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He kenapa fanfic one Piece selalu memanfaatkan backstory kanon ya kayak nanti ke Alabasta atau pulau langit dan lain lain g ada originalnya gitu kek gimanah gitu mending MC itu ga usah terlibat dalam kanon atau ngganggu awak topi jerami jangan nganggu petualangan strawhat mending cari petualangan loh sendiri buat plot sendiri ga usah pakek backstory kanon karna itu malah bikin bosen dan jangan buat mc pencari harem karna itu g cocok sama anime kek one Piece gini enaknya dibikin romance tanpa harem karna harem butuh otak novelis terkenal aja yang bisa buat pas kalau amatir bikin harem malah bikin runyam ceritanya
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Lumayan buat mengisi waktu luang Latar belakang cerita bagus Karakter juga bagus Ada unsur misteri Ada unsur dewasa Overpowered Dll Baca aja sendiri, gue juga males ngejelasin Gue tau elo2 pada otak sperma jadi ga bakal baca ini ulasan -_-
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Menurut gw ceritnya udah bagus, kalo bisa sih ditambahin klasifikasi kekuatan tempurnya biar gk bingung .... Kyk 10.000 bp setara ama wakil laksamana gitu dah
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update trus thor jangan sampai di tinggalkan nih novel jadi sayang padahal nih novel sangat bagus gw bacanya dan juga teruskan haremnya hahahahhahah .........................................................................................
Yah kalau bisa updatenya jangan lama-lama, cerita udah lumayan tinggal kembangin aja karakternya, terus jalan ceritanya di kembangkan juga, karakter utamanya Juga di bikin harus belajar biar kesannya gak terlalu OP dan jangan di-drop yah.
actually the story is decent, but the writer makes things worse, like taking Robin when he can save his mother too, this is disgusting bro. the reason for not wanting to change the plot, whereas from the beginning he ate someone else's fruit it changed the plot, then separated himself from the woman to become strong, when the real reason was to find a girl, also there was no harem talk between them, the worst writer.
He kenapa fanfic one Piece selalu memanfaatkan backstory kanon ya kayak nanti ke Alabasta atau pulau langit dan lain lain g ada originalnya gitu kek gimanah gitu mending MC itu ga usah terlibat dalam kanon atau ngganggu awak topi jerami jangan nganggu petualangan strawhat mending cari petualangan loh sendiri buat plot sendiri ga usah pakek backstory kanon karna itu malah bikin bosen dan jangan buat mc pencari harem karna itu g cocok sama anime kek one Piece gini enaknya dibikin romance tanpa harem karna harem butuh otak novelis terkenal aja yang bisa buat pas kalau amatir bikin harem malah bikin runyam ceritanya
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Lumayan buat mengisi waktu luang Latar belakang cerita bagus Karakter juga bagus Ada unsur misteri Ada unsur dewasa Overpowered Dll Baca aja sendiri, gue juga males ngejelasin Gue tau elo2 pada otak sperma jadi ga bakal baca ini ulasan -_-
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ulasan anda sangat diperlukan................................................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler Menurut gw ceritnya udah bagus, kalo bisa sih ditambahin klasifikasi kekuatan tempurnya biar gk bingung .... Kyk 10.000 bp setara ama wakil laksamana gitu dah
Asuu7uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhjhfffdvbbbvcxxxvbnkmbcxxddfvbjknbvccxdd
Revelar Spoiler update trus thor jangan sampai di tinggalkan nih novel jadi sayang padahal nih novel sangat bagus gw bacanya dan juga teruskan haremnya hahahahhahah .........................................................................................
Yah kalau bisa updatenya jangan lama-lama, cerita udah lumayan tinggal kembangin aja karakternya, terus jalan ceritanya di kembangkan juga, karakter utamanya Juga di bikin harus belajar biar kesannya gak terlalu OP dan jangan di-drop yah.
actually the story is decent, but the writer makes things worse, like taking Robin when he can save his mother too, this is disgusting bro. the reason for not wanting to change the plot, whereas from the beginning he ate someone else's fruit it changed the plot, then separated himself from the woman to become strong, when the real reason was to find a girl, also there was no harem talk between them, the worst writer.