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Nicholas Phire was sentenced to life in prison without any possibility of parole. Because of the mercy of a lonely prison guard, a new world is presented to him. Nix finds himself in the Virtual World of Colonial with a hundred-year assignment as Lifestyle player in the Gladis Hub. Will Nix stay in the remote village located on the polar Ice Cap? Or does adventure await for the man whose life was supposed to be over?
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Escreva uma avaliaçãoI have really enjoyed this novel the main MC is very likeable with lots of funny quips thrown in here and there. The novel gives a lot of detail about the world and the various races that inhabit it and the story is entertaining with many likeable side characters and quests definitely worth a read.
Absolutely awesome book. Highly recommend. Great story that is easy to follow and has a great plot.
This book has been absolutely brilliant so far, with an immersive story and no pointless unnecessary conflicts. The mc is smart and refreshing, especially with all the annoying mc’s in other books. I recommend this book to any world fantasy lovers (as well as everyone else) 😁
Really big fan of this story so far! It is very well written without too many noticeable mistakes, has an interesting no nonsense MC (with a good excuse for why he would be living in a game world 24/7), and the game world itself is extremely enticing already with plenty of room to grow as the story progresses. Can't wait to read more!
This is a story that follows MC Nicholas Phire, an arsonist dubbed 'Phoenix Phire by the media. I like the start in the Gladis Hub. The game Colonial has potential, I like the choices involved in making a real custom character.
Pretty dang good. The RL prologue introducing the character and why he ends up playing the game is brief but believable, its refreshing to see neither the lazy cliche "Everyone has enough disposable income to spend every day playing a game" nor filler chapters dedicated to RL just to make the story "realistic". Character developments good so far too, slow in a good way, where we are told an appropriate amount of information about a character for how long the MC has known them (there's no "you saved my life so here's my entire life history and also my unending loyalty). Not to say the MC doesn't quickly form relationships(in a way that fits his character/personality), but so far everything has been progressing naturally. The only criticisms I have are not knowing much about the MC's history, but I'm only on chp 14 so it could still be coming, or it might be more of a gradual reveal, either way I'd like to know just a bit more early on. Also, the world is large, and location names are kinda hard to keep track of. If anyone is thrown by other reviews complaining about the sex, know it isn't really described explicitly(so far I've only seen 1 short instance describing the sex, 95% of the time its "they kissed and went to the bedroom", end paragraph, then "After an enjoyable night MC woke up" and its right back to the story). Also wouldn't describe it as "harem", he's not collecting girls for his adventuring party or anything, it's more like he's a warm, passionate guy(see fire affinity), and having casual sex in a no-risk virtual world fits his and others characters.
The premise is a mc who is a killer n arsonist and goes into game and becomes a tailor and makes undergarments for women... Coincidentally meets only women and tries to befriend them all so he can hook up with someone....virgin stuff....i read that the first 30chapters are like that amd after that comes the real story...so i have to put myself read all that harem **** ? No thanks...either delete them or use them as a separate story lol...
This book gets better and better every time I read it my only real complaint is that there isn't more for me to read in the first place I mean I don't enjoy the fact that almost every woman he meets seems to want to have sex with him after knowing him for less than an hour but it's honestly gotten a lot better since around chapter 20 ish
Extremely freaking addicting I ended up using all my saved up SS and fast passes that I'm out now. It's different from others as it doesnt bother much with lvl
Haven't read to much of this one, just started out but I need to say: great f*cking story mate! Love the MC and it feels like a fresh take on the classic vrmmorpg genre. Hope it stays as good as it is up until now. Gonna continue to read, if my review should change i'll Update in the comments. Would definitely recommend!
7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way? Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information. Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating. Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it. Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno. Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original. World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.
I don't know what to say .... how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player the one star missing from world background you could have done better 2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like (any name) gender npc or player health / mana etc. there is no need for skills .... just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to do to make easier to understand the plot story its OK etc summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction like confused what's happening in novel I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing) other than that it very excellent as you cans see from other reviews
For a guy who was apathetic even when he's sentenced to death became a warm goody good guy as soon as he play the game? what's up with flirting around with all these npc? its like he's hitting on to every woman he comes across.. MCs character can change, but shouldn't there be a transition period !here it happened instantaneously. what's wrong with MC to drop his advantages (dude is flame talent but won't train it?? )There's these random characters popping up without propet introduction too. plus what's wrong with his levels? isn't the prisoners supposed to be beta players !how come there are others with higher levels ! too many inconsistencies for me. i think it's not my cup of tea. l did liked the concept though. i don't know whether the story gets better in further chapters(i only read up to 23, so this can be considered only as a first impression). nice attempt bro. really appreciate your efforts.
Revelar SpoilerThe Adult Content tag should be removed since the explicit scenes have been removed. Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos
Very good!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Very good!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Very good!!
This is my favorite story on Webnovel, and one of my favorites over all. That's saying something since I've read thousands of books not including Webnovel, royal road, or other serial sources. I highly recommend this story if you have any interest in litrpg, videogames, it just fantasy in general. Definitely worth the coins, spirit stones, fast passes, etc.
At first it was a little slow for me to understand but around chapter 20 I figured stuff out and now I'm addicted to it binge read all 180 something chapters in one go did nothing but read all day
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Cant wait for more and this amazing world just keeps getting better every time a new chapter drops he can't wait to see what's coming next... the story has drama humor action adventure learning and growth it's pretty well edited and overall it's easy to enjoy the characters what more can you ask for in a book
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Well written. The characters are relatable even though they are made up. The MC is thank god also unique. After reading stories that are near copies of each other, reading this, has been very refreshing and fun. I'm not disappointed for spending money on this story