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Novel is boring, stupid and annoying. MC is just too strong yet doesn't even use his strength much because he's afraid of getting killed because of it. His greatest enemy from the early stages is a woman who "played" with his heart and left him for dead. He constantly wants to kill her even though he's supposed to be more "matured" after the incident according to the author.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Rewrite of a **** novel. Original has few hundred chapters. The original by 2nd chapter he has recovered all abilities lost with nothing showing struggle which prevents people to relate By 8th chapter lost count how many times it is said that the payment of his crime is to much but not stating the price at all. by 8th he has shown all his abilities to his family just because he can't tolerate an insult even when he knows it's all his fault and they want him dead. By 8th chapter it talks about how powerful 9th level is yet he is only 5th not much difference. If you want to show differense in power you need minimum of 1 entire realm Keeps saying level this level that its MEANT TO BE REALMS, reason for that is 1st realm 1st level, 1st realm 2nd level makes more sense.. Why the **** would he be shocked at body strengthening even in ancient times on earth without cultivation it was a major thing. Original is Terrible writing -i think author copied all the cliches etc used it as reference to make a timeline and only edited it to create the story To fast paced for original so much so you are not able to relate to character.
good stories to read it has a good plot and a good main charachter just wish it woold be faster and longer chapter but generalely it is a good storie to read ans i recomend it to all my freinds.
The story starts interestingly. However it is too hard to judge with this little number of chapters. It maybe not the typical Mc however I am still not sure.
The Author needs to work a bit in the novel. The World BG and Character development can be more specific and describing a character will help (According to me). Overall it's just fine and just needs continuous work
I am a big fan of Eastern Fantasies and I just wanna read and read and read. This one was a good EF novel. I gave Writing Quality (4/5) Stability of Updating (5/5) Story Development (4/5) Character Design (4/5) and World Background (5/5)
I am basically a fan of Video Games Genre novel but I loved this one. It has a nice plot in Yanheaven where the protagonist Yang Qi belongs from a powerful clan but loses everything in the first ch. It's good but the author really needs to do something on Daoist terms.
Hey, I just gave you 2 power stones. I want the Author to keep updating the novel and if you don't then I am gonna kill ya!!! Sorry just joking. I just mean its awesome and keep the good work up you are doing well.
It's my first time on WebNovel as I am a novel geek my friend recommended this app. I saw this book in Eastern Fantasy Genre and I started reading it. I struck at some terms but overall everything is cool and I hope that the Author-Cum-Translator keep updating the novel
This book, it gave me a hard-on and I read like crazy. I was just flipping the pages and reading all the content. I am giving 4.8 ratings as I need to be assured that the Author keeps updating this book and then I will surely re-review the novel
Wow!!! Cool novel really. I mean the concept is awesome and that killing the Protagonist in the first chap got me goosebumps. I hope the stability of update will be regular.
The topic is interesting and everything is smooth and yeah I loved it! Really nice piece of work, just some of the Daoist terms create a mess. But, Overall It's very nice and I expect more from the Author.
This story is really nice... In the first chapter only the Main Character was like killed but... Sorry no spoilers... Read it yourself and find out what's it all about
Growth M.C good story but……….. But M.C. Is dumb as a block of ice. Got abandoned mommy says prove urself n distinguish urself on this plane for her approval. There he goes n wags his tail like a dog. Not to say he had just gone along with others plans for himself. M. C lacks grit, anger,rancor. Typical gotta find hos mommy n daddy novel
Novel is boring, stupid and annoying. MC is just too strong yet doesn't even use his strength much because he's afraid of getting killed because of it. His greatest enemy from the early stages is a woman who "played" with his heart and left him for dead. He constantly wants to kill her even though he's supposed to be more "matured" after the incident according to the author.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Rewrite of a **** novel. Original has few hundred chapters. The original by 2nd chapter he has recovered all abilities lost with nothing showing struggle which prevents people to relate By 8th chapter lost count how many times it is said that the payment of his crime is to much but not stating the price at all. by 8th he has shown all his abilities to his family just because he can't tolerate an insult even when he knows it's all his fault and they want him dead. By 8th chapter it talks about how powerful 9th level is yet he is only 5th not much difference. If you want to show differense in power you need minimum of 1 entire realm Keeps saying level this level that its MEANT TO BE REALMS, reason for that is 1st realm 1st level, 1st realm 2nd level makes more sense.. Why the **** would he be shocked at body strengthening even in ancient times on earth without cultivation it was a major thing. Original is Terrible writing -i think author copied all the cliches etc used it as reference to make a timeline and only edited it to create the story To fast paced for original so much so you are not able to relate to character.
good stories to read it has a good plot and a good main charachter just wish it woold be faster and longer chapter but generalely it is a good storie to read ans i recomend it to all my freinds.
The story starts interestingly. However it is too hard to judge with this little number of chapters. It maybe not the typical Mc however I am still not sure.
The Author needs to work a bit in the novel. The World BG and Character development can be more specific and describing a character will help (According to me). Overall it's just fine and just needs continuous work
I am a big fan of Eastern Fantasies and I just wanna read and read and read. This one was a good EF novel. I gave Writing Quality (4/5) Stability of Updating (5/5) Story Development (4/5) Character Design (4/5) and World Background (5/5)
I am basically a fan of Video Games Genre novel but I loved this one. It has a nice plot in Yanheaven where the protagonist Yang Qi belongs from a powerful clan but loses everything in the first ch. It's good but the author really needs to do something on Daoist terms.
Hey, I just gave you 2 power stones. I want the Author to keep updating the novel and if you don't then I am gonna kill ya!!! Sorry just joking. I just mean its awesome and keep the good work up you are doing well.
It's my first time on WebNovel as I am a novel geek my friend recommended this app. I saw this book in Eastern Fantasy Genre and I started reading it. I struck at some terms but overall everything is cool and I hope that the Author-Cum-Translator keep updating the novel
This book, it gave me a hard-on and I read like crazy. I was just flipping the pages and reading all the content. I am giving 4.8 ratings as I need to be assured that the Author keeps updating this book and then I will surely re-review the novel
Wow!!! Cool novel really. I mean the concept is awesome and that killing the Protagonist in the first chap got me goosebumps. I hope the stability of update will be regular.
The topic is interesting and everything is smooth and yeah I loved it! Really nice piece of work, just some of the Daoist terms create a mess. But, Overall It's very nice and I expect more from the Author.
This story is really nice... In the first chapter only the Main Character was like killed but... Sorry no spoilers... Read it yourself and find out what's it all about
Growth M.C good story but……….. But M.C. Is dumb as a block of ice. Got abandoned mommy says prove urself n distinguish urself on this plane for her approval. There he goes n wags his tail like a dog. Not to say he had just gone along with others plans for himself. M. C lacks grit, anger,rancor. Typical gotta find hos mommy n daddy novel