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- Qualidade de Escrita
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- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Although this is a low rating, it is not a slander. I really think this novel has a lot of potential, but it does need some more work. Like in the character development like telling their characteristics, their hobbies, and their likes and hates. About World background: There isn't much explanation about what year it is and what type of period, if it is on earth or mars. Story development is smooth, but needs more text in the chapter to make it more interesting as this is just an introduction that needs some work. Writing Quality is not bad, but needs some more grammatical changes. - Your devoted reader Axel
Although this is a low rating, it is not a slander. I really think this novel has a lot of potential, but it does need some more work. Like in the character development like telling their characteristics, their hobbies, and their likes and hates. About World background: There isn't much explanation about what year it is and what type of period, if it is on earth or mars. Story development is smooth, but needs more text in the chapter to make it more interesting as this is just an introduction that needs some work. Writing Quality is not bad, but needs some more grammatical changes. - Your devoted reader Axel