Reviews of LOST IN SPACE. A LitRPG Space Opera Adventure by dmitriyr2008 - Webnovel

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Stephen_max

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ahdamnit

Seems pretty generic, nothing really special about the story. Standard Russian author Russians are better than you crap. When the Russians win a tourney you are specifically reminded that the team is Russian. At least he hasn't yet started the USA bashing Russian Authors are so fond of. Gramatically it's pretty good for an non-English author, it has few errors that I noticed, most of which was poor word choice. The MC has no pride or spine. His team and Girlfriend betrays him and he takes her back immediately and completely forgives her after she kept their betrayal from him because she cares more about the game then him. Later he has to keep a secret from her for actually good reasons like fines, and while it isn't said probably jail time, and she doesn't forgive him. He gives in and sells his ship to his old team for money which he later says is what allowed them to win the tourney.

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Stephen_max

Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

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ahdamnit

Seems pretty generic, nothing really special about the story. Standard Russian author Russians are better than you crap. When the Russians win a tourney you are specifically reminded that the team is Russian. At least he hasn't yet started the USA bashing Russian Authors are so fond of. Gramatically it's pretty good for an non-English author, it has few errors that I noticed, most of which was poor word choice. The MC has no pride or spine. His team and Girlfriend betrays him and he takes her back immediately and completely forgives her after she kept their betrayal from him because she cares more about the game then him. Later he has to keep a secret from her for actually good reasons like fines, and while it isn't said probably jail time, and she doesn't forgive him. He gives in and sells his ship to his old team for money which he later says is what allowed them to win the tourney.

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