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author friend ... if ever there was a novel that should not have been abandoned for any reason, it was this ... I urgently ask God author, creator of this jewel, to keep writing !!!
just a copycat for the other original yandere disciple ... so dont get hype up if you think yoi will get something new. i mean, its literally the same thing
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I don't usually like harem stories but this is one of the best reads I had. A pity it's been dropped but still thank you for giving us the experience of reading such a great work.
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Honestly one of the best books I’ve read on this platform. Though it’s a shame it had to be dropped I commend the author for their efforts.
People will do anything, no matter how absurd, in order to avoid facing their own souls. One does not become enlightened by imagining figures of light, but by making the darkness conscious. Carl Jung, Psychology and Alchemy (Collected Works 12)
As a petty and gruesome person, I really want to have other people read this story even if just because I also feel terrible about it being dropped, but I would also like to register that I think the author has a great future in writing and he is a funny and intelligent person in the realm of writing if I ever saw one. And I just freaking read a horror novel, which was very good, thank ya, but his jokes made me smile and his characters made me care. I will prolly have some nightmares tonight, but I think it's worth it.
I know you wrote that you stoped writting because of RL issues but couldnt it be good to write atleast 1 chapter a week or month until your sytuation will be stable? Then you could continue to write more.
To me its a story filled with comedy and a tint of Yandere and more like the MC is likable and funny even with his funny quotes and he seemed to be like the plot armour and also he seemed pretty high spec and so on Btw I really want it to update PLS UPDATE!!!!
Revelar Spoiler
Hi feeling_tired, I would like to ask your permission to use your story's idea to write one of my own. I really liked the idea that you have presented in your story and feel that it is a waste to have it stop here, thus I would like to explore that idea with a story of my own writing. I will definitely credit the initial idea to you but would still like to know if you might be offended if I were to go through with my writing? If you are ok with it, please do let me know. Thank you.
Sad to see it go. Had an extreme anount of potential. Graet story development and characters. I sincerely thank the author for sharing this wirh us
the comidical aspect of the story is one of the best but all good things come to an end😢😢!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bro, it's too good. If you can, please start writing again as soon as possible. It's too fucking awesome!! This has got to be one of the funniest novels I've read, plus there is a story too.
Why???? Why author?! Just why must you break my heart?! It was such a good novel. I was beginning to like it and you dropped it. Now I'm sad 😔.........
another great fic just got dropped. One of the best i read recently. daaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeedddddddddd
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I NEEEEEEEDDDDDD MMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEE DON’T DROP IT COOOOONNNNTTTTTIIIIIIIINNNNNNNUUUUUEEEEE
Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed. By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters. Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage. If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go. Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
The books great, it's highly reminiscent of another book called masters smiles but my disciples scare me is less repetitive and has more intrigue and overall a better story.
This is a great story. At the time of this review the author has 'dropped' the story, which is super common for any story on this site that is decent-good. The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking. I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing. I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)
keep it up this should be fun but less pov please as if random pov it ok with mc pov lily pov n 3pov.....................................................................
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Read the title..... My thought: What an awesome story. Reading in progress ... Wait for me to edit this. Here some extra word Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla **: Free exp
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The only reason I am giving this such a low rating is because the author dropped the novel. It is a great novel, but I dont reccomend simply because he dropped in the middle of it.
Funny story with refreshing style even though there is still plenty of room for improvement. I especially like the fact that the main lead is a little funny in the head.
Just started reading it and so far it seems excellent, but I just wanted to say that I really appreciate the non mc POVs as they provide both a more serious viewpoint and excellent contrast to the MCs.
Wow, holy crap. This is some good **** right here. A comedic, satirical tale about a high level cultivator who dies and wakes up as his past self, getting to fix all the **** he did. And he does it the best way possible. Only issue is some grammar mistakes here and there, but you will not even notice them. Highly recommend.
nice work, i love the plot and make me laugh, its a must read if you have a hard day. right now waiting to see the wizard life and smack the face of the bastard wit plot armor XD
Simply a masterpiece. The writing style is great. The chaotic mc and the dynamic between the characters is amazing. It got me hooked. It's just a real shame it's dropped.
author friend ... if ever there was a novel that should not have been abandoned for any reason, it was this ... I urgently ask God author, creator of this jewel, to keep writing !!!
just a copycat for the other original yandere disciple ... so dont get hype up if you think yoi will get something new. i mean, its literally the same thing
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
I don't usually like harem stories but this is one of the best reads I had. A pity it's been dropped but still thank you for giving us the experience of reading such a great work.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Honestly one of the best books I’ve read on this platform. Though it’s a shame it had to be dropped I commend the author for their efforts.
People will do anything, no matter how absurd, in order to avoid facing their own souls. One does not become enlightened by imagining figures of light, but by making the darkness conscious. Carl Jung, Psychology and Alchemy (Collected Works 12)
As a petty and gruesome person, I really want to have other people read this story even if just because I also feel terrible about it being dropped, but I would also like to register that I think the author has a great future in writing and he is a funny and intelligent person in the realm of writing if I ever saw one. And I just freaking read a horror novel, which was very good, thank ya, but his jokes made me smile and his characters made me care. I will prolly have some nightmares tonight, but I think it's worth it.
I know you wrote that you stoped writting because of RL issues but couldnt it be good to write atleast 1 chapter a week or month until your sytuation will be stable? Then you could continue to write more.
To me its a story filled with comedy and a tint of Yandere and more like the MC is likable and funny even with his funny quotes and he seemed to be like the plot armour and also he seemed pretty high spec and so on Btw I really want it to update PLS UPDATE!!!!
Revelar Spoiler Hi feeling_tired, I would like to ask your permission to use your story's idea to write one of my own. I really liked the idea that you have presented in your story and feel that it is a waste to have it stop here, thus I would like to explore that idea with a story of my own writing. I will definitely credit the initial idea to you but would still like to know if you might be offended if I were to go through with my writing? If you are ok with it, please do let me know. Thank you.
Sad to see it go. Had an extreme anount of potential. Graet story development and characters. I sincerely thank the author for sharing this wirh us
the comidical aspect of the story is one of the best but all good things come to an end😢😢!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bro, it's too good. If you can, please start writing again as soon as possible. It's too fucking awesome!! This has got to be one of the funniest novels I've read, plus there is a story too.
Why???? Why author?! Just why must you break my heart?! It was such a good novel. I was beginning to like it and you dropped it. Now I'm sad 😔.........
another great fic just got dropped. One of the best i read recently. daaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeedddddddddd
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I NEEEEEEEDDDDDD MMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEE DON’T DROP IT COOOOONNNNTTTTTIIIIIIIINNNNNNNUUUUUEEEEE
Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed. By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters. Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage. If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go. Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
The books great, it's highly reminiscent of another book called masters smiles but my disciples scare me is less repetitive and has more intrigue and overall a better story.
This is a great story. At the time of this review the author has 'dropped' the story, which is super common for any story on this site that is decent-good. The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking. I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing. I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)
keep it up this should be fun but less pov please as if random pov it ok with mc pov lily pov n 3pov.....................................................................
Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us Return to us
Read the title..... My thought: What an awesome story. Reading in progress ... Wait for me to edit this. Here some extra word Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla **: Free exp
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The only reason I am giving this such a low rating is because the author dropped the novel. It is a great novel, but I dont reccomend simply because he dropped in the middle of it.
Funny story with refreshing style even though there is still plenty of room for improvement. I especially like the fact that the main lead is a little funny in the head.
Just started reading it and so far it seems excellent, but I just wanted to say that I really appreciate the non mc POVs as they provide both a more serious viewpoint and excellent contrast to the MCs.
Wow, holy crap. This is some good **** right here. A comedic, satirical tale about a high level cultivator who dies and wakes up as his past self, getting to fix all the **** he did. And he does it the best way possible. Only issue is some grammar mistakes here and there, but you will not even notice them. Highly recommend.
nice work, i love the plot and make me laugh, its a must read if you have a hard day. right now waiting to see the wizard life and smack the face of the bastard wit plot armor XD
Simply a masterpiece. The writing style is great. The chaotic mc and the dynamic between the characters is amazing. It got me hooked. It's just a real shame it's dropped.