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Eh? Why is everyone giving this novel and author bad reviews? Indeed this may not suit some readers and maybe the quality is bad but I can gradually see it improving itself. I like the confidence and braveness the author has to continue writing despite the reviews with 1-2 stars may discourage him. Its pretty rough at the beginning but slowly goes with the flow as you continue further so do give it some patience. Give this author a chance to prove the novel's worth!
I can confidently say that I have a pretty good understanding of the book at this point as I have read all 500 current chapters and the author has continued to improve over time and doesn't progress the book too fast nor too slow. The story is great for those that want something a little different from what is common and if you want something with an intelligent but not cocky MC
Death Magic Was Always An Interesting Topic In Magic-verse.Let's See How It Go.
Its a good book if you like changes that are drastic in what would feel like short chapters. Honestly I stopped reading because I took a break and now i cant find on what chapter I am but its honestly a good book. I am a pretty sad that a lot of characters from the early chapters have died though.
Revelar Spoiler
the strory is indeed interesting, the MC development is just Incredible, and we can see how much the author improved his writting skills over the chapters, the mysterious side has been well hidden till now, i'm looking foward to continue reading the future chapters, oh i also think that a translation would be great to touch a larger amount of public😊 thank you for making that story✨
The story is confusing at first, but there are noticeable improvements as you progress. I really like this progression and it is absolutely rewarding. All in all it is a nice light novel and it is not fair to criticize it as it happens in the comments below. I don't understand why people have to complain about the character of the protagonist, if you don't like this novel do everyone a favor and forget it. Nobody wants to hear your complaints but only constructive criticism, but your inability to do so suggests how below average your intelligence is. Author you are a person to admire, at least I do it a lot :-).[img=recommend]
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So far (ch 26) it is amazing. First time an Mc has been true to himself in front of women. This is one of the few novels where women can't force the self into the mc's life. Good world, good story and nice character design and development (like a daughter changing how Mc behaves, or how he can fake liking Sophie, yet hate her behavior internally)
I'm reviewing this after 50 chapters and must say its a nightmare.. Charecter development is all over places, world history is in shambles and the MC is like a new bee with advance technology but don't know what to do and how to do. I have tried it up to chapter 50 but now I'm done with.
First of all, let me just Sya that this is an amazing book. It might seem boring but its and amazing book the story and world building are extreMly good and shouldnt be Said otherwised. I might have thought it was a little slow but when i keept reading i realised that the book was amazing.
Personally, I love this novel and it was actually the first novel or even book that u fully invested in. From the way the story and world is built it takes into account everything and fits them together perfectly. Although at times the information can be a bit overwhelming I still recommend this to anyone who like a intricate backstory. This next paragraph does contain spoilers so only read if you're comfortable. I loved the first 440+ chapters are definitely the best and from that point on i feel it goes downhill. Thinking back on it the character development is amazing. However from the point Staxius died I feel the novel became more bland and it honestly hurts to see anyone but tge true Staxius to be the MC and only recently does he really make a return. It really was frustrating having to put up with it and constantly thinking 'When will he return?"
Looking at the name and cover i thpuhht it would be a good read but i had to drop it at chapter 20 its really hard to keep up with what is happening and very inconsistent
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It's actually pretty good slow pace story and SMART MC I like how he manipulate people xD hope this novel gets deserving recognition Good Luck.
I have read countless novels and have never rated one but this one is way too good for me to not rate it. I love the slow yet fast and detailed pace. It is an amazing novel and highly recommend it. Incredible job author!
The MC is very stupid, being the Heir to the God of death but doesn't train in any of Death's ability even though Death gave him advice on how to become stronger. He then goes and waste time raising a baby instead of training. So he wasn't able to save his hometown from getting destroyed and ends up dead and turned into stone by the princess. Story would have gone better if he went and trained with the God of Death after he died from the princess curse then return.
Nothing Extraordinary. The way this story is written is just too poor. Author is trying to create a mystery around Mc but Failed miserably. I don't know how this novel get so good review but with my experience ,I can clearly recognize a bad novel.
Kudos to the author for not using review spam bots to raise ratings tho. That I can respect . I've seen a lot of authors here in webnovel who would shamelessly rate their work 5 stars, ignore constructive criticism, and spam reviews to increase the rating. Atleast this guy is trying to learn.
iam no being or trying to be offensive but I have few points 1 the righting is ok I guess but the paragraphs are too long so that is a problem and sometime doesn't make any sense 2 I think everyone is the entire book have some brain problem or you forget. what you wrote like he doesn't mind discard his name but in the same chapter he feels bad? like WTF 3 it was a waste of time. good plot or plan could have been better if you did a plan or a glossary or background or something
Am I the only one spooked by the synopsis? I haven't read it yet but I'm seriously spooked right now. The author has no control over the characters and plot development? The heck? He is just a spectator?! So like everything is real. I don't know why am trembling right now. Am I scared or am I excited? I don't know. There's only one way to find out... let's read this! I hope I don't regret this
When I first saw the title and cover of this book, I immediately thought that it was a good read, and I’m happy that I read it because its super amazing and I reccomend it
The story is quite choppy. Transitions are lIterally the worse in the 30 something chapters I read. The story had potention but was not protrayed well.
it ok I guess I'm just writing because I'm bored so yea ,hows life? I hope its great ,if not I hope it gets beterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.Anayers
I love this story so far. Even though I have just started, it has already spiked my interest and am excited to continue it. Can't wait to see were it goes.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I can only say that story is Realy good and MC is super savage! ............................................................................
Hello everyone, author here. I'd just like to say thank you for all the support. Honestly, the story just went from having a few readers to getting much more. I know full well that I may not be the idle author - some may like how I write and some may dislike it. At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;p Only thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well. Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead. P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)
Eh? Why is everyone giving this novel and author bad reviews? Indeed this may not suit some readers and maybe the quality is bad but I can gradually see it improving itself. I like the confidence and braveness the author has to continue writing despite the reviews with 1-2 stars may discourage him. Its pretty rough at the beginning but slowly goes with the flow as you continue further so do give it some patience. Give this author a chance to prove the novel's worth!
I can confidently say that I have a pretty good understanding of the book at this point as I have read all 500 current chapters and the author has continued to improve over time and doesn't progress the book too fast nor too slow. The story is great for those that want something a little different from what is common and if you want something with an intelligent but not cocky MC
Death Magic Was Always An Interesting Topic In Magic-verse.Let's See How It Go.
Its a good book if you like changes that are drastic in what would feel like short chapters. Honestly I stopped reading because I took a break and now i cant find on what chapter I am but its honestly a good book. I am a pretty sad that a lot of characters from the early chapters have died though.
Revelar Spoiler the strory is indeed interesting, the MC development is just Incredible, and we can see how much the author improved his writting skills over the chapters, the mysterious side has been well hidden till now, i'm looking foward to continue reading the future chapters, oh i also think that a translation would be great to touch a larger amount of public😊 thank you for making that story✨
The story is confusing at first, but there are noticeable improvements as you progress. I really like this progression and it is absolutely rewarding. All in all it is a nice light novel and it is not fair to criticize it as it happens in the comments below. I don't understand why people have to complain about the character of the protagonist, if you don't like this novel do everyone a favor and forget it. Nobody wants to hear your complaints but only constructive criticism, but your inability to do so suggests how below average your intelligence is. Author you are a person to admire, at least I do it a lot :-).[img=recommend]
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So far (ch 26) it is amazing. First time an Mc has been true to himself in front of women. This is one of the few novels where women can't force the self into the mc's life. Good world, good story and nice character design and development (like a daughter changing how Mc behaves, or how he can fake liking Sophie, yet hate her behavior internally)
I'm reviewing this after 50 chapters and must say its a nightmare.. Charecter development is all over places, world history is in shambles and the MC is like a new bee with advance technology but don't know what to do and how to do. I have tried it up to chapter 50 but now I'm done with.
First of all, let me just Sya that this is an amazing book. It might seem boring but its and amazing book the story and world building are extreMly good and shouldnt be Said otherwised. I might have thought it was a little slow but when i keept reading i realised that the book was amazing.
Personally, I love this novel and it was actually the first novel or even book that u fully invested in. From the way the story and world is built it takes into account everything and fits them together perfectly. Although at times the information can be a bit overwhelming I still recommend this to anyone who like a intricate backstory. This next paragraph does contain spoilers so only read if you're comfortable. I loved the first 440+ chapters are definitely the best and from that point on i feel it goes downhill. Thinking back on it the character development is amazing. However from the point Staxius died I feel the novel became more bland and it honestly hurts to see anyone but tge true Staxius to be the MC and only recently does he really make a return. It really was frustrating having to put up with it and constantly thinking 'When will he return?"
Looking at the name and cover i thpuhht it would be a good read but i had to drop it at chapter 20 its really hard to keep up with what is happening and very inconsistent
thanks for liking my comment so here's a free 5 star review and best of luck in this book 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's actually pretty good slow pace story and SMART MC I like how he manipulate people xD hope this novel gets deserving recognition Good Luck.
I have read countless novels and have never rated one but this one is way too good for me to not rate it. I love the slow yet fast and detailed pace. It is an amazing novel and highly recommend it. Incredible job author!
The MC is very stupid, being the Heir to the God of death but doesn't train in any of Death's ability even though Death gave him advice on how to become stronger. He then goes and waste time raising a baby instead of training. So he wasn't able to save his hometown from getting destroyed and ends up dead and turned into stone by the princess. Story would have gone better if he went and trained with the God of Death after he died from the princess curse then return.
Nothing Extraordinary. The way this story is written is just too poor. Author is trying to create a mystery around Mc but Failed miserably. I don't know how this novel get so good review but with my experience ,I can clearly recognize a bad novel.
Kudos to the author for not using review spam bots to raise ratings tho. That I can respect . I've seen a lot of authors here in webnovel who would shamelessly rate their work 5 stars, ignore constructive criticism, and spam reviews to increase the rating. Atleast this guy is trying to learn.
iam no being or trying to be offensive but I have few points 1 the righting is ok I guess but the paragraphs are too long so that is a problem and sometime doesn't make any sense 2 I think everyone is the entire book have some brain problem or you forget. what you wrote like he doesn't mind discard his name but in the same chapter he feels bad? like WTF 3 it was a waste of time. good plot or plan could have been better if you did a plan or a glossary or background or something
Am I the only one spooked by the synopsis? I haven't read it yet but I'm seriously spooked right now. The author has no control over the characters and plot development? The heck? He is just a spectator?! So like everything is real. I don't know why am trembling right now. Am I scared or am I excited? I don't know. There's only one way to find out... let's read this! I hope I don't regret this
When I first saw the title and cover of this book, I immediately thought that it was a good read, and I’m happy that I read it because its super amazing and I reccomend it
The story is quite choppy. Transitions are lIterally the worse in the 30 something chapters I read. The story had potention but was not protrayed well.
it ok I guess I'm just writing because I'm bored so yea ,hows life? I hope its great ,if not I hope it gets beterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.Anayers
I love this story so far. Even though I have just started, it has already spiked my interest and am excited to continue it. Can't wait to see were it goes.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I can only say that story is Realy good and MC is super savage! ............................................................................
Hello everyone, author here. I'd just like to say thank you for all the support. Honestly, the story just went from having a few readers to getting much more. I know full well that I may not be the idle author - some may like how I write and some may dislike it. At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;p Only thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well. Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead. P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)