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It's really good for a fanfiction, like it. It's better than your naruto fanfic (maybe cause im tired of naruto). Hope you don't drop it...
It was interesting but the relationship with the mother is so gross plus unrealistic as hes only been there two months... Please say that she is not her child before they do it... Also books on Haitus which is why its not four stars which I wouldve done.
Man you should continue this fan fiction its so good. Maybe 1chap/day or week its okay so please ...... Continue this hmm hmmm hmmm hmmmm hhmmm hhhmmm hhhmmmm hhhjmmm hmja7whwisbs
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It's really good for a fanfiction, like it. It's better than your naruto fanfic (maybe cause im tired of naruto). Hope you don't drop it...
It was interesting but the relationship with the mother is so gross plus unrealistic as hes only been there two months... Please say that she is not her child before they do it... Also books on Haitus which is why its not four stars which I wouldve done.
Man you should continue this fan fiction its so good. Maybe 1chap/day or week its okay so please ...... Continue this hmm hmmm hmmm hmmmm hhmmm hhhmmm hhhmmmm hhhjmmm hmja7whwisbs
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