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The protagonist has so many reality-breaking superpowers. What does he do with it? Enter the SAO game to follow the plot... author is an idiot. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Hello Mira Chan if you are seeing this post then please post a new sao fanfic or continue writing this one I know that last time because of the negative comments you stopped writing but u see I loved it very much and kept this story in my library from the start in the hopes that you will continue writing it someday so please .
Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya
I cant find the new one you said your going to write plz help I really enjoyed reading this one so yeah help me find the other one plz 😀😀
ME LOOKING AT SYNOPSIS OH MY GOD! LOOK HOW CLEAN IT IS! IM PRETTY SURE THAT ANYONE WHO LOOK AT IT WILL ADMIRE IT AND PRAISE ON HOW BEAUTIFUL YET EASY TO COMPREHEND WORDS OF WISDOM
jesus f*cking christ you guys are ridiculous. I get a perverted feeling frome the author? HOW?!? you've never met this person. hes an old perverted man? again how the f*ck would you guys know that. this could be a women at the age of 18. but I dont know that just like you guys.so stop sh*ting on the author. I get the ones who say theres no story and plot that's fine. but dont call him/her lazy. it could be someone that is just starting to write and has no idea what he/she is doing. and at the same time you guys could be right. but you dont know so stop. its rude and frankly I'm disappointed that I'm seeing these thing. fackin hell. also haven't read a chapter but here's five stars
In my own opinion the story so far is fine and well. I don’t see anything that leaves any big or major plot holes and to those who say using ‘plot’ to direct the story with the system then what about all the other novels in website that does it. The grammar is actually quite good and so far had little mistake. The story itself is starting off original with Kirito trying to improve his relationship with Suguha and later in actually helping Klein and his friends. Not many fanfic does that and instead just skip all that over to the immediate 2 year timeskip to meet Asuna. While I do agree that the personality could use a bit of a work with the help of dialogue but the fact that there is personality at all is a good starting point. Many novels or fanfic I’ve read just put in character A in one situation then oh wow character A gets out of it and the rest of time is spent basically monologging the whole stuff without putting in any effort to show the characteristics of a character. People complain about the lack of world building and all but while it would be nice to get one. It is not necessary to actual story as this is a fanfic based on media in which you should already know or informed of. You would not be here if you haven’t watched the show or even the first episode of SAO and you wouldn’t need much world building to actually understand the mechanics of the this world. Point is if you’re here then that means you’ve already watched the show and don’t need to know how the world works and if you haven’t watched the show then what are you even doing here. Okay now that’s done here’s what I find stupid. The author bashing. Like wtf. People saying stupid **** about the author here and there and judging the author from the way he/she write the author notes and he/she behavior in dialogue. Look everyone has their own different opinion on stuff and if you don’t like the fanfic so far then stop reading this and go read something else instead of *****ing around here. People keep on insulting the author and all and how the author is perverted or secretly a fat guy and all but that’s just stupid. Why does that matter much and I can’t see how the author is supposedly prevented by reading the story so far. If you think this is perverted then buddy you don’t know how far the rabbit hole goes. Now for people who’s judging how the author act with the ‘nyaa’ and all that. Why does it matter much and if you’re that disturb by it then just go read something else. Who are you to judge someone on how they act or what kind of persona they put on the internet. Like you yourself haven’t that before either in the web or irl. Sorry for the rant and all but I’m sick of all the author bashing and people thinking their entitled and all to demand things like they own it. I personally think the story is fine so far and while it could be improved on. There isn’t much of anything bad about the novel so far and I hope that it continues updating or moved to website such as Wattpad as the community there isn’t as terrible as it is here. Really should btw.
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Well, at least I enjoyed this book. ............................................... Waiting for the next update...........,...,............,...,....................,......,....... .
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Review should be about 140 characters so i can raise the stars of novel........mmmmhmmmmmmm..................... bull****ery .......................... randomthing blablabla.............mmmm.....m...mmmm..hhhhhhhhh.m... MIRA CHAN PPPPPLLLLLUUUUUSSSSSSS UUUULLTTTRRRAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
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Don’t listen to the haters this story is great just keep updating and maybe later on they will regret what they said. jdjsjsjsjjssjjsjsjsjsjsjsjdjsjjsdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdd d did. D. D d d d d. D. D. D d. D d d d d d d. Did d. D d d. D d d d d d. D d d d. D d d d d d d d. D d d d d d. D d d d. Dndjfjdbdbd d. D d dhdbdjd d d shindig d
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retarded writer -countless bad and mediocre stories lack plot holes - the absence of plotholes doesn't make a good story OTOH if a story has many plotholes on top of trash writing, story is less than trash
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Why do I feel like I love the reviews more than the story itself? It's weird but I like it! More reviews! More! More! Let's reach 1.0 Review Waiting for more reviews......
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The author has created an excellent parody of fanfics. By taking every cliche, every sin, and every self insert form of fan fic novels, the author has formed a novel, NO!!! A manifesto! That shows what true literary evil looks like. In all honesty i liked it, but just because i found it to be funny. Especially the authors thoughts section, that was fun.
This author I cant tell if he is really a kid who acts a pervert or an adult who acts like a pervert. Either, he gives off a very perverted feeling. Why? Pretty obvious. What is up with the nya nya thing? Is he trying to act cute? This isnt cute, its utterly pervertic and I can imagine an adult behind the computer smiling pervertedly while typing this story with his catchphrase nya. Storywise, boring+generic. Nth special. Wonder why its ranked so highly. Readers these days are supporting worse n worse quality novels
Anyone who is new here would be excited to find a SAO fan fic. But this is garbage. Pure garbage. An author who ruin a nice anime. Ty garbage author. Cant believe people give this **** 5* ratings. You are clearly in love with the authors nya. Bet most of the readers who support this author are a bunch of gu niang kids below the age of 12. GU NIANG AH GU NIANG. U KNOW WHAT IT MEANS ORNOT KAU BODOH. PUKIMAK KAU. GO EAT BABI LA SIAL
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HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED.
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It is good novel author...Don't listen who gave low review..it is just that their view or taste is different..Don't drop the novel author..i haunted you....uwawahahhahaha
Fk this author Wtf acting like some stupid kid Ch 11 author thoughts "There is a thunderstorm here and I am scared nya" Like who the fk cares. U think on this earth ur place is the only one with thunderstorms? No one needs to fking know whether u r scared of a thunderstorm. Who even writes such useless stuff in the authors thoughts. 1 word, a pedophile. Act ur age. I m pretty sure u r a grown man trying to act like a disgusting pedophile. Nya nya nya nya nya? Who the fk even keeps saying that. Pretty sure the ppl who vote and read this story are kids who enjoy the 'cute part' of the author, aka nya nya nya. Wtf is with the nya nya nya nya. Also the story is **** and full of plotholes. Wtf the MC is alr like fking op in the beginning whats the point. Every single chapter there is at least 10 nya nya nya. Even if you were a kid, a normal child would not even think of saying that disgusting phrase. Bs author Bs story
I’m going to imitate the authors. See the summary says don’t bully me and if the story is bad because I’m to lazy to actually think and right a good story with coherent plot you can leave and I will except no constructive criticism nya nya. This story is bad in way to many ways. First the main character of the original series is overpowered and does not need any more power. Another thing is the chapters are just copy and paste of the chapter before from a point of view that is almost exactly the same. The only difference is it glorifies the main character as a god who gets everything. Of course it’s not far off considering that the author made him a god. I’m mean infinity stats is kinda retarded even for web-novel. This story is bad in to many ways to be good at all and I know that the people who read this story are probably below the age of 10 and think that sao is the best thing ever or a pedo. Also nya nya gets really annoying really fast Nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya
This is one of those novels where you have to enjoy it and ignore those plotholes😉, just why are some so serious when reading novels and if they don’t like they review crap about it, just come on if you don’t like it then avoid it.
Супер,, спасибо большое 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃😁👌🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃Супер,, спасибо большое 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃😁👌🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃Супер,, спасибо большое 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃😁👌🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃🥃
The protagonist has so many reality-breaking superpowers. What does he do with it? Enter the SAO game to follow the plot... author is an idiot. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Revelar Spoiler Hello Mira Chan if you are seeing this post then please post a new sao fanfic or continue writing this one I know that last time because of the negative comments you stopped writing but u see I loved it very much and kept this story in my library from the start in the hopes that you will continue writing it someday so please .
Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya
I cant find the new one you said your going to write plz help I really enjoyed reading this one so yeah help me find the other one plz 😀😀
ME LOOKING AT SYNOPSIS OH MY GOD! LOOK HOW CLEAN IT IS! IM PRETTY SURE THAT ANYONE WHO LOOK AT IT WILL ADMIRE IT AND PRAISE ON HOW BEAUTIFUL YET EASY TO COMPREHEND WORDS OF WISDOM
jesus f*cking christ you guys are ridiculous. I get a perverted feeling frome the author? HOW?!? you've never met this person. hes an old perverted man? again how the f*ck would you guys know that. this could be a women at the age of 18. but I dont know that just like you guys.so stop sh*ting on the author. I get the ones who say theres no story and plot that's fine. but dont call him/her lazy. it could be someone that is just starting to write and has no idea what he/she is doing. and at the same time you guys could be right. but you dont know so stop. its rude and frankly I'm disappointed that I'm seeing these thing. fackin hell. also haven't read a chapter but here's five stars
In my own opinion the story so far is fine and well. I don’t see anything that leaves any big or major plot holes and to those who say using ‘plot’ to direct the story with the system then what about all the other novels in website that does it. The grammar is actually quite good and so far had little mistake. The story itself is starting off original with Kirito trying to improve his relationship with Suguha and later in actually helping Klein and his friends. Not many fanfic does that and instead just skip all that over to the immediate 2 year timeskip to meet Asuna. While I do agree that the personality could use a bit of a work with the help of dialogue but the fact that there is personality at all is a good starting point. Many novels or fanfic I’ve read just put in character A in one situation then oh wow character A gets out of it and the rest of time is spent basically monologging the whole stuff without putting in any effort to show the characteristics of a character. People complain about the lack of world building and all but while it would be nice to get one. It is not necessary to actual story as this is a fanfic based on media in which you should already know or informed of. You would not be here if you haven’t watched the show or even the first episode of SAO and you wouldn’t need much world building to actually understand the mechanics of the this world. Point is if you’re here then that means you’ve already watched the show and don’t need to know how the world works and if you haven’t watched the show then what are you even doing here. Okay now that’s done here’s what I find stupid. The author bashing. Like wtf. People saying stupid **** about the author here and there and judging the author from the way he/she write the author notes and he/she behavior in dialogue. Look everyone has their own different opinion on stuff and if you don’t like the fanfic so far then stop reading this and go read something else instead of *****ing around here. People keep on insulting the author and all and how the author is perverted or secretly a fat guy and all but that’s just stupid. Why does that matter much and I can’t see how the author is supposedly prevented by reading the story so far. If you think this is perverted then buddy you don’t know how far the rabbit hole goes. Now for people who’s judging how the author act with the ‘nyaa’ and all that. Why does it matter much and if you’re that disturb by it then just go read something else. Who are you to judge someone on how they act or what kind of persona they put on the internet. Like you yourself haven’t that before either in the web or irl. Sorry for the rant and all but I’m sick of all the author bashing and people thinking their entitled and all to demand things like they own it. I personally think the story is fine so far and while it could be improved on. There isn’t much of anything bad about the novel so far and I hope that it continues updating or moved to website such as Wattpad as the community there isn’t as terrible as it is here. Really should btw.
Revelar Spoiler Well, at least I enjoyed this book. ............................................... Waiting for the next update...........,...,............,...,....................,......,....... .
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Revelar Spoiler Review should be about 140 characters so i can raise the stars of novel........mmmmhmmmmmmm..................... bull****ery .......................... randomthing blablabla.............mmmm.....m...mmmm..hhhhhhhhh.m... MIRA CHAN PPPPPLLLLLUUUUUSSSSSSS UUUULLTTTRRRAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
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Revelar Spoiler Don’t listen to the haters this story is great just keep updating and maybe later on they will regret what they said. jdjsjsjsjjssjjsjsjsjsjsjsjdjsjjsdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdd d did. D. D d d d d. D. D. D d. D d d d d d d. Did d. D d d. D d d d d d. D d d d. D d d d d d d d. D d d d d d. D d d d. Dndjfjdbdbd d. D d dhdbdjd d d shindig d
😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😌😙😘😚😙😘😌😙👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👌👍👌👍👌 i suppport you mira-chan ................. ganbate🙌, first novel and everybody make mistakes so wrk hard
retarded writer -countless bad and mediocre stories lack plot holes - the absence of plotholes doesn't make a good story OTOH if a story has many plotholes on top of trash writing, story is less than trash
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Why do I feel like I love the reviews more than the story itself? It's weird but I like it! More reviews! More! More! Let's reach 1.0 Review Waiting for more reviews......
Revelar Spoiler The author has created an excellent parody of fanfics. By taking every cliche, every sin, and every self insert form of fan fic novels, the author has formed a novel, NO!!! A manifesto! That shows what true literary evil looks like. In all honesty i liked it, but just because i found it to be funny. Especially the authors thoughts section, that was fun.
This author I cant tell if he is really a kid who acts a pervert or an adult who acts like a pervert. Either, he gives off a very perverted feeling. Why? Pretty obvious. What is up with the nya nya thing? Is he trying to act cute? This isnt cute, its utterly pervertic and I can imagine an adult behind the computer smiling pervertedly while typing this story with his catchphrase nya. Storywise, boring+generic. Nth special. Wonder why its ranked so highly. Readers these days are supporting worse n worse quality novels
Anyone who is new here would be excited to find a SAO fan fic. But this is garbage. Pure garbage. An author who ruin a nice anime. Ty garbage author. Cant believe people give this **** 5* ratings. You are clearly in love with the authors nya. Bet most of the readers who support this author are a bunch of gu niang kids below the age of 12. GU NIANG AH GU NIANG. U KNOW WHAT IT MEANS ORNOT KAU BODOH. PUKIMAK KAU. GO EAT BABI LA SIAL
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HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED. HAHAHA, what now you bunch of lolicon morons. You got scammed by a fat old guy on your Power Stones. Additional 5 chap. When if reach top100? But now it was DROPPED.
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It is good novel author...Don't listen who gave low review..it is just that their view or taste is different..Don't drop the novel author..i haunted you....uwawahahhahaha
Fk this author Wtf acting like some stupid kid Ch 11 author thoughts "There is a thunderstorm here and I am scared nya" Like who the fk cares. U think on this earth ur place is the only one with thunderstorms? No one needs to fking know whether u r scared of a thunderstorm. Who even writes such useless stuff in the authors thoughts. 1 word, a pedophile. Act ur age. I m pretty sure u r a grown man trying to act like a disgusting pedophile. Nya nya nya nya nya? Who the fk even keeps saying that. Pretty sure the ppl who vote and read this story are kids who enjoy the 'cute part' of the author, aka nya nya nya. Wtf is with the nya nya nya nya. Also the story is **** and full of plotholes. Wtf the MC is alr like fking op in the beginning whats the point. Every single chapter there is at least 10 nya nya nya. Even if you were a kid, a normal child would not even think of saying that disgusting phrase. Bs author Bs story
I’m going to imitate the authors. See the summary says don’t bully me and if the story is bad because I’m to lazy to actually think and right a good story with coherent plot you can leave and I will except no constructive criticism nya nya. This story is bad in way to many ways. First the main character of the original series is overpowered and does not need any more power. Another thing is the chapters are just copy and paste of the chapter before from a point of view that is almost exactly the same. The only difference is it glorifies the main character as a god who gets everything. Of course it’s not far off considering that the author made him a god. I’m mean infinity stats is kinda retarded even for web-novel. This story is bad in to many ways to be good at all and I know that the people who read this story are probably below the age of 10 and think that sao is the best thing ever or a pedo. Also nya nya gets really annoying really fast Nya nya Nya nya nya nya nya nya nya nya
This is one of those novels where you have to enjoy it and ignore those plotholes😉, just why are some so serious when reading novels and if they don’t like they review crap about it, just come on if you don’t like it then avoid it.
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