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Ok so this story looks good so far. The updates are consistent, the grammar actually doesn’t suck(sure there’s mistakes sometimes) especially if you consider the fact 2 chapters are up per day. Overall the mc has a brain and can think, so far it’s good. Keep up the good fanfic author!
I can see that English is not the authors first langue as there are many errors which makes reading unpleasant. The characters and the story is good enough I feel like he could take some more time in the chapters and I feel that the mc is getting strong at a very fast rate.
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Good!!! Мне книга понравилась. Я из России. ............................................................................... ...............................................................................
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Overall this novel is a good novel. This novel is far from perfect, but what's matter is the development is satisfying enough to read. The MC is not some mindless people so far. Keep it up with the good work and develop the novel to more satisfying novel to read.
Yup One Piece! OP MC! I hope this is harem, but if its not i still like it though. Please dont add too much OC, its always make me wonder what face looks like when he talk. Just add Character from One Piece!
The story is really good, Character development is not bad, I find it funny how he already got 2 of the most powerful devil fruits in the world and hope you don't drop this novel because it's very good. You aren't like the other One Piece Authors that are like saying that they want Luffy to still be the Pirate King and they just wanna be the strongest or something like that. However your MC wants to be the Pirate King too which makes me happy. GOOD LUCK ON THE NOVEL!
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.....good fanfic don't stop updated.... ........good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated.......
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MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers...
If you are serious, I will support, but what's the thrill if there is one piece in the world that only focuses on the harem? One Piece is an adventurous world!
This is too early to make a proper review of the story, but it has potential, and I definitely look forward to more updates! I hope the story will include some romance, you don't see it that often in One Piece fan-fics.
Hye. Wow I'm first to review. It's story is starting to develop so I don't know about coming chapter. I hope the author will make some good chapter. I'm looking forward to it. Although the character name sound weird, I think everything is okey from my viewpoint because I like OP character. Brcause they can kick some ass. Hope this character will always kick some ass
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Ok so this story looks good so far. The updates are consistent, the grammar actually doesn’t suck(sure there’s mistakes sometimes) especially if you consider the fact 2 chapters are up per day. Overall the mc has a brain and can think, so far it’s good. Keep up the good fanfic author!
I can see that English is not the authors first langue as there are many errors which makes reading unpleasant. The characters and the story is good enough I feel like he could take some more time in the chapters and I feel that the mc is getting strong at a very fast rate.
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Revelar Spoiler Good!!! Мне книга понравилась. Я из России. ............................................................................... ...............................................................................
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Revelar Spoiler Overall this novel is a good novel. This novel is far from perfect, but what's matter is the development is satisfying enough to read. The MC is not some mindless people so far. Keep it up with the good work and develop the novel to more satisfying novel to read.
Yup One Piece! OP MC! I hope this is harem, but if its not i still like it though. Please dont add too much OC, its always make me wonder what face looks like when he talk. Just add Character from One Piece!
The story is really good, Character development is not bad, I find it funny how he already got 2 of the most powerful devil fruits in the world and hope you don't drop this novel because it's very good. You aren't like the other One Piece Authors that are like saying that they want Luffy to still be the Pirate King and they just wanna be the strongest or something like that. However your MC wants to be the Pirate King too which makes me happy. GOOD LUCK ON THE NOVEL!
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MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers... MC hardly ever uses his devil fruit powers...
If you are serious, I will support, but what's the thrill if there is one piece in the world that only focuses on the harem? One Piece is an adventurous world!
This is too early to make a proper review of the story, but it has potential, and I definitely look forward to more updates! I hope the story will include some romance, you don't see it that often in One Piece fan-fics.
Hye. Wow I'm first to review. It's story is starting to develop so I don't know about coming chapter. I hope the author will make some good chapter. I'm looking forward to it. Although the character name sound weird, I think everything is okey from my viewpoint because I like OP character. Brcause they can kick some ass. Hope this character will always kick some ass
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