I Deserve a Second Chance

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LiLhyz

Sucker for romance novels here writing a review! Feel the FL's pain and hoping there will be some face slapping. Just hoping. Like how the story is being written and how humor is incorporated. I like how I can easily picture out the scenes coz for other novels, they tend to be wordy and difficult to understand. At least, that's just me. Great job Author! Keep it up. Excited for the couple's development.

LV 14

ealdgyth

I often avoid romances because of overused plots and tropes. But this has been a pleasant surprise. This story feels like a Kpop TV romcom -- one can almost see the drop dead gorgeous Lee Min Ho stepping out in the male lead's crisply tailored suits, amidst the glossy, light-washed scenery. Slice of life details further emphasize this mood, as one is drawn into the world of our heroine, Shao Yan. MC is someone every career girl could relate to. She's single, has just left a failed relationship, and is determined to start life over in a new city. Compared to her dazzling male lead, she is very normal, very average. Therein lies the implied plot conflict, how this seemingly ordinary everywoman, who aspires only to succeed in her job, is swept off her feet and becomes an unlikely Cinderella. Is it for real, or is she repeating old mistakes? This is not your usual melodramatic love story with face-slapping, emotional abuse, and poor girl-gets-rich man-and gets her revenge storyline. Conflict builds up slowly. In fact a possible antagonist doesn't appear until Chapter 45, and a back story about the MC and this villain is not given until Chapter 50. Readers who want more drama and action might not appreciate the lack of intensity, however those who prefer a light romance to relax to, a few chuckles here and there, real-life office drama, and fluff and snu-snu will enjoy it. Since it's only the middle of the story, and the plot is still developing, it's too early to tell how the story will be sustained. It's the main reason I haven't given it a perfect score. For now it's a welcome respite to see a strong and independent MC who is neither a ***** nor a dragon lady, and a leading man portrayed in a positive light, who is not a bully or an overbearing CEO. Grammar and idiomatic expressions can be polished, structure and pacing can be tightened so it's not dragging, but overall these do not get in the way of one's reading experience. Kudos to Author Gold_Paper_Crane. May your source of inspiration never run dry!

This story absolutely deserves much more than its current spot in the power-rankings! It's just so immersive and life-like that one wonders why isn't it one of the top story's within WN! Just read it and I promise you... the more you read, the more fascinated you'll get by the situations you see the MCs in, by the tears and joys you'd experience throughout the story, etc. This is simply a heart-warming story that deserves so much more! Let me also add... in case you gave it a chance in the past but didn't persist through, then I can just humbly say... It Deserves a Second Chance!

LV 6

sunny_city

Update: I’m in love with this novel. Not only does the story progress nicely, you even have wonderful nicknames to call the characters. By far the best one is a doting goldfish (in my opinion at least 🥰). Everyday I look forward to having a new chapter up (thank you for that author) and I can say that I would defiantly continue to read until the end. 🤩

LV 4

JesseJames

I LOVE THIS NOVEL!!!! I agree with the other reviews. Truly a hidden gem. I don't understand why it is not popular yet. Good job author. Keep updating pleaaseeee!!!!!

LV 6

devil_princess_07

This is a really light hearted and fluffy novel... If you want something light after reading so much cliché or roller coaster like novels then you can definitely give this a try, you will truly love it... Our FL is a divorcee and want to live a happy life again whereas our ML is attracted to her in their first meeting and now is pursuing her🙂 you will see lots of fluff and pink bubbles in every chapter 🤗 do give it a try😉😉😉

LV 13

marieseravin

I am in love with this story, its because, there is no step sister or step mothers who will ruin you in everyday. Our couple relationship progress is seem like in our live reality, soi think, you should give it try to read this story.

Love this story, so refreshing that there are no backstabing siblings or family members, a pure caring love, only the normal everyday dificulties of the beggining of a loving relationship. Can't wait to see where the story takes this love birds ... 💖💖💖

LV 10

_Sha

Really nice story, description is well paced too. Readers must enjoy this light weight novel. Fl is quite independent and interesting character. I like it. Good luck Author

LV 5

Vrinda13

This is very well written book. I can feel that author has put her everything in writing this book. Story, character sketch, everything is very well written. I am going to keep this book in my library and will support you in your journey. Good work author 👍👍 Now I am off to read the rest of the chapters.

LV 11

_Rain

This one is a hidden gem and I love it... The story is very interesting and it will make anyone fall in love with it. I'm keeping this in my library and will support you ahead.❤❤❤❤ Good luck, author🤗

LV 14

marjzach2012

This book made me feel thrilled and got hooked on to it. Yeah It's not the common CEO or kings/queens kingdoms type of story. It's the normal generation nowadays and it's happening in the normal real-life romance.The grammar is also very good. I love this story. And I would recommend it to the romance genre readers. Keep it up author! I will continue to read on this...

LV 4

ElleJaye

I love it ! More on to normal peoples lives. not the regular ceo or rich guy novels. Writing was good, Plot and as well as the characters so far. Keep it up author! :D (Review Trade)

LV 4

Jenjibread

I think the first thing that even stood out to me what that your grammar is on point (I didn't think that'd be rare but from I've been reading it's seriously a breath of fresh air). Like what you said, it's not a cliche novel that seems like it's set in a parallel universe but actually really relatable? That whole fangirling part honestly could've been some people I know I real life lol. Anyways, it might for a really refreshing read out here. Good luck!!!!

LV 4

JesseJames

Rewriting my review. This is really a romance novel focusing on happy ending. Every chapters are just full of fluff 🥰 It's interesting to see both ML and FL point of view. FL and ML are both mature adults so no more revenge or jealousy games like other novels. Try to read it, you won't be disappointed!

LV 15

Emmaleolo

This is seriously the sweetest story. No crazy revenge, bizarre plots. I’m loving it. I can’t wait for more chapters to come. Keep up the good work, author!

LV 6

tellynana95

When I first started reading this novel I was not sure if it will be something I would be like interesting in to read more but now I love it it really the saying doesn't judge a book by it cover am loving it more as I read

LV 3

Daniel_Eh_Gonzalez

I have been following this book from a while, I should say this is the coolest romantic book ever. The world background is just as much as needed for the main characters. The writing quality is great and the story just moves warmly making everyone happy. Just enjoy the warm Ml and strong Fl and I'm really looking forward to where the story goes from the latest chapter. This book deserves 5stars. Thank you for the book lovely Author❤️ I'm wondering are you a male or female? Hehe just saying

LV 4

Angel_Siho

Sweet story . FL is a strong character . She got betrayed before by her father , and ex husband . ML is sweet , and caring for FL . Can’t wait for the next development .