don't know what will. Aside from being a but confusing at first, it was really fun to read!
This is the best kid Kyoya fic ever!!! Especially love the scene where he tried to capture Reborn in his backpack, I just about died laughing!
Honestly just downloaded the app because I'm super interested in what happens next in the story and I am not disappointed! Kyoya's going to overtake the mafia in no time!
This story is awesome. One of the best and funniest (honestly it should be posses tag crack) Katekyo Hitman Reborn fanfics I ever read. You should be proud from yourself because of writing this great story.
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This is a rather unique story told from the perspective of a pscyhopathic child that always thinks he's right. It is way better than it sounds btw, it's fucking hilarious through and through. The thought process that MC goes through and those chapter end omakes are genuine gold. This is a definite recommend from me :)
This story is super funny and mostly crack that focuses on Hibari. There’s some story development, but it seems like it was made more for comedy, and it was REALLY good comedy. The writing quality is also GREAT, like it’s not some sort of script you’re reading for theater class and is an actual story. There weren’t any grammar mistakes that I noticed and this all seems plausible, like something Hibari would actually do if he was slightly more sociable.
Love this. It has made me laugh so much that is definitely a keeper!!!! Especially the omakes at the end.of the chapters they just make it all the better!!!
I don't how you made made this but this is simply the of the best of the best KHR fanfic I had ever read. I love it very much. It's amazingly hilarious 🤣
This is the funniest thing ever!😂😂😂 Kyo-kun is so ignorant and it’s the cutest thing ever! I love how he just steamrolled all over everyone’s ideas or responses. He’s just like,”NO. You’re wrong, I’m right. I’m always right, so I don’t care what you say.”
This is hilarious! The whole thing is a work of art that I plan to reread over and over again! I cannot recommend this enough! I've been dying since "fluffy firework!"
An absolute masterpiece! Though I wish it didn’t end so early I would have loved to read this until the end of their lives with how much it made me laugh. Old man Kyouya adventures would be real cute~~
It is a great story, I hope there will be a part two of it. The actions fit the characters well, and the Omakes at the end of each chapter just adds to the comedy of the 'main story'. I was laughing so hard for a lot of it.😂😂
I love your story! I first found it on Fanfiction and then later on Ao3. I adore your Kyoya. Chapter 24 isn't connected though. To chapters 23 and 25, I mean. Just wanted to let you know
I love this so much and I'm sad it's over. How will I get my dose of Kyoya nonsense now? I look forward to the next story. Until then. 😁👍👍
You did a brilliant job on this story! I find Hibari Kyoya as a character very intriguing and you have a very interesting take on him. I greatly appreciate how you portrayed him. I have read all of the stories you have with him as a central character and they are all good. Continue writing!
I really find this story interesting... Its enjoyable to read and... It's sometime quite funny too... I really like how the kids have such strong flames because they believe that they can manifest them... I really want to read about how the Vongola would handle Kyouya's army of Incendiary Defence users...
A Perfection!!! 😩😩😩 .......,....................................................................................................................................................
I love this story, i have read it a few times already and it never fails to make me laugh. The story is well develouped and belivable, the characters hold true. I love it.
Even though I found the story confusing (I think that is because it is some sort of fanfic that I haven't read the original of), it was still a humorous read that I enjoyed very much! Thank you Author!
Well, so apparently this is a fanfic/someone's brainhole based off of a manga/anime. I had no idra. And it was still one of the most hilarious books I've ever read, so if that doesn't say something, I don't know what will. Aside from being a but confusing at first, it was really fun to read!
This is the best kid Kyoya fic ever!!! Especially love the scene where he tried to capture Reborn in his backpack, I just about died laughing!
Honestly just downloaded the app because I'm super interested in what happens next in the story and I am not disappointed! Kyoya's going to overtake the mafia in no time!
This story is awesome. One of the best and funniest (honestly it should be posses tag crack) Katekyo Hitman Reborn fanfics I ever read. You should be proud from yourself because of writing this great story.
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This is a rather unique story told from the perspective of a pscyhopathic child that always thinks he's right. It is way better than it sounds btw, it's fucking hilarious through and through. The thought process that MC goes through and those chapter end omakes are genuine gold. This is a definite recommend from me :)
This story is super funny and mostly crack that focuses on Hibari. There’s some story development, but it seems like it was made more for comedy, and it was REALLY good comedy. The writing quality is also GREAT, like it’s not some sort of script you’re reading for theater class and is an actual story. There weren’t any grammar mistakes that I noticed and this all seems plausible, like something Hibari would actually do if he was slightly more sociable.
Love this. It has made me laugh so much that is definitely a keeper!!!! Especially the omakes at the end.of the chapters they just make it all the better!!!
I don't how you made made this but this is simply the of the best of the best KHR fanfic I had ever read. I love it very much. It's amazingly hilarious 🤣
This is the funniest thing ever!😂😂😂 Kyo-kun is so ignorant and it’s the cutest thing ever! I love how he just steamrolled all over everyone’s ideas or responses. He’s just like,”NO. You’re wrong, I’m right. I’m always right, so I don’t care what you say.”
This is hilarious! The whole thing is a work of art that I plan to reread over and over again! I cannot recommend this enough! I've been dying since "fluffy firework!"
An absolute masterpiece! Though I wish it didn’t end so early I would have loved to read this until the end of their lives with how much it made me laugh. Old man Kyouya adventures would be real cute~~
It is a great story, I hope there will be a part two of it. The actions fit the characters well, and the Omakes at the end of each chapter just adds to the comedy of the 'main story'. I was laughing so hard for a lot of it.😂😂
I love your story! I first found it on Fanfiction and then later on Ao3. I adore your Kyoya. Chapter 24 isn't connected though. To chapters 23 and 25, I mean. Just wanted to let you know
I love this so much and I'm sad it's over. How will I get my dose of Kyoya nonsense now? I look forward to the next story. Until then. 😁👍👍
You did a brilliant job on this story! I find Hibari Kyoya as a character very intriguing and you have a very interesting take on him. I greatly appreciate how you portrayed him. I have read all of the stories you have with him as a central character and they are all good. Continue writing!
I really find this story interesting... Its enjoyable to read and... It's sometime quite funny too... I really like how the kids have such strong flames because they believe that they can manifest them... I really want to read about how the Vongola would handle Kyouya's army of Incendiary Defence users...
A Perfection!!! 😩😩😩 .......,....................................................................................................................................................