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kinda confusing at times could be way better the author needs an editor but he might have gotten one by now since I'm only on like chapter 40 so yea don't take my word on it in the later chapters because this story just may become ultimate trash so don't read it if you don't want a kinda weird mc who say weird things I personally appreciate everything the mc say because it kind groovy you'll get why I used groovy when u read the book so thankyou for wasting time reading this when u could've been reading the story🖕
At the beginning the plot was great but start at the middle the plot got a lot darker then boom bye bye..........,.....,.......................
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Okay I had hopes for this but man I can’t even get past the first few chapters with the writing, I won’t bash because idk if this was your first novel but what dude says grovey every other sentence, who called themselves papa like wtf mate
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Not the worst. The MC is pretty annoying in my opinion, but meh...... I'm assuming it gets better but from what i've read it's about what i rate it
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Once you get past the cool word that he nails into the ground and turns into the most annoying ever. It becomes a very good story, has great characters and world. Truly love how the author has moved away from cannon in this story and merged two great stories, well actually more like three into one story. I truly hope the author comes back and finishes this story, it is well worth it.
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It was kinda bad in the beginning and the word groovy really pisses me off but then it fades out and the writing improves the are multiple characters but the author does a wonderful job of developing them as a group while also keeping them separate characters i love this and I really hope it comes back.
I am no Doctor, but reading this, kept Carona away Thanks, cant wait for the new update, is really good read as you read it, you can see how he grown by not saying the magic word lol
Story is pretty decent but all of the slang is awful. I have no idea where the author is from bit the words "yo" and "groovy" aren't used often at all in the English language. Especially in books. The use of the words and those similar to them are what changed my opinion about this book. Because of these words, I have had to drop this book earlier than I would of liked and would not recommend others to read it.
This Novel is really GROOVY GROOVY GROOVY....hahahaha this word is repeated almost in all chapters that became annoying but you'll get used to it hahahaha this novel is great...apart from the groovy part everything else is groovy hhahahahahahaha
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The Story is amazing and while the beginning was a bit rough it got a lot better later in the story. The MC is powerful and charismatic and while he is a bit overpowered it is because he has yet to go against anyone who is actually powerful. A great read that I highly recommend.
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J wanna know what is going on with the chapters because I really wanna finish the book even if I have to start making it myself because it is to much for me not to be able to read it
Be warned this is a good fan fic, but be prepared for a character that just goes so many fcked up stuff. Like seriously... So I would warn you, because in the beginning its still tame, but it really gets too messed up later on.
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I love this series and am confused as to why it has stopped updating but this is a great book that expands the wizarding world in the Harry Potter universe while also connecting the Vampire Diaries and does it very well
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Writers said Mc wouldn't be OP at the beginning and it will take times like normal people.. It took less than 20 chapters. The MC is so annoying, the slang is horrible and the grammar is even worst. English is my second language and even I can't take it anymore. Author trade fast pace chapters for horrible grammar. It is a perfect example of quantity instead of quality. Characters are making weird choices and Mc is just a ruthless *****, not thinking about the repercussion of his action (not that it matters because yeah..plot armor and stuff). All in all it is just a teenager on a Power trip making the world his *****. I feel no attachment for him. I feel like the author should just stop for a while. Go back to the beginning, proofread his work and refine his story. It is not all bad but the bad outweigh the good by a mile.
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Wow seriously?....another Harry Potter story?...nice👍...keep going. This will be fantastic tail👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. I hope your book will be popular.
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kinda confusing at times could be way better the author needs an editor but he might have gotten one by now since I'm only on like chapter 40 so yea don't take my word on it in the later chapters because this story just may become ultimate trash so don't read it if you don't want a kinda weird mc who say weird things I personally appreciate everything the mc say because it kind groovy you'll get why I used groovy when u read the book so thankyou for wasting time reading this when u could've been reading the story🖕
At the beginning the plot was great but start at the middle the plot got a lot darker then boom bye bye..........,.....,.......................
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Revelar Spoiler Okay I had hopes for this but man I can’t even get past the first few chapters with the writing, I won’t bash because idk if this was your first novel but what dude says grovey every other sentence, who called themselves papa like wtf mate
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Not the worst. The MC is pretty annoying in my opinion, but meh...... I'm assuming it gets better but from what i've read it's about what i rate it
Very good when you get a bit into it. Hope the author comes back soon. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Once you get past the cool word that he nails into the ground and turns into the most annoying ever. It becomes a very good story, has great characters and world. Truly love how the author has moved away from cannon in this story and merged two great stories, well actually more like three into one story. I truly hope the author comes back and finishes this story, it is well worth it.
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It was kinda bad in the beginning and the word groovy really pisses me off but then it fades out and the writing improves the are multiple characters but the author does a wonderful job of developing them as a group while also keeping them separate characters i love this and I really hope it comes back.
I am no Doctor, but reading this, kept Carona away Thanks, cant wait for the new update, is really good read as you read it, you can see how he grown by not saying the magic word lol
Story is pretty decent but all of the slang is awful. I have no idea where the author is from bit the words "yo" and "groovy" aren't used often at all in the English language. Especially in books. The use of the words and those similar to them are what changed my opinion about this book. Because of these words, I have had to drop this book earlier than I would of liked and would not recommend others to read it.
This Novel is really GROOVY GROOVY GROOVY....hahahaha this word is repeated almost in all chapters that became annoying but you'll get used to it hahahaha this novel is great...apart from the groovy part everything else is groovy hhahahahahahaha
Revelar Spoiler The Story is amazing and while the beginning was a bit rough it got a lot better later in the story. The MC is powerful and charismatic and while he is a bit overpowered it is because he has yet to go against anyone who is actually powerful. A great read that I highly recommend.
Revelar Spoiler J wanna know what is going on with the chapters because I really wanna finish the book even if I have to start making it myself because it is to much for me not to be able to read it
Be warned this is a good fan fic, but be prepared for a character that just goes so many fcked up stuff. Like seriously... So I would warn you, because in the beginning its still tame, but it really gets too messed up later on.
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I love this series and am confused as to why it has stopped updating but this is a great book that expands the wizarding world in the Harry Potter universe while also connecting the Vampire Diaries and does it very well
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Writers said Mc wouldn't be OP at the beginning and it will take times like normal people.. It took less than 20 chapters. The MC is so annoying, the slang is horrible and the grammar is even worst. English is my second language and even I can't take it anymore. Author trade fast pace chapters for horrible grammar. It is a perfect example of quantity instead of quality. Characters are making weird choices and Mc is just a ruthless *****, not thinking about the repercussion of his action (not that it matters because yeah..plot armor and stuff). All in all it is just a teenager on a Power trip making the world his *****. I feel no attachment for him. I feel like the author should just stop for a while. Go back to the beginning, proofread his work and refine his story. It is not all bad but the bad outweigh the good by a mile.
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Wow seriously?....another Harry Potter story?...nice👍...keep going. This will be fantastic tail👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. I hope your book will be popular.
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