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It's not really heavy on spoilers but I'll check it anyways. Also, this review was a lot longer than what I thought I was going to go for. But whatever. It's alright. This story is alright. Which equates to high to peak mid. Really liked the beginning, how he was over working himself and how Pete got out of that funk thanks to Felicia and the man, the Myth, the Legend, Stan Lee. Felt very natural and real. BUT! I got bored as soon as it pretty much stopped being about Spider-Man. Seriously he's a background character now. He's there to take up a room and warm up a bed at Avenger's Tower. I mean, you could show like, maybe a small scene of this dude catching fly-away pigeons and other small scenes of him doing random Spidey shenanigans, occasionally. I'd be happy with him simply saying hello to a civilian. Give the man more presence. He's being anchor solely by this naturally forming harem. Thoughts on the harem itself? I don't got much input on it. It's forming "naturally" I guess. As naturally as the author can possibly make it. I'm generally not a fan of harems. But it wasn't what I came for so it doesn't really effect my rating of this. Ah wait! I have one thing to mention about the harem. Black Widow. Her and Pete's relationship is a lost cause. To me. She doesn't fit. It's just how she's written here. In my honest opinion, I think the author did very poorly in trying to connect her with Pete. I love Black Widow. I REALLY do. It would have been interesting to see her connect with Pete. But I just can't see it happening without Divine Intervention. Which has already taken place really. I mean, from beginning to end, the only thing holding their connection together is the fact that Nat felt like she could be comfortable talking with someone who didn't know she was Black Widow. Fast forward, despite not really telling him much about herself and being far more connected to her team than to him, she loves the kid. I mean, seriously? That was a set up for being friends, minimum or maybe good friends, maximum. That. Is. NOT. Enough for this to work. It looks awkward. It makes the drama currently going on between them look ugly. Seriously, when cold shoulders were being thrown, I was like, "Yeah this is too much trouble for what it's worth. Move on bro." It pains me to say this but... You're better off sinking that whole ship and finding someone else.
Revelar Spoiler
Dose this fanfic dropped?, I hope not because this is amazing.. Author please answer me!
And now to enact the role of someone who did not fully read the synopsis ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// *Ahem* Is this a harem?
To the Author, As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Thanks- Reader!
Spider-man slice of life version, where the travails have accumulated to huge sadness and the journey to recovery. A good read, for those who enjoy a slow paced story with occasional violence.
Amazing begining but the story is just a meh… did not even in the slithest catch me im droping at ch80 now just feels like a list of things he is doing and there is like really nothing that catches you while reading like he made a ai at 6 but now its like completely controling his live and solving all his problems???
I want to know before i start reading this novel, is this reincarnation fic? Or somethin else. Please reply i need answer. Coz i cought intrest in your nov and if its SI id love to read ur work
Just Great .................................................. .. .............................................. ..............................................
I hope you author keep this story very good...........................................................................................................
Please do not drop this. It made me so addicted, that i have read it in one day. I would literally cry if you drop it, because this story is a masterpiece!
This is a harem. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
im very tired and i dislike this story read 12? chapters and its just not for me, plus i hate harems which wasnt put as a tag do i didnt notice it
Damn,this is a fine masterpiece . The character development is unique and fantastic. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH need moOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE. Happily wait for the author to get his mojo back .
This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read through this in one day, because it`s just so good. I can't wait for more. characterlimitcharacterlimitcharacterlimitcharacterlimitcharacterlimit
I dropped chapter 8 1 Peter /spiderman is to young 2 Natasha is to you g 3 fantastic 4 all to young I do like the perseverance of a homeless parker
Ey author u should give anguish/desperate mc in the beginning warning. Many people dont like that thing so they give this ff a low rate lol If u gave this story a low rate just because that than u look like some stupid people that give story a low rate before even reading a half of story
I like it but there hasn't been an update in awhile. The story has progressed well and it is longer and more enjoyable then more of the other novels. It has good grammar and spelling.
It probably would of been a four or something higher if it was still spiderman but its not. All this novel is now is the author just throwing prompts to use and asking if there good or not.The only reason its not lower then three is becuse of the thing i came here to read,spiderman! Now all the author posts are bad prompts his readers get excited thinking its finally a update on spidermans story but no,its just the crap prompts that aren’t even any good.
This is good. Really, really good, even if you don't follow the MCU that much. Highly realistic characters and thought processes with satisfying development and interactions, and Peter is especially amazing. The worldbuilding is great, and the storyline is interesting as well. I read this on another site before it closed down, and I'm really happy I found it somewhere else. Absolutely worth a read!
I want to ask before I start reading, do you have a lot of anguish? from 0 to 10 how much do you have? I hate anguish, pain and things like that.
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This is by far one of the best fan-fiction stories on Webnovel, and in my opinion in just plain general. Now why do I think this: Well the background development for the characters is like building a watch. Each of the pieces that are needed for a proper watch to be built and running, is what this author is doing. He spends chapters at a time to properly build up a character (important one) so that you can see the effect that this character will have on the MC. Secondly, story development; using an already build foundation, and connecting different movies (just a singular MCU) to create a exciting and intriguing plot line to follow. I honestly could not stop reading this. Finally, writing quality; Few errors that have a close to zero effect on reading this novel. However, in return it feels like you are watching a movie while reading. To make this a proper 5/5: If possible more concurrent updates. Thank you!
Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Story. Man can't wait for the next chapter man. Good good good good good Highlight of the week. Good good good good good good
Good story ..............................................................?......................................?...............................'.x.
It's not really heavy on spoilers but I'll check it anyways. Also, this review was a lot longer than what I thought I was going to go for. But whatever. It's alright. This story is alright. Which equates to high to peak mid. Really liked the beginning, how he was over working himself and how Pete got out of that funk thanks to Felicia and the man, the Myth, the Legend, Stan Lee. Felt very natural and real. BUT! I got bored as soon as it pretty much stopped being about Spider-Man. Seriously he's a background character now. He's there to take up a room and warm up a bed at Avenger's Tower. I mean, you could show like, maybe a small scene of this dude catching fly-away pigeons and other small scenes of him doing random Spidey shenanigans, occasionally. I'd be happy with him simply saying hello to a civilian. Give the man more presence. He's being anchor solely by this naturally forming harem. Thoughts on the harem itself? I don't got much input on it. It's forming "naturally" I guess. As naturally as the author can possibly make it. I'm generally not a fan of harems. But it wasn't what I came for so it doesn't really effect my rating of this. Ah wait! I have one thing to mention about the harem. Black Widow. Her and Pete's relationship is a lost cause. To me. She doesn't fit. It's just how she's written here. In my honest opinion, I think the author did very poorly in trying to connect her with Pete. I love Black Widow. I REALLY do. It would have been interesting to see her connect with Pete. But I just can't see it happening without Divine Intervention. Which has already taken place really. I mean, from beginning to end, the only thing holding their connection together is the fact that Nat felt like she could be comfortable talking with someone who didn't know she was Black Widow. Fast forward, despite not really telling him much about herself and being far more connected to her team than to him, she loves the kid. I mean, seriously? That was a set up for being friends, minimum or maybe good friends, maximum. That. Is. NOT. Enough for this to work. It looks awkward. It makes the drama currently going on between them look ugly. Seriously, when cold shoulders were being thrown, I was like, "Yeah this is too much trouble for what it's worth. Move on bro." It pains me to say this but... You're better off sinking that whole ship and finding someone else.
Revelar Spoiler Dose this fanfic dropped?, I hope not because this is amazing.. Author please answer me!
And now to enact the role of someone who did not fully read the synopsis ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// *Ahem* Is this a harem?
To the Author, As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Thanks- Reader!
Spider-man slice of life version, where the travails have accumulated to huge sadness and the journey to recovery. A good read, for those who enjoy a slow paced story with occasional violence.
Amazing begining but the story is just a meh… did not even in the slithest catch me im droping at ch80 now just feels like a list of things he is doing and there is like really nothing that catches you while reading like he made a ai at 6 but now its like completely controling his live and solving all his problems???
I want to know before i start reading this novel, is this reincarnation fic? Or somethin else. Please reply i need answer. Coz i cought intrest in your nov and if its SI id love to read ur work
Just Great .................................................. .. .............................................. ..............................................
I hope you author keep this story very good...........................................................................................................
Please do not drop this. It made me so addicted, that i have read it in one day. I would literally cry if you drop it, because this story is a masterpiece!
This is a harem. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
im very tired and i dislike this story read 12? chapters and its just not for me, plus i hate harems which wasnt put as a tag do i didnt notice it
Damn,this is a fine masterpiece . The character development is unique and fantastic. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH need moOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE. Happily wait for the author to get his mojo back .
This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!! This is gold!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read through this in one day, because it`s just so good. I can't wait for more. characterlimitcharacterlimitcharacterlimitcharacterlimitcharacterlimit
I dropped chapter 8 1 Peter /spiderman is to young 2 Natasha is to you g 3 fantastic 4 all to young I do like the perseverance of a homeless parker
Ey author u should give anguish/desperate mc in the beginning warning. Many people dont like that thing so they give this ff a low rate lol If u gave this story a low rate just because that than u look like some stupid people that give story a low rate before even reading a half of story
I like it but there hasn't been an update in awhile. The story has progressed well and it is longer and more enjoyable then more of the other novels. It has good grammar and spelling.
It probably would of been a four or something higher if it was still spiderman but its not. All this novel is now is the author just throwing prompts to use and asking if there good or not.The only reason its not lower then three is becuse of the thing i came here to read,spiderman! Now all the author posts are bad prompts his readers get excited thinking its finally a update on spidermans story but no,its just the crap prompts that aren’t even any good.
This is good. Really, really good, even if you don't follow the MCU that much. Highly realistic characters and thought processes with satisfying development and interactions, and Peter is especially amazing. The worldbuilding is great, and the storyline is interesting as well. I read this on another site before it closed down, and I'm really happy I found it somewhere else. Absolutely worth a read!
I want to ask before I start reading, do you have a lot of anguish? from 0 to 10 how much do you have? I hate anguish, pain and things like that.
............................................................................................................................................
This is by far one of the best fan-fiction stories on Webnovel, and in my opinion in just plain general. Now why do I think this: Well the background development for the characters is like building a watch. Each of the pieces that are needed for a proper watch to be built and running, is what this author is doing. He spends chapters at a time to properly build up a character (important one) so that you can see the effect that this character will have on the MC. Secondly, story development; using an already build foundation, and connecting different movies (just a singular MCU) to create a exciting and intriguing plot line to follow. I honestly could not stop reading this. Finally, writing quality; Few errors that have a close to zero effect on reading this novel. However, in return it feels like you are watching a movie while reading. To make this a proper 5/5: If possible more concurrent updates. Thank you!
Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Story. Man can't wait for the next chapter man. Good good good good good Highlight of the week. Good good good good good good
Good story ..............................................................?......................................?...............................'.x.
love this story wish it would keep going