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- Qualidade de Escrita
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- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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A great start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
The storyline is beautifully written with compelling characters and a twist at every turn. The chapters are that perfect balance of predictable and unique to keep your attention without being too weird. A must read!
Hope I can see more of this, maybe a lot of rare cultivation for incoming babies!!! And the rare fantasy book like this can also be a must-read for all of readers!!!!❤
The story is pretty funny with a lot of potential for humor and adventures. I'm looking forward to reading more about baby Lei Cui's adventures haha
The plot is interesting and the writing style is great. The background is very well thought out. It's obvious that the author is putting a lot of work into this project.
The story is so good and interesting. The story make me to hooked up. Building up the plot is good, The way author designed the protagonist is excellent . Looking for further chapters. Good work...keep it up. Best of luck Author.
Guys check out this story and let me know if I should continue writing or not. Well I just started so you might find my writing very ******* style and trying to hard to write words or some words you may have difficulty in understanding if you are new to the Eastern Fantasy genre with cultivation bases. When it comes to weird names in the middle , just try and relating it to something funny. I'm gonna try and further improve my skills if you guys approve of my style of writing.
A great storyline, the mc is made to stand out and grabs the reader's attention and the world is described beautifully. There are also other unique characters like Lei Cui the baby cultivator xD This novel seems pretty fresh compared to others out there and has a lot of potential. Hope there will be more content in the future. Adding to coll, nice stuff :>
A great start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
The storyline is beautifully written with compelling characters and a twist at every turn. The chapters are that perfect balance of predictable and unique to keep your attention without being too weird. A must read!
Hope I can see more of this, maybe a lot of rare cultivation for incoming babies!!! And the rare fantasy book like this can also be a must-read for all of readers!!!!❤
The story is pretty funny with a lot of potential for humor and adventures. I'm looking forward to reading more about baby Lei Cui's adventures haha
The plot is interesting and the writing style is great. The background is very well thought out. It's obvious that the author is putting a lot of work into this project.
The story is so good and interesting. The story make me to hooked up. Building up the plot is good, The way author designed the protagonist is excellent . Looking for further chapters. Good work...keep it up. Best of luck Author.
Guys check out this story and let me know if I should continue writing or not. Well I just started so you might find my writing very ******* style and trying to hard to write words or some words you may have difficulty in understanding if you are new to the Eastern Fantasy genre with cultivation bases. When it comes to weird names in the middle , just try and relating it to something funny. I'm gonna try and further improve my skills if you guys approve of my style of writing.
A great storyline, the mc is made to stand out and grabs the reader's attention and the world is described beautifully. There are also other unique characters like Lei Cui the baby cultivator xD This novel seems pretty fresh compared to others out there and has a lot of potential. Hope there will be more content in the future. Adding to coll, nice stuff :>